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Describe something you own which is very important to you. v.4

Describe something you own which is very important to you. v. 4
Describe something you own which is very important to you. You should say: where you got it from how long you have it what you use it for and explain why it is so important to you. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Model Answer 1: Not sure, how much of an “importance” one should attach to owning a “motorcycle” on a scale of “owning important things”, but I consider my motorcycle to be very important to me because I have always felt like it is a “part of me” since the day I bought it, or “owned” it for hundreds of reasons, seriously. I have always loved riding a motorcycle since my early childhood, and even wanted to “own” one since then, but my parents didn’t quite feel comfortable with the “adrenaline rush” or a “pre-teen” boy like me. So, I had to wait for at least another 10 years or so before I could actually “own” my “dream” two-wheeled “road warrior”, courtesy to the goodwill of my parents who didn’t hesitate to spend a “handsome” amount of cash to “spoil” their university-going, only “male” child. Anyway, since then, I have been “driving” (more like “torturing”) my shiny black motorcycle for almost 5 years, without any major complain, in order to travel back and forth from my home to work, visiting my families and friends who are living far away from me, and carrying my younger sisters occasionally to the nearby shopping mall. I also take the help of my “ever-dependable” vehicle to run for different kinds of errands frequently in order to help my family. Finally, if I don’t mention how I drag my “roadster” to take me to a lake, by weathering very “rough” road conditions sometimes, against its will so that I can do some “fishing”, I would not do a complete injustice on my motorcycle. My motorcycle is very important to me mainly because of the “versatilities” and flexibilities, it provides, in taking me to different destinations in different kinds of weather conditions. It is important to me also because it saves me a lot in my travel cost, considering how frequently I travel to different places. Finally, the “cool” feeling of walking into a restaurant or an upscale office, with a helmet under my arm while also having a “swagger” at the same time, is just “unbeatable” and “priceless”.   Sample Answer 2: The desktop computer I own is very important to me. I spend almost 6-7 hours on this computer which is even higher than the time I spend with my friends! My father bought me this computer 3 years ago when I got admitted to the university. I have done some configuration upgrades, but the main parts of the computer have remained almost the same as they were when I purchased it. I browse the internet on this computer and thus get lots of help related to my studies and assignments. I maintain social networking, update my blogs, play video games, watch movies, listen to music, learn and practice the graphics designing and programming and many more things on this computer. This computer has become an inevitable part of my life and I can hardly think of a day without this computer. The references and helps I get from the internet regarding my studies are unmatched. This saves a lot of time and helps me do better in the exams as well. This computer is the main source of information and entertainment for me. I send important emails and check incoming emails which help me do important communications. Every time I am confused about something, I just search it online.   The result is gratifying and it helps me learn more. In short, this is the most necessary tool that I own.   Rounding off questions: Q. Is it valuable in terms of money? Answer: Indirectly, yes, it saves money and it has a resell value. Let's say, if I sell this computer right away, I can get a good sum of money. Besides, the knowledge I can gather from using it is priceless. If I use an internet cafe to send and check my emails, play games or download something, it would cost me. However, owning this computer saves me this amount. Q. Would it be easy to replace? Answer: If you ask me if I can get a new computer, or perhaps a laptop, and replace the existing one, I would say, it's doable for me. However, if you tell me not to use it any longer, I am sure it would make my life harder!   Part 3 – Two-way discussion: Let’s consider first of all how people’s values have changed. Q. What kind of things give status to people in your country? Answer: Well, the innocent-sounding word "status" is, in fact, hard to define and it varies from person to person. Generally speaking, a large house in a posh area, a corporate job with higher remuneration, luxurious cars, well-decorated house, higher education and a foreign degree, fame and expensive electronic gadgets are some common symbols of status in our country. To some people, material gains are more important than morality to have social status while very few people consider otherwise.   Q. Have things changed since your parents’ time? Answer: I think it has not changed significantly and earthly possessions and money were determining factors for having social status during my parent's time as well. However, they also considered someone's character and morality for social status than we do today. Q. Are people in modern time more focused on their career than the past? Answer: Yes, people these days are more concerned and focused on their career development than ever before. Increasing population and competition, our declination towards material gains and loosely family ties have fueled this. In the past, someone used to put his family and morality well above his career. However, this is often not the case in today's world. It is not entirely our's fault. Without being career conscious it would be hard for any of us to sustain in the modern workplace. Finally, let’s talk about the role of advertising. Q. Do you think advertising influences what people buy? Answer: I think advertisements have a great magnetism on us as consumers. We are surrounded by advertisements and consciously and unconsciously these adverts influence our choices to buy a product. For instance, if a customer is given four perfumes of different brands and is asked to buy one, he would go for the brand he has heard about or seen on an advert. We want to buy something we have heard about and this is where the advertisers tap into. We even end up buying things that we do not need only because advertisements lure us to do so! Q. What makes us buy things we do not need? Why is so? Answer: We live in a materialistic world where we have plenty of options. The emergence of the throwaway society has further fueled our habit of buying more than we actually need. We are never happy and with the frequent release of new and improved electronics and household items, we are tempted to buy things we could do without just fine. Q. Should advertisers be allowed to track our online activities? Answer: This is an interesting question to deal with. As a consumer and a regular user of the internet, I believe our privacy is at stake and advertisers should not be allowed to track our every online activity to leverage their advert campaigns. However, from the advertisers perspective, they find it quite natural to track our activities to offer us the most suitable products or services which will fit our demands. They believe it maintains the advertisement ecosystem. However, we should be wary of this tracking mechanism and avoid being targetted by following the safe-browsing policies. There should definitely be a boundary to restrict advertisers and brands to get our private data.   Similar Cue Card Topics: Describe the object you value most in your possession. Describe an important thing that you own. Describe an electronic device that you own. Describe the most useful device that you have. Describe something that you often use at home. Describe a valuable thing that you bought recently.
Describe
something
you
own
which is
very
important
to you. You should say: where you
got
it from how long you have it what you
use
it for and
explain
why it is
so
important
to you. [You will
have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
think
about what you are going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]


Model Answer 1:

Not sure, how much of an “importance” one should attach to owning a “motorcycle” on a scale of “owning
important
things”,
but
I consider my motorcycle to be
very
important
to me
because
I have always felt like it is a
“part
of me” since the day I
bought
it, or “
owned
” it for hundreds of reasons,
seriously
.

I have always
loved
riding a motorcycle since my early childhood, and even wanted to “
own
” one since then,
but
my parents didn’t quite feel comfortable with the “adrenaline rush” or a “
pre-teen
” boy like me.
So
, I had to wait for at least another 10 years or
so
before
I could
actually
own
” my “dream” two-wheeled “road warrior”, courtesy to the goodwill of my parents who didn’t hesitate to spend a “handsome” amount of cash to “spoil” their university-going,
only
“male” child.

Anyway
, since then, I have been “driving” (more like “torturing”) my shiny black motorcycle for almost 5 years, without any major complain, in order to travel back and forth from my home to work, visiting my
families
and friends who are living far away from me, and carrying my younger sisters
occasionally
to the nearby shopping mall. I
also
take the
help
of my “ever-dependable” vehicle to run for
different
kinds of errands
frequently
in order to
help
my
family
.
Finally
, if I don’t mention how I drag my “roadster” to take me to a lake, by weathering
very
“rough” road conditions
sometimes
, against its will
so
that I can do
some
“fishing”, I would not do a complete injustice on my motorcycle.

My motorcycle is
very
important
to me
mainly
because
of the “
versatilities
” and
flexibilities
, it provides, in taking me to
different
destinations in
different
kinds of weather conditions. It is
important
to me
also
because
it
saves
me a lot in my travel cost, considering how
frequently
I travel to
different
places.
Finally
, the “cool” feeling of walking into a restaurant or an upscale office, with a helmet under my arm while
also
having a “swagger” at the same
time
, is
just
“unbeatable” and “priceless”.
 
Sample Answer 2:

The desktop computer I
own
is
very
important
to me. I spend almost 6-7 hours on this computer which is even higher than the
time
I spend with my friends! My father
bought
me this computer 3 years ago when I
got
admitted to the university. I have done
some
configuration upgrades,
but
the main
parts
of the computer have remained almost the same as they were when I
purchased
it.

I browse the internet on this computer and
thus
get
lots of
help
related to my studies and assignments.
I
maintain
social
networking, update my blogs, play video games,
watch
movies, listen to music, learn and practice the graphics designing and programming and
many
more things on this computer. This computer has become an inevitable
part
of my life and I can hardly
think
of a day without this computer. The references and
helps
I
get
from the internet regarding my studies
are unmatched
. This
saves
a lot of
time
and
helps
me do better in the exams as
well
.

This computer is the main source of information and entertainment for me. I
send
important
emails and
check
incoming emails which
help
me do
important
communications. Every
time
I
am confused
about
something
, I
just
search it online.
 
The result is gratifying and it
helps
me learn more. In short, this is the most necessary tool that I
own
.
 
Rounding off questions: Q. Is it valuable in terms of money?

Answer:
Indirectly
, yes, it
saves
money and it has a
resell
value.
Let
's say, if I sell this computer
right
away, I can
get
a
good
sum of money.
Besides
, the knowledge I can gather from using it is priceless. If I
use
an internet
cafe
to
send
and
check
my emails, play games or download
something
, it would cost me.
However
, owning this computer
saves
me this amount. Q. Would it be easy to replace?

Answer: If you ask me if I can
get
a new computer, or perhaps a laptop, and replace the existing one, I would say, it's doable for me.
However
, if you
tell
me not to
use
it any longer, I am sure it would
make
my life harder!
 
Part
3
Two-way discussion:
Let
’s consider
first of all
how
people’s
values have
changed
. Q. What kind of things give
status
to
people
in your country?

Answer:
Well
, the innocent-sounding word
"
status
"
is, in fact,
hard
to define and it varies from person to person.
Generally
speaking, a large
house
in a posh area, a corporate job with higher remuneration, luxurious cars,
well
-decorated
house
, higher education and a foreign degree, fame and expensive electronic gadgets are
some
common symbols of
status
in our country. To
some
people
, material gains are more
important
than morality to have
social
status
while
very
few
people
consider
otherwise
.
 
Q. Have things
changed
since your parents’ time?

Answer: I
think
it has not
changed
significantly
and
earthly
possessions and money were determining factors for having
social
status
during my parent's
time
as
well
.
However
, they
also
considered someone's character and morality for
social
status
than we do
today
. Q. Are
people
in modern
time
more focused on their
career
than the past?

Answer: Yes,
people
these days are more concerned and focused on their
career
development than ever
before
. Increasing population and competition, our declination towards material gains and
loosely
family
ties have fueled this. In the past, someone
used
to put his
family
and morality
well
above his
career
.
However
, this is
often
not the case in
today
's world. It is not
entirely
our's
fault. Without being
career
conscious it would be
hard
for any of us to sustain in the modern workplace.
Finally
,
let
’s talk about the role of advertising. Q. Do you
think
advertising influences what
people
buy
?

Answer: I
think
advertisements
have a great magnetism on us as consumers. We
are surrounded
by
advertisements
and
consciously
and
unconsciously
these adverts influence our choices to
buy
a product.
For instance
, if a customer is
given
four perfumes of
different
brands and
is asked
to
buy
one, he would go for the brand he has heard about or
seen
on an advert. We want to
buy
something
we have heard about and this is where the
advertisers
tap into. We even
end
up buying things that we do not need
only
because
advertisements
lure us to do
so
! Q. What
makes
us
buy
things we do not need? Why is
so
?

Answer: We
live
in a materialistic world where we have
plenty
of options. The emergence of the throwaway society has
further
fueled our habit of buying more than we
actually
need. We are never happy and with the frequent release of new and
improved
electronics and household items, we
are tempted
to
buy
things we could do without
just
fine. Q. Should
advertisers
be
allowed
to
track
our online activities?

Answer: This is an interesting question to deal with. As a consumer and a regular user of the internet, I believe our privacy is at stake and
advertisers
should not be
allowed
to
track
our every online activity to leverage their advert campaigns.
However
, from the
advertisers
perspective, they find it quite natural to
track
our activities to offer us the most suitable products or services which will fit our demands. They believe it maintains the
advertisement
ecosystem.
However
, we should be wary of this tracking mechanism and avoid being
targetted
by following the safe-browsing policies. There should definitely be a boundary to restrict
advertisers
and brands to
get
our private data.
 
Similar Cue Card Topics:
Describe
the object you value most in your possession.
Describe
an
important
thing that you
own
.
Describe
an electronic device that you
own
.
Describe
the most useful device that you have.
Describe
something
that you
often
use
at home.
Describe
a valuable thing that you
bought
recently.
23Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
94Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe something you own which is very important to you. v. 4

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1413 words
5.5
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