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am Bivek Pandey, from Nepal. I hav

am Bivek Pandey, from Nepal. I hav J3Ln6
I am Bivek Pandey, from Nepal. I have completed Bachelor’s degree programme in computer science and information technology. After being involved in IT industry for a couple of years, now I am looking forward to continue my further study to enhance skills within the relevant field as well as for personal development. Being a part of software development team, I have very good knowledge of HTML, CSS, JS, Python, PHP. I am interested and experienced with backend development frameworks like Laravel and Django. During the seventh semester of my bachelor’s degree, I collaborated with my colleagues for final year project, as a part of our academic syllabus. We developed Recomendation system (Gotraveller) based on cosine similarity algorithm, which recommend best travel destination for users based on their travel history records. Similarly, In eighth semester, I was placed as a intern in Softechpark as a python developer, where I got chance to work in Library Management System under the supervision of senior developers.
I am
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Bivek
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Pandey
, from Nepal. I have completed Bachelor’s degree
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programme
in computer science and information technology. After
being involved
in IT industry for a couple of years,
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now
I am looking forward
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to continue
my
further
study to enhance
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skills
within the relevant field as
well
as for personal development. Being a part of software development team, I have
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very
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good
knowledge of HTML, CSS, JS, Python, PHP. I
am interested
and experienced with backend development frameworks like Laravel and Django. During the seventh semester of my bachelor’s degree, I collaborated with my colleagues for final year project, as a part of our academic syllabus. We developed
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Recomendation
system (
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Gotraveller
) based on cosine similarity algorithm, which recommend best travel destination for users based on their travel history records.
Similarly
, In eighth semester, I
was placed
as
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a
intern in
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Softechpark
as a python developer, where I
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got
chance to work in Library Management System under the supervision of senior developers.
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5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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