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1. Where are you from? I’m from Viet Nam. I’m really love my country because it gives me a sense of comfort and peace. If you have the opportunity, come here to visit and you will see the cultural diversity of each region in Vietnam. 2. What is your hometown famous for? I'm an introvert, so I rarely go out. However, as far as I know, many people come to landmark 81. It seems to be very popular in my hometown. In my opinion, Landmark 81 can attract so many people thanks to its luxurious design as well as the variety of types such as gyms, shopping places, movie theaters, and amusement parks. 3. Where do you live? I live in district 3. Although this is not the center of HCMC. However, District 3 has churches and ancient villas, along with temples and many of the city's most famous street food stalls. 4. How long have you been living there? I have lived here for 19 years now. When I live here, I really feel comfortable because I have funny neighbors. In addition, the security system here is also very good so I don't have to worry about being burglarized. 5. Who do you live with? In the past, I lived with my parents and siblings. But now, my siblings have a family of their own, so I am alone with my parents. I hope to be able to do something for my parents before I get married. 6. What’s your major? My major is digital business. Although I have very little information about this industry because it has not been widely spread in Vietnam. But I believe in the future, this major will grow extremely widely 7. Do you like your major? Why? I like my major because I am very interested in doing business in the technology field and this major meets my interests and passions. I think this major will help me get a lot of foreign connections when I go to work 8. How many brothers and sisters do you have? I have two siblings and they all have families of their own. Each has 2 children and their children are very beautiful. I love to go over to my siblings' house to play with my grandchildren when I have free time. 9. What do your parents do? My parents are self-employed and are mainly housewives. My parents are very concerned about family, so they always want to spend more time with family than work. 10. Do you have a girlfriend / boyfriend? In the past I did, but now I don't. Because I think studying and working is the most important. I want to spend more of my time with my parents. 11. What do you do in your free time? I usually spend my free time listening to music and playing chess. Sometimes if my parents need my help, I am still willing to spend my free time to help them. 12. Why are you studying English? I study English because I see its importance in my future. If I want to develop my career in the future, communication with foreign partners is extremely necessary. So only English can help me with that. 13. What kind of films do you like watching? I like to watch action movies. It made me feel excited and there was a bit of drama to watch. Sometimes I also like to watch horror movies because it gives me interesting scary feelings 14. What time do you usually get up? I usually wake up at 5am to exercise and have breakfast. Although I don't like getting up early, but according to a study I read online, waking up early is good for health, so I have to practice this habit every day. 15. What time do you often go to bed? I often go to bed at 10 o'clock because going to bed early helps me get quality sleep. This will help me have more energy the next day to study and work. 16. How many hours do you sleep every night? I usually sleep 7-8 hours a night because as I said above only when I get enough sleep can I have enough energy to wake up early the next day to study and work. 17. What do you frequently have for breakfast? In the past, I thought breakfast wasn't really necessary until I had a severe stomach ache. Only then did I realize the importance of breakfast. Now I eat breakfast regularly and don't skip a meal 18. What are you going to do this weekend? I will spend the weekend to improve my English because I feel that my English is not very good. In addition, due to the epidemic situation, most of the amusement parks were closed, so I couldn't go out with my friends. 19. Do you have any pets? I don't have it, but my dad does. He kept hundreds of birds in one room. Sometimes I find raising a pet quite time-consuming, but my dad is happy about it. 20. What languages do you speak? I usually speak Vietnamese language because it is my mother tongue. Now I am learning another language which is English. As you know, English is the most popular language all over the world, so even though I'm very lazy in learning English, I have to try my best to learn it. 21. How often do you use a computer? I use the computer every day because it is a tool that helps me study and work. This is the 4. 0 era, so not being exposed to technology will be a huge inconvenience in my life. 22. What’s your phone number? My phone number is 0938592275. This is not my phone number from the beginning but my mother passed it on to me. 23. What’s your email address? My email is huesa@gamail. com. This email is where I use to study and work so it is very important to me. 24. What kind of music do you like listening to? I like listening to light music because it makes me feel comfortable and relax after tired working and studying hours. 25. What sports do you sometimes play? I often play soccer with my friends. But due to the Covid-19 situation, I can only stay at home and play games with my friends 26. What is your favorite color? I like the color blue because it gives me a feeling of peace and poetic. Most of the items that I buy are blue. 27. Who is your favorite singer? I don't have my favorite singer. I just like listening to music, not idolizing someone too much. I just like myself. 28. Are you married? I'm still a student and still haven't thought about getting married. I think studying and working is still more important than getting married right now. 29. What do you look like? I look very ordinary, nothing too outstanding. I'm also an introvert so I don't care what I look like. 30. What are you like? I am a sociable and cheerful person, always looking for more relationships in my life.
1. Where are you from?

I’m from
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Viet
Nam. I’m
really
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love
my country
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because
it gives me a sense of comfort and peace. If you have the opportunity,
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come
here to visit and you will
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see
the cultural diversity of each region in Vietnam.

2. What is your hometown
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famous
for?

I'm an introvert,
so
I rarely go out.
However
, as far as I know,
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many
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people
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come
to landmark 81. It seems to be
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very
popular in my hometown. In my opinion, Landmark 81 can attract
so
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many
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people
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thanks
to its luxurious design as
well
as the variety of types such as gyms, shopping places, movie theaters, and amusement parks.

3. Where do you
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live
?

I
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live
in district 3.
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Although
this is not the center of
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HCMC
.
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, District 3 has churches and ancient villas, along with temples and
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of the city's most
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street food stalls.

4. How long have you been living there?

I have
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lived
here for 19 years
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. When I
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live
here, I
really
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feel
comfortable
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because
I have
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funny
neighbors.
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, the security system here is
also
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very
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good
so
I
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have to
worry about
being burglarized
.

5. Who do you
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live
with?

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lived
with my
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parents
and siblings.
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But
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now
, my siblings have a
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family
of their
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own
,
so
I am alone with my
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parents
. I hope to be able to do something for my
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parents
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before
I
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get
married.

6. What’s your major?

My
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major
is digital business. Although I have
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very
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little
information about this industry
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because
it has not been
widely
spread in Vietnam.
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But
I believe in the future, this
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major
will grow
extremely
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widely


7. Do you like your
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major
? Why?

I like my
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major
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because
I am
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very
interested in doing business in the technology field and this
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major
meets my interests and passions. I
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think
this
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major
will
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help
me
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get
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a lot of
foreign connections when I go to
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work 8
. How
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many
brothers and sisters do you have?

I have two
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siblings and
they all have
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families
of their
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own
. Each has 2 children and their children are
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very
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beautiful
. I
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love
to go over to my siblings'
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house
to play with my grandchildren when I have
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free
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time. 9
. What do your
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parents
do?

My
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parents
are self-employed and are
mainly
housewives. My
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parents
are
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very
concerned about
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family
,
so
they always want to
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spend
more
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time
with
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family
than
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work. 10
. Do you have a girlfriend / boyfriend?

In the past I did,
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but
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now
I
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don't
.
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Because
I
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think
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studying
and working is the most
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important
. I want to
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spend
more of my
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time
with my
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parents. 11
. What do you do in your
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free
time?

I
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usually
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spend
my
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free
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time
listening to
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music
and playing chess.
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Sometimes
if my
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parents
need my
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help
, I am
still
willing to
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spend
my
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free
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time
to
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help
them.

12. Why are you
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studying
English?

I
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study
English
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because
I
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see
its importance in my future. If I want to develop my career in the future, communication with foreign partners is
extremely
necessary.
So
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only
English can
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help
me with that.

13. What kind of films do you like watching?

I like to
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watch
action movies. It made me
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feel
excited and there was a bit of drama to
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watch
.
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Sometimes
I
also
like to
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watch
horror movies
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because
it gives me interesting scary feelings

14. What
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time
do you
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usually
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get
up?

I
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usually
wake up at 5am to exercise and have
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breakfast
. Although I
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don't
like getting up
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early
,
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but
according to a
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study
I read online, waking up
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early
is
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good
for health,
so
I
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have to
practice this habit every day.

15. What
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time
do you
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often
go to bed?

I
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often
go to bed at 10 o'clock
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because
going to bed
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early
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helps
me
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get
quality
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sleep
. This will
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help
me have more energy the
next
day to
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study
and
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work. 16
. How
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many
hours do you
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sleep
every night?

I
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usually
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sleep
7-8 hours a night
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because
as I said above
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only
when I
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get
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enough
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sleep
can I have
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enough
energy to wake up
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early
the
next
day to
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study
and
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work. 17
. What do you
frequently
have for breakfast?

In the past, I
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thought
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breakfast
wasn't
really
necessary until I had a severe stomach ache.
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Only
then did I realize the importance of
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breakfast
.
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Now
I eat
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breakfast
regularly
and
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don't
skip a meal

18. What are you going to do this weekend?

I will
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spend
the weekend to
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improve
my English
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because
I
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feel
that my English is not
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very
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good
.
In addition
, due to the epidemic situation, most of the amusement parks
were closed
,
so
I couldn't go out with my friends.

19. Do you have any pets?

I
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don't
have it,
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but
my dad does. He
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kept
hundreds of birds in one room.
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Sometimes
I find raising a pet quite time-consuming,
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but
my dad is happy about it.

20. What
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languages
do you speak?

I
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usually
speak Vietnamese
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language
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because
it is my mother tongue.
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Now
I am learning another
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language
which is English. As
you know
, English is the most popular
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language
all over the world,
so
even though
I'm
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very
lazy in learning English, I
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have to
try my best to learn it.

21. How
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often
do you
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use
a computer?

I
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use
the computer every day
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because
it is a tool that
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helps
me
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study
and
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work
. This is the 4. 0
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era
,
so
not
being exposed
to technology will be a huge inconvenience in my life.

22. What’s your phone number?

My phone number is 0938592275. This is not my phone number from the beginning
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but
my mother passed it on to me.

23. What’s your email address?

My email is
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huesa@gamail
.
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com
. This email is where I
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use to
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study
and
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work
so
it is
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very
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important
to me.

24. What kind of
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music
do you like listening to?

I like listening to light
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music
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because
it
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makes
me
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feel
comfortable and relax after tired working and
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studying
hours.

25. What sports do you
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sometimes
play?

I
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often
play soccer with my friends.
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But
due to the Covid-19 situation, I can
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only
stay at home and play games with my friends

26. What is your favorite color?

I like the color blue
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because
it gives me a feeling of peace and poetic. Most of the items that I
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buy
are blue.

27. Who is your favorite singer?

I
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don't
have my favorite singer. I
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just
like listening to
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music
, not idolizing someone too much.
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I
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just
like myself.

28. Are you married?

I'm
still
a student and
still
haven't
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thought
about getting married. I
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think
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studying
and working is
still
more
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important
than getting married
right
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now. 29
. What do you look like?

I look
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very
ordinary, nothing too outstanding. I'm
also
an introvert
so
I
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don't
care what I look like.

30. What are you like?

I am a sociable and cheerful person, always looking for more relationships in my life.
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IELTS speaking m really love my country because it gives me a sense of comfort and peace

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