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Describe one of your favourite electronic media (like TV/ radio etc. ) v.1

Describe one of your favourite electronic media (like TV/ radio etc. ) v. 1
Describe one of your favourite electronic media (like TV/ radio etc. ) You should say: what is it and why it's your favourite what you do with it why it is useful to you and describe the advantages and disadvantages of this media. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]
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Describe
one of your
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favourite
electronic media (like TV/ radio etc.
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)
You should say: what is it and why it's your
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.
favourite
what you do with it why it is useful to you and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
describe
the advantages and disadvantages of
Did you mean "these"?
this
media. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
about what you are going to say. You can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
notes to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you if you wish.
Loose punctuation mark.
]
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe one of your favourite electronic media (like TV/ radio etc. ) v. 1

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
80 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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