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Who Do You Consider a Superhero in Your Life?

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Who Do You Consider a Superhero in Your Life? Bamboozled how I get here, standing, and still in piece. Finger counted of heroes lent me their support. Helping me to get up from a nobody to everybody. Boosting and cherishing me no matter how severe and broad I fall as well as countless support if I thrived. A gigantic gratefulness to all of you. It’s lucid to me that I can never exceed what you guys gave to me, towards to you all. Nevertheless I ought to depict as a good son, close friend, a lover and student. Embedding to your minds that I myself will never abandon each one of you at your gloomiest time. To my family, who had bestowed upon me the urge to succeed. Filling me with overwhelming energy as I proceed to my study and outshine. Who stayed at my domain on every time I had fluctuation in my learning, social or even my love life status. Onward to my friends, a group of obtuse mind that surprisingly I’m fitting in. A bunch of people who once never fulminated me on being myself instead joined me in my insane adventures and backed me against any of my adversary academically and socially related. It’s a great and annoying pleasure meeting you guys off. All my former teachers especially my English teachers, Individuals who served as the foundation of my wisdom. You all have exerted great efforts just to help me attain immaculate wisdom, with all the chastisement resulting myself to ripen as a learner and a decent English speaker. I can’t picture myself battling my classmates without all of your guidance. And for my lover, the most significant man in my entire being. An honest man who speaks sincerity, a truthfulness that moulded my maturity. The only person who believed on me every-time I second guessed my ability which made me felt special and needed. A vast distance encaging and keeping our selves apart but an unbendable love and filial connection is what I can give and a faithful man that you will receive. Adding all up with the the idols who granted me fuel, sense, to the person whom made felt that I am wanted and favoured as well as to the horde of people that accepted me despite how unbearable my trait is. Not a malarkey talks but I am blessed that I myself met this kinds of people out of eight billion breathing humans in this world. I am honoured with the connection that I made with them as I am certain that they are the best people that you could ever talk and interact with.
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Do You Consider a Superhero in Your Life?

Bamboozled how I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
here, standing, and
still
in piece. Finger counted of heroes lent me their support. Helping me to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
up from a nobody to everybody. Boosting and cherishing me no matter how severe and broad I fall as
well
as countless support if I thrived. A gigantic gratefulness to all of you.

It’s lucid to me that I can never exceed what you guys gave to me, towards to you all.
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Nevertheless
I ought to depict as a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
son, close friend, a lover and student. Embedding to your minds that I myself will never abandon each one of you at your gloomiest time.

To my family,
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who
had bestowed upon me the urge to succeed. Filling me with overwhelming energy as I proceed to my study and outshine.
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Who
stayed at my domain on every time I had fluctuation in my learning, social or even my
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love
life status.

Onward to my friends, a group of obtuse mind that
surprisingly
I’m fitting in. A bunch of
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people
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who
once never fulminated me on being myself
instead
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joined
me in my insane adventures and backed me against any of my adversary
academically
and
socially
related. It’s a great and annoying pleasure meeting you guys off.

All my former teachers
especially
my English teachers, Individuals
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who
served as the foundation of my wisdom. You all have exerted great efforts
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just
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me attain immaculate wisdom, with all the chastisement resulting myself to ripen as a learner and a decent English speaker. I can’t picture myself battling my classmates without all of your guidance.

And for my lover, the most significant
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man
in my entire being. An honest
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
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who
speaks sincerity, a truthfulness that
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moulded
my maturity. The
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only
person
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who
believed on me every-time I second guessed my ability which made me felt special and needed. A vast distance
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encaging
and keeping our selves apart
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but
an
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unbendable
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love
and filial connection is what I can give and a faithful
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man
that you will receive.

Adding all up with
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the the
idols
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who
granted me fuel, sense, to the person
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whom
made felt that I
am wanted
and
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favoured
as
well
as to the horde of
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people
that
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accepted
me despite how unbearable my trait is. Not a malarkey talks
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but
I
am blessed
that I myself met
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this
kinds of
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people
out of eight billion breathing humans in this world. I am
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honoured
with the connection that I made with them as I am certain that they are the best
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people
that you could ever talk and interact with.
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IELTS speaking Who Do You Consider a Superhero in Your Life?

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8 paragraphs
443 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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