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Describe a time when you needed to search for important information on the internet. v.1

Describe a time when you needed to search for important information on the internet. v. 1
Describe a time when you needed to search for important information on the internet. You should say: when it was what information you needed how long it took you to get the information and explain how you felt after you found the information on the internet. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer: If reading without a “looking glass” for a person with eye problems is incomplete and inefficient, searching for important information in today’s world without using the internet has to be incomplete as well. And, I also figured it out when I was searching for some important information about a couple of years ago. I never really like to travel during the wintertime for two reasons. The first reason is, of course, I don’t enjoy cold weather that much. The second reason is that the winter causes the visibility of roads to become low due to foggy weather, and I am never really comfortable riding on a vehicle when the road visibility is low because it increases the possibility of an accident. But, I really needed to travel during the wintertime about a couple of years ago, because I wanted to see my younger sister, who had just given birth to a beautiful baby girl. Anyway, I could either travel by train or by bus, depending on how fast I wanted to reach my destination, as well as the “visibility” of the road due to the hazy weather condition. I tried to call both the bus authority and the train authority in order to get the necessary information, but, while they were able to tell me exactly how long it would take me to reach my destination, they couldn’t tell me anything specific about the “winter fog”. So, I decided to hit the internet to find the information on winter fogs of those places, through which my train or bus would pass, by checking the usual temperatures and humidity levels of those areas. Luckily, I learned what I needed to know after searching for about 20 minutes. Anyway, after finding the needed information, I felt really happy and relieved as I was able to find rather quickly, comparing with other sources of information, that the weather condition was not that bad for a daylong travelling. Besides, I also felt that I could rely on the internet more often in order to find important information for the purpose of meeting our daily informational needs.
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Describe
a time when you
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needed
to search for
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important
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information
on the internet. You should say: when it was what
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information
you
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needed
how long it took you to
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get
the
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information
and
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explain
how you felt after you found the
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information
on the internet. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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Model Answer:

If reading without a “looking glass” for a person with eye problems is incomplete and inefficient, searching for
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important
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information
in
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today
’s world without using the internet
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has to
be incomplete as
well
. And, I
also
figured it out when I was searching for
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some
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important
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information
about a couple of years ago.

I never
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really
like to travel during the wintertime for two reasons. The
first
reason is,
of course
, I don’t enjoy
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cold
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weather
that much. The second reason is that the winter causes the visibility of roads to become low due to foggy
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weather
, and I am never
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really
comfortable riding on a vehicle when the road visibility is low
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because
it increases the possibility of an accident.
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But
, I
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really
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needed
to travel during the wintertime about a couple of years ago,
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because
I wanted to
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see
my younger sister, who had
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just
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given
birth to a
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beautiful
baby girl.

Anyway
, I could either travel by train or by bus, depending on how
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fast
I wanted to reach my destination, as
well
as the “visibility” of the road due to the hazy
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weather
condition. I tried to call both the bus authority and the train authority in order to
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get
the necessary
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information
,
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but
, while they were able to
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tell
me exactly how long it would take me to reach my destination, they couldn’t
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tell
me anything specific about the “winter fog”.
So
, I decided to hit the internet to find the
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information
on winter fogs of those places, through which my train or bus would pass, by checking the usual temperatures and humidity levels of those areas. Luckily, I learned what I
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needed
to know after searching for about 20 minutes.

Anyway
, after finding the
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needed
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information
, I felt
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really
happy and relieved as I was able to find
rather
quickly
, comparing with other sources of
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information
, that the
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weather
condition was not that
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bad
for a daylong travelling.
Besides
, I
also
felt that I could rely on the internet more
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often
in order to find
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important
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information
for the purpose of meeting our daily informational needs.
8Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
28Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a time when you needed to search for important information on the internet. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
439 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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