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Describe something you borrowed from your friend or family. v.1

Describe something you borrowed from your friend or family. v. 1
Describe something you borrowed from your friend or family. You should say: what you borrowed when you borrowed it whom you borrowed it from and explain why you borrowed it. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: I have always remained a very vocal “opponent” of borrowing anything from anybody either because it would put a question mark on my “financial ability” or present me as a “miserly” person to others. But, necessity knows no bounds, and I also needed to borrow something, a scientific calculator that is, from one of my distant relatives. It was about 10 years ago, when I was still a high school student, and I was eagerly waiting to get over with my final term examination. Everything was going well as I was finishing taking one test after another until the day to appear for the “Trigonometry” test had arrived. As usual, I was ready to get out of my house and hit the road in order to take part in the “Trigonometry” test. But, unfortunately, just when I was checking my calculator for the last time to make sure if it was in good working condition, I found out to my extreme “horror” that it wasn’t working at all! I checked the battery (which I had put only the previous month) and everything else by pushing all the “buttons” one after another, but it just wouldn’t switch on. So, I immediately decided to run to a nearby local store in order to buy the same kind of calculator, but all I could expect there was some “huge disappointment” as it didn’t have any scientific calculator to sell. At this point, I felt very “helpless”. But, just when I was about to give up my hope to get a calculator, I thought of asking one distant math teacher relative of mine to rescue me. And, what a rescue it really was! Anyway, I needed to borrow the calculator because travelling to different stores one after another, without actually knowing which store was selling that type of calculator, would surely make me late for my test. I had to borrow the scientific tool also because, without it, I couldn’t really do much in my “Trigonometry” test as far as the issue of getting a good grade was concerned.   Model Answer 2: I would like to thank you for the opportunity you have given me to talk about something I once borrowed from a friend or a relative. To be honest, I can recall many such events when I had to turn to a friend or family member for something I required. However, for this cue card topic, I will talk about an event when I borrowed two thousand dollars from my father.   Just after finishing college, I, along with two of my friends, planned to start a small business. It was 2016 and I was convinced to be a partner of the proposed business and that's why borrowed the money from my father. Besides my university, I got serious about our new venture and I had been able to return the money within a year that I took from my father as a loan. When I returned the money to my father, he seemed surprised and I explained how our interior design venture is flourishing day by day. He told me that he was quite astonished that our little enterprise eventually saw the light of success.   I thanked him for the money and explained how we worked together to make it a success. I also showed my gratitude and mentioned that without his money, I could not have been a part of this business.   In numerous times, I borrowed books, laptops, music player, money, CDs and so on from my friends and relatives but the two thousand dollars that I took from my father was something quite different and I am lucky that I decided to borrow it from my father for a good reason which is eventually paying off.       Sample Answer 3:   Once I had to borrow a history textbook from one of my friends and I would like to talk about this event. I am an undergraduate student and I took the History of Ancient Civilizations course in my fourth semester. I needed the book as I lost mine and needed to get some information to complete an important assignment.   I borrowed the book “History and Our Footsteps” from Hien Long. He is a good friend of mine and lives near my residence. He is a helpful person and lent me the book though he needed it for the same purpose. I was happy to have the book and Long also was delighted that he could help me.   I needed the book urgently to get some information to prepare an assignment that I was due to submit in a week. Unfortunately, I lost my book and did not know how it was lost! If I failed to submit the assignment, it might have been difficult for me to pass the course. As I remember, it was a comparatively easier assignment and took only a few hours for me to complete but I could not have done it without having the textbook as a reference.   I knew that I would require the book to complete the assignment but I could not buy it right then. So, I sought help from Long as he lived nearby. I asked him to lend me the book and I promised to return it the next day. He was supportive enough and came to my home with the book and then I completed the assignment. I thanked him heartily for his genuine help.   Idea generating: Cue Card Topic: Describe something you borrowed from your friend or family. 1. Before going to the office last Monday, I needed to have some change to pay the bus fare. But I could not manage it and lent some coins from my mom. In fact, it is hard to get a change of a large banknote in New Delhi and my mother was happy to offer her help. 2. I was supposed to go to a birthday party in my town last November but I could not find my necktie. So borrowed that from my dad. It was not unusual for me to borrow something from my dad but when I borrowed the necktie from him, I realised how important it is for me to be more careful about my wardrobe. 3. Usually, I do not borrow things from others but I had to break the rule last month. During a tutorial exam at my university, I had to borrow a pen. Actually, my pen ran out of ink and I did not have a spare one to complete the exam. I was relieved when Martha lent me one of her pens. 4. Smokers have rules worldwide. They do not hesitate to exchange cigarettes. I borrowed a cigarette from a friend cum colleague several times. I am an IT professional in Cordova, Spain and actually forgot to buy my cigarette pack that day. 5. My phone drained all the charges a few days ago and only then I remembered about an important phone call that I was supposed to make! So, I borrowed my dad’s phone. Putting my phone in charge, I lent the phone and had met the emergency.     6.  I love to play badminton and this is a popular sport in Japan. I had to borrow a badminton bat from a friend of mine as I broke mine the day before. It was a sad event for me because that was my favourite sporting tool. But when my friends lent his bat, I was a bit relieved. 7. Nicholas lent me his paint sprayer because I needed that to paint my kitchen. I have recently rented a small apartment in Leeds and it is located on the 8th floor of a residential complex. So when I wanted to decorate the house, I needed the paint sprayer to renovate the kitchen. Nicholas saved me from buying an expensive sprayer on that day. 8. Last semester, I had to attend a formal presentation at my college and to do so, I borrowed a formal suit from Robin, my best friend. In fact, we all were told to wear formal attires on that day and mine was left at home in New York. So, I needed to borrow one for the presentation.   Your preparation for this cue card topic would help you talk about the following topics as well: 1. Describe something you borrowed that was useful to you. 2. Describe an item you borrowed from one of your neighbours. 3. Describe a gift that one of your family members gave you. 4. Describe a situation when someone you know helped you. 5. Describe an item you do not have but you would like to have. 6. Describe a time when you rented or hired an item. 7. Describe something you own but do not use much.
Describe
something
you
borrowed
from your
friend
or
family
. You should say: what you
borrowed
when you
borrowed
it whom you
borrowed
it from and
explain
why you
borrowed
it. [You will
have to
talk
about the
topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
think
about what you are going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]
 
Model Answer 1: I have always remained a
very
vocal “opponent” of borrowing anything from anybody either
because
it would put a question mark on my “financial ability” or present me as a “
miserly
” person to others.
But
, necessity knows no bounds, and I
also
needed
to
borrow
something
, a scientific calculator
that is
, from one of my distant relatives.

It was about 10 years ago, when I was
still
a high school student, and I was
eagerly
waiting to
get
over with my final term examination. Everything was going
well
as I was finishing taking one
test
after another until the day to appear for the “Trigonometry”
test
had arrived. As usual, I was ready to
get
out of my
house
and hit the road in order to
take part
in the “Trigonometry”
test
.
But
, unfortunately,
just
when I was checking my calculator for the last
time
to
make
sure if it was in
good
working condition, I found out to my extreme “horror” that it wasn’t working at all! I
checked
the battery (which I had put
only
the previous month) and everything else by pushing all the “buttons” one after another,
but
it
just
wouldn’t switch on.
So
, I immediately decided to run to a nearby local store in order to
buy
the same kind of calculator,
but
all I could
expect
there was
some
“huge disappointment” as it didn’t have any scientific calculator to sell.

At this point, I felt
very
“helpless”.
But
,
just
when I was about to give up my hope to
get
a calculator, I
thought
of asking one distant math teacher relative of
mine
to rescue me. And, what a rescue it
really
was!

Anyway
, I
needed
to
borrow
the calculator
because
travelling to
different
stores one after another, without
actually
knowing which store was selling that type of calculator, would
surely
make
me late for my
test
. I had to
borrow
the scientific tool
also
because
, without it, I couldn’t
really
do much in my “Trigonometry”
test
as far as the issue of getting a
good
grade
was concerned
.
 
Model Answer 2: I would like to thank you for the opportunity you have
given
me to
talk
about
something
I once
borrowed
from a
friend
or a relative. To be honest, I can recall
many
such
events
when I had to turn to a
friend
or
family
member for
something
I required.
However
, for this cue card
topic
, I will
talk
about an
event
when I
borrowed
two thousand dollars from my
father
.
 
Just
after finishing college, I, along with two of my
friends
, planned to
start
a
small
business. It was
2016 and
I
was convinced
to be a partner of the proposed business and that's why
borrowed
the
money
from my
father
.
Besides
my university, I
got
serious about our new venture and I had been able to return the
money
within a year that I
took
from my
father
as a loan. When I returned the
money
to my
father
, he seemed surprised and I
explained
how our interior design venture is flourishing day by day. He
told
me that he was quite astonished that our
little
enterprise
eventually
saw
the light of success.
 
I thanked him for the
money
and
explained
how we worked together to
make
it a success. I
also
showed
my gratitude and mentioned that without his
money
, I could not have been a part of this business.
 
In numerous
times
, I
borrowed
books
, laptops, music player,
money
, CDs and
so
on from my
friends
and relatives
but
the two thousand dollars that I
took
from my
father
was
something
quite
different and
I am lucky that I decided to
borrow
it from my
father
for a
good
reason which is
eventually
paying off.
     
Sample Answer 3:
 
Once I had to
borrow
a history textbook from one of my
friends
and I would like to
talk
about this
event
. I am an undergraduate student and I
took
the History of Ancient Civilizations course in my fourth semester. I
needed
the
book
as I lost
mine
and
needed
to
get
some
information to
complete
an
important
assignment
.
 
I
borrowed
the
book
“History and Our Footsteps” from
Hien
Long. He is a
good
friend
of
mine
and
lives
near my residence. He is a helpful person and lent me the
book
though he
needed
it for the same purpose. I was happy to have the
book
and Long
also
was delighted
that he could
help
me.
 
I
needed
the
book
urgently
to
get
some
information to prepare an
assignment
that I was due to submit in a week. Unfortunately, I lost my
book
and did not know how it
was lost
! If I failed to submit the
assignment
, it might have been difficult for me to pass the course. As I remember, it was a
comparatively
easier
assignment
and
took
only
a few hours for me to
complete
but
I could not have done it without having the textbook as a reference.
 
I knew that I would require the
book
to
complete
the
assignment
but
I could not
buy
it
right
then.
So
, I sought
help
from Long as he
lived
nearby. I asked him to lend me the
book
and I promised to return it the
next
day. He was supportive
enough
and came to my home with the
book
and then I completed the
assignment
. I thanked him
heartily
for his genuine
help
.
 
Idea
generating: Cue Card
Topic
:
Describe
something
you
borrowed
from your
friend
or
family
. 1.
Before
going to the office last Monday, I
needed
to have
some
change
to pay the bus fare.
But
I could not manage it and lent
some
coins from my mom. In fact, it is
hard
to
get
a
change
of a large banknote in New Delhi and my mother was happy to offer her
help. 2
. I
was supposed
to go to a birthday party in my town last November
but
I could not find my necktie.
So
borrowed
that from my dad. It was not unusual for me to
borrow
something
from my dad
but
when I
borrowed
the necktie from him, I
realised
how
important
it is for me to be more careful about my wardrobe.

3.
Usually
, I do not
borrow
things from others
but
I had to break the
rule
last month. During a tutorial exam at my university, I had to
borrow
a pen.
Actually
, my pen ran out of ink and I did not have a spare one to
complete
the exam. I
was relieved
when Martha lent me one of her pens.

4. Smokers have
rules
worldwide. They do not hesitate to exchange cigarettes. I
borrowed
a cigarette from a
friend
cum
colleague several
times
. I am an IT professional in Cordova, Spain and
actually
forgot to
buy
my cigarette pack that day.

5. My
phone
drained all the charges a few days ago and
only
then I remembered about an
important
phone
call that I
was supposed
to
make
!
So
, I
borrowed
my dad’s
phone
. Putting my
phone
in charge, I lent the
phone
and had met the emergency.
   
6.  I
love
to play badminton and this is a popular sport in Japan. I had to
borrow
a badminton bat from a
friend
of
mine
as I broke
mine
the day
before
. It was a sad
event
for me
because
that was my
favourite
sporting tool.
But
when my
friends
lent his bat, I was a bit relieved.

7. Nicholas lent me his paint sprayer
because
I
needed
that to paint my kitchen. I have recently rented a
small
apartment in Leeds and it
is located
on the 8th floor of a residential complex.
So
when I wanted to decorate the
house
, I
needed
the paint sprayer to renovate the kitchen. Nicholas saved me from buying an expensive sprayer on that day.

8. Last semester, I had to attend a formal presentation at my college and to do
so
, I
borrowed
a formal suit from Robin, my best
friend
. In fact, we all were
told
to wear formal attires on that day and
mine
was
left
at home in New York.
So
, I
needed
to
borrow
one for the presentation.
 
Your preparation for this cue card
topic
would
help
you
talk
about the following
topics
as
well
:

1.
Describe
something
you
borrowed
that was useful to you.

2.
Describe
an item you
borrowed
from one of your
neighbours
.

3.
Describe
a gift that one of your
family
members gave you.

4.
Describe
a situation when someone
you know
helped
you.

5.
Describe
an item you do not have
but
you would like to have.

6.
Describe
a
time
when you rented or hired an item.

7.
Describe
something
you
own
but
do not
use
much.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
157Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
27Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe something you borrowed from your friend or family. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
17 paragraphs
1552 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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