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what are the causes of air pollution in big cities?

what are the causes of air pollution in big cities? 869lB
Air pollution is the most serious problems that we should carried about it We are can see that in the morning, we have to watched thousand of vehicles on the road. They are using gas and oil to work. these thing will be burn inside the vehicle, removed co2 outside the enviroment. Made the air polluted, increased temprate, . . . . but to fixed that problems, it woulnd be easy. we could change the gas vehicle to the electronic vehicle, using more locals vehicles, attemd people to using bike of something like that. we won't stop at that. Today, people are become less carried about the enviroment. that was the big problems, they just care about them self, alot of company want to get more profit so they always to not care about the enviroment, some factories remove alot of chemical trash to the enviroment but they don't make it clean first. It just a little bit fact about the situations today that i want to show you. the most impotant things we have to do that make a good look at the enviroment in side everybody. more respnsible, more care about that. Together, we could change alot of thing, make our planed become better in the near future! !
Air pollution is the most serious problems that we should
The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "carry"
carried
about
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it


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see
that in the morning, we
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have to
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watched
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thousand
of
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vehicles
on the road. They are using gas and oil to work.
Did you mean "this thing" or "these things"?
these thing
will be burn inside the
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vehicle
, removed co2 outside the
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enviroment
. Made the air polluted, increased
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temprate
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, .
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.
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.
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.
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but
to
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fixed


that problems, it
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woulnd
be easy.
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we
could
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change
the gas
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vehicle
to the electronic
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vehicle
, using more locals
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vehicles
,
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attemd


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people
to using bike of something like that.

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we
won't
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stop
at that.
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Today
,
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people
are become
less carried about the
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enviroment
.
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that
was the
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big
problems, they
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care about

them self,
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alot
of
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company
want to
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get
more profit
so
they always to not care about the
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enviroment
,
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some
factories remove
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alot
of

chemical trash to the enviroment
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but
they don't
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make
it clean
first
. It
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just
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little bit
fact about the situations
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today
that
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i
want to

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show
you.
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the
most
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impotant
things we
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have to
do that
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make
a
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good
look at the
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enviroment
in side everybody.
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more
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respnsible
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more care about that.

Together, we could
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change
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alot
of thing,
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make
our planed become better in the near future! !
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