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Make a conversation between a doctor and a patient who has a burn on his arm.

Make a conversation between a doctor and a patient who has a burn on his arm. Mqyp6
Doctor: Well, does your scald still hurts? Patient: Now it's much better but also painful Doctor: So can you tell me the reason why did you get a burn? Patient: Oh! That happened when I was cooking dinner. Due to my carelessness, I spilled boiling soup on my hand. Fortunately, my older sibling sussed it out and took me to the hospital. Doctor: In my eyes, your scald is rather serious and it can lead to infection if we don’t take care of it properly. Please be assured that the scald won’t leave the scar. Patient: that sounds great. I have got uptight about it and I was glad to get off my chest. Doctor: That problem is chota, so don’t worry about that. I can guarantee it. Doctor: However, I want you to stay overnight in the hospital to be monitored closely by the nurses. Doctor: Besides, I also have some advice for you when you are released from the hospital. First of all, remember to keep your scald away from water until the healing has begun. Doctor: Secondly, Don't forget to take your medicine on time and have a rest. Namely, you have to take medicine on an empty stomach and rub ointment to the scald. These are significant to follow. Patient: Do these drugs have any side effects, doctor? Doctor: It doesn’t. Those are just strong anti-inflammatory medicines and painkillers. They don’t cause any unpleasant side effects Doctor: Apart from that, the state of mind plays a major role in medical treatment. Thus, try to loosen up. Doctor: Thirdly, you need to be changed the dressing of a scald once a day. I will instruct your relatives on how to do it. And finally, don’t forget to inform me when you have any symptoms of infection. Doctor: Do you have any questions? Patient: No, doctor. Doctor: Well, you can take a rest right now.
Doctor:
Well
, does your scald
still
hurts?

Patient:
Now
it's much better
but
also
painful

Doctor:
So
can you
tell
me the reason why did you
get
a burn?

Patient: Oh! That happened when I was cooking dinner. Due to my carelessness, I spilled boiling soup on my hand.
Fortunately
, my older sibling sussed it out and took me to the hospital.

Doctor: In my eyes, your scald is
rather
serious and it can lead to infection if we don’t take care of it
properly
.
Please
be assured
that the scald won’t
leave
the scar.

Patient: that sounds great. I have
got
uptight about
it and
I was glad to
get
off my chest.

Doctor: That problem is
chota
,
so
don’t worry about that. I can guarantee it.

Doctor:
However
, I want you to stay overnight in the hospital to
be monitored
closely
by the nurses.

Doctor:
Besides
, I
also
have
some
advice for you when you
are released
from the hospital.
First of all
, remember to
keep
your scald away from water until the healing has begun.

Doctor:
Secondly
, Don't forget to take your medicine on time and have a rest.
Namely
, you
have to
take medicine on an empty stomach and rub ointment to the scald. These are significant to follow.

Patient: Do these drugs have any side effects, doctor?

Doctor: It doesn’t. Those are
just
strong anti-inflammatory medicines and painkillers. They don’t cause any unpleasant side effects

Doctor: Apart from that, the state of mind plays a major role in medical treatment.
Thus
, try to loosen up.

Doctor:
Thirdly
, you need to be
changed
the dressing of a scald once a day. I will instruct your relatives on how to do it. And
finally
, don’t forget to inform me when you have any symptoms of infection.

Doctor: Do you have any questions?

Patient: No, doctor.

Doctor:
Well
, you can take a rest
right
now
.
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IELTS speaking Make a conversation between a doctor and a patient who has a burn on his arm.

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317 words
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