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Warning ⚠️ This story is not based on reality yelled mum, “Will you please stop playing and go and clean up your room? ” Or how slutty you are Or other or s Have you ever heard these same words when your mum or dad tell you to clean your room, But you say After another round of play Or After an hour of snoozing Or other or s And after all you run off and do something else. They Say If You Want To Tell A Story Right You Gotta Start At The Beginning, so let's just start from my beginning It was a Friday just like the previous full of grunts but I just stand up and shouted: I will end this period I climbed the stairs with firm steps and opened my room with confidence to start cleaning and then I lost my confidence. (mom and dad were right my room became more than just a bedroom) every corner was crammed with trash, closets overflowing with clothes and so on I had to start an enormous task decluttering But I won't give up

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This story is not based on reality

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYelled
yelled
 mum, “Will you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 playing and go and clean up your room? ”

Or

how slutty you are

Or other or s

Have you ever heard these same words when your mum or dad This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 you to clean your room,

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 you say

After another round of play

Or

After an hour of snoozing

Or other or s

And after all
 you run off and do something else.

They Say If You Want To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
Tell
 A Story Right
 You The word 'gotta' is informal. Consider an alternative.Have toHave got toGot a
Gotta
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoutsetdawnkickoffopening
Start
 At The Beginning, so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
's This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoutsetdawnkickoffopening
start
 from my beginning

It was a Friday This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 like the previous full of grunts This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 stand up and shouted: I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 this period

I climbed the stairs with firm steps and opened my room with confidence to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoutsetdawnkickoffopening
start
 cleaning and then I lost my confidence. (mom and dad were right
 my room became more than This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 a bedroom)

every corner was crammed
 with trash, closets overflowing with clothes and so
 on

I had to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoutsetdawnkickoffopening
start
 an enormous task Possible spelling mistake found.clutteringuncluttering
decluttering


This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I won't give up