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Change" has been an unavoidable factor in my life up to this point. I was very interested in learning languages, which led me to join English speaking clubs. Then I decided to take it more seriously, which led me to participate in the Model United Nations Conference. During these conferences, I brainstormed ways to achieve other goals of mine, which was to study abroad. I came across the International Baccalaureate Diploma Program. In IBDP, I discovered a solution to my next goal, which is to identify my area of interest. It was Business Management, and I'm sure I'll find answers to the next stages of my goals there as well. The time changed, but the strategy of "finding the best solution to achieve what I want" remained. This equipped me with problem-solving and critical-thinking skills. I literally think that I had the characteristics of a leader because that is how I approach my life and abilities such as discipline, multitasking, and hard-working, and that is how I achieve my life goals. Aside from that, the way I was raised had a remarkable impact on my decision-making. I have been raised by a hardworking businessman father and inspiring businesswoman mother and I have always found them inspiring. That’s why, they were my idols. They have always assisted me when I was in need such as forming my identity, but most importantly, they have also inspired me to choose the path I will take for the rest of my life in terms of my career. I have close relationships with both of my parents, which allowed me to closely observe them. They are both completely satisfied with their career choices. When I was in second grade, my favorite activity after school was to sit in my father's chair and try to read the documents on the desk. I was ecstatic to see him reading the agreement documents with other brands with such enthusiasm and a glitter in his eyes. I've always assumed that he built himself the fantasy world that he's so proud of. Because I spend my days, weeks, and years surrounded by these specific success stories, I began to look for my own. I was always interested in Mathematics but I didn't want to proceed with my life based on that with a stereotyped occupation. Instead, I searched for degrees where I can combine my mathematics, problem solving and management skills. I participated in the National Mathematics Olympics twice in the freshman and sophomore year of my high school education. I also participated in the TUBITAK competition in my senior years and tried to enhance my abilities with creative projects and interesting ideas. After gaining some experiences in Model United Nations Conferences, my communication skills and management of a group of people developed. I was delighted to come up with marvelous solutions and convince people with my ideas and enlighten them. I always dreamed of leading my life with these characteristics like an entrepreneur. That is why Business Management is a perfect fit for me because it combines my talents, capabilities, and interests. Because owning a business, being an entrepreneur defines everything that I'm seeking in my future. In order to take what I want from life, first of all I have to serve the world and contribute to the purpose of a better future. That would be my future plan. The scientific area of interest quizzes that I completed proved that my choice was accurate. If I ever have the opportunity to run my own business, it will be equivalent to running the world for me in the same way that my father does for himself. As a personal characteristic, I was always aware that I had to do something that I am happy to continue doing. As a result, I have no fear of failing in the future because I know I will find my way eventually no matter what. Besides I am hungry for both failure and success to draw my own path with the satisfaction of enjoying the choices I made. Furthermore, I am fired up to follow through on my decisions.
Change
"
has been an unavoidable factor in my
life
up to this point. I was
very
interested in learning languages, which led me to
join
English speaking
clubs. Then I decided to take it more
seriously
, which led me to participate in the Model United Nations Conference. During these conferences, I brainstormed ways to achieve other
goals
of mine, which was to study abroad. I came across the International Baccalaureate Diploma Program. In
IBDP
, I discovered a solution to my
next
goal
, which is to identify my area of interest. It was
Business
Management
, and I'm sure I'll find answers to the
next
stages of my
goals
there as
well
. The time
changed
,
but
the strategy of
"
finding the best solution to achieve what I want
"
remained.

This equipped me with problem-solving and critical-thinking
skills
. I
literally
think
that I had the characteristics of a leader
because
that is
how I approach my
life
and abilities such as discipline, multitasking, and
hard
-working, and
that is
how I achieve my
life
goals
. Aside from that, the way I
was raised
had a remarkable impact on my decision-making. I have
been raised
by a hardworking businessman father and inspiring businesswoman mother and I have always found them inspiring. That’s why, they were my idols. They have always assisted me when I was in need such as forming my identity,
but
most
importantly
, they have
also
inspired me to choose the path I will take for the rest of my
life
in terms of my career. I have close relationships with both of my parents, which
allowed
me to
closely
observe them. They are both completely satisfied with their career choices. When I was in second grade, my favorite activity after school was to sit in my father's chair and try to read the documents on the desk. I was ecstatic to
see
him reading the agreement documents with other brands with such enthusiasm and a glitter in his eyes. I've always assumed that he built himself the fantasy world that he's
so
proud of.
Because
I spend my days, weeks, and years surrounded by these specific success stories, I began to look for my
own
.

I was always interested in Mathematics
but
I didn't want to proceed with my
life
based on that with a stereotyped occupation.
Instead
, I searched for degrees where I can combine my mathematics, problem solving and
management
skills
. I participated in the National Mathematics Olympics twice in the freshman and sophomore year of my high school education. I
also
participated in the
TUBITAK
competition in my senior years and tried to enhance my abilities with creative projects and interesting
ideas
. After gaining
some
experiences in Model United Nations Conferences, my communication
skills
and
management
of a group of
people
developed. I
was delighted
to
come
up with marvelous solutions and convince
people
with my
ideas
and enlighten them. I always dreamed of leading my
life
with these characteristics like an entrepreneur.
That is
why
Business
Management
is a perfect fit for me
because
it combines my talents, capabilities, and interests.
Because
owning a
business
, being an entrepreneur defines everything that I'm seeking in my
future
. In order to take what I want from
life
,
first of all
I
have to
serve the world and contribute to the purpose of a better
future
. That would be my
future
plan. The scientific area of interest quizzes that I completed proved that my choice was accurate. If I ever have the opportunity to run my
own
business
, it will be equivalent to running the world for me
in the same way
that my father does for himself.

As a personal characteristic, I was always aware that I had to do something that I am happy to continue doing.
As a result
, I have no fear of failing in the
future
because
I know I will find my way
eventually
no matter what.
Besides
I am hungry for both failure and success to draw my
own
path with the satisfaction of enjoying the choices I made.
Furthermore
, I
am fired
up to follow through on my decisions.
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IELTS speaking personal statement about my life

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4 paragraphs
686 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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