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Describe a famous food from your hometown or country. v.1

Describe a famous food from your hometown or country. v. 1
Describe a famous food from your hometown or country. You should say: what it is what it tastes like how it is prepared and explain why this is famous food. Model Answer: Handmade custard is a very popular and tasty food item in my hometown. In fact, the custard of my hometown is popular that, people of all over the country knows the famous custard produced in our area. Specially made custard in my hometown is a popular food item in all over the country and this food item is exported even in some foreign countries as well. The custard of my hometown is very tasty and delicious. It is sweet and is a perfect dessert for dinner. Milk is the main ingredient to prepare the custard. The fine quality milk is collected and preserved for preparing this food item. The milk is mixed with a tiny amount of special seeds and kept in a large pot in a special temperature. Other sweetener items and ingredients are added 3-4 days later and after a week the custard is prepared. In our country, people have a long tradition of preparing special food items and different food items of different cities are country famous. Because of the availability of quality cow milk and for the inherited tradition and skill, best quality custards are prepared in our city and this is better than the custards made in other parts of the country. Over time, this food item got famous in the whole country and many outlets have been opened for selling this item in the capital of our country. The people of our town adopted the transportation facilities and have started selling it in different parts of the country. Because of the great and incomparable taste, and superiority in quality, this food item of our hometown got renowned all over the country.     Part 3: Details Discussion: Q. What are some of the main food products ("foods") that your country produces? Q. What are some food products that come from different parts of your country? Q. What widely consumed food products are mainly imported into your country? Q. Do you think it's important that a country is self-sufficient in food? Q. Do you think the globalisation of industry and commerce is a good thing? Q. Do you think every country should make everything it needs or should it import some things? Q. What are the disadvantages of a country producing everything it needs? Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a famous item from your locality. Describe a food item you often eat. Describe a common food item in your town.
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or
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. You should say: what it is what it tastes like how it
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and
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explain
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. Model Answer:

Handmade custard is a
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very
popular and tasty
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food
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item
in my
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hometown
. In fact, the custard of my
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hometown
is popular that,
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people
of all
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over
the
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country
knows the
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famous
custard produced in our area.
Specially
made custard in my
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hometown
is a popular
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food
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item
in all
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and this
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item
is exported
even in
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foreign
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countries
as
well
. The custard of my
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hometown
is
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very
tasty and delicious. It is sweet and is a perfect dessert for dinner.
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Milk
is the main ingredient to prepare the custard. The fine
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quality
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milk
is collected
and preserved for preparing this
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food
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item
. The
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milk
is mixed
with a tiny amount of special seeds and
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kept
in a large pot in a special temperature. Other sweetener
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items
and ingredients are
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added
3-4 days later and after a week the custard
is prepared
. In our
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country
,
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people
have a long tradition of preparing special
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food
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items
and
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different
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food
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items
of
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different
cities are
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.
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of the availability of
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quality
cow
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milk
and for the inherited tradition and
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skill
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, best
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quality
custards
are prepared
in our city and this is better than the custards made in other
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parts
of the
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.
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time, this
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food
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item
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famous
in the whole
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country
and
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many
outlets have
been opened
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item
in the capital of our
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country
. The
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people
of our town adopted the transportation facilities and have
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started
selling it in
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different
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parts
of the
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country
.
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Because
of the great and incomparable taste, and superiority in
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quality
, this
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food
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item
of our
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hometown
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got
renowned all
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over
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country
.
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Part
3:
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Details
Discussion: Q. What are
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some of the
main
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products (
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foods
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) that your
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produces? Q. What are
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products that
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come
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? Q. What
widely
consumed
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food
products are
mainly
imported into your
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?
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country
is self-sufficient in
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?
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globalisation
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good
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should
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everything it needs or should it import
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some
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. What are the disadvantages of a
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country
producing everything it needs? Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
a
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famous
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item
from your locality.
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a
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food
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item
you
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often
eat.
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a common
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food
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item
in your town.
3Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
83Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a famous food from your hometown or country. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
457 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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