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Describe your favourite technological device you have

Describe your favourite technological device you have d3Aed
You know, my house has a lot of Morden technology machines, but the one I love and use the most is my laptop. It has a rectangular shape, bright silver colour. My laptop is thin, light, easy to carry. It’s used all day because I have to study online. In addition, it is also used to surfing the internet, reading books, listening to music, look up information accurately and quickly. It will be something that helps my study. Thanks for listening.
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technology machines,
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the one I
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the most is my laptop. It has a rectangular shape, bright silver
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colour
. My laptop is thin, light, easy to carry. It’s
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used
all day
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have to
study online.
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used
to surfing the internet, reading books, listening to music, look up information
accurately
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quickly
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helps
my study. Thanks for listening.
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IELTS speaking Describe your favourite technological device you have

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  American English
1 paragraphs
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6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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