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Describe a shop or a store you often go to. v.1

Describe a shop or a store you often go to. v. 1
Describe a shop or a store you often go to. You should say: where it is what type of people go there what types of goods are sold there and explain why you go there and like/dislike most about it. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: ‘Coffee Time’ is a coffee shop located near my university campus and it offers the best coffee in the town. It is on the 4th floor of the Grand Royal Plaza building which is just 3 blocks away from my university. Thank you, sir/madam, for this lovely cue card topic. Students, teachers and office executives who love coffee, milkshake, tea, fast food and like to play billiards mostly visit this coffee shop. Though this shop has a menu with over 20 items, coffee is their hot selling product. I sometimes drink tea or eat a sandwich, but most of the time I go there to have a refreshing cup of hot coffee. They sell both hot and cold coffee and as far as I recall, they have more than 20 variations of the coffee they serve. I would easily attest them as the best coffee maker in the town. I love their coffee and mainly visit this shop for that. The opportunity to play billiards for free seems like a discount to me! Apart from that, they have a great environment and polite and professional staff to serve the customers. I sometimes sit there to chat with my friends or pass an hour and there is no rush to empty the seat for a new customer. I love their music choice, interior design, and friendly attitude. They even offer a complimentary menu to regular customers. The only thing I dislike about them is the time they take to serve an item. It’s like I have to wait around 20-25 minutes every time I order something! The delay, I guess, irritates office executives who are in a hurry! I have notified them about it and their explanation to my complaint was something like - ‘We take time to serve a customer because we value quality and the taste. And to ensure the taste, we give our best effort. ’ The response might seem a little lame to others, but I don’t mind waiting for a few extra minutes especially when I have time to kill or have some friends with me to talk to.   Model Answer 2: Shopping is one of my least favourite things to do, but unfortunately, life doesn’t exactly care whether I like it or not. So, I have to go to a shop regardless. But, to make my “shopping job” little less troubling, I have picked up one particular shop – a super shop that is – which I would like to talk about. As I have mentioned earlier, it is a “super shop” which is only about a few minutes drive from where I live. But, since it is not really located at some popular part of the city, this super shop has remained “obscure” to many city-dwellers for the most part. But, still, this super shop attracts a rather large number of shoppers from all walks of life who almost regularly visit this shop. In fact, it wouldn’t be an exaggeration to suggest that most of the customers of this particular shop consider it as their “family super shop” because they have built up a special relationship with its staffs.   Here it is worth mentioning that it is not exactly a very big shop, probably not more than 1000 square feet, and so even a small gathering of customers in it at any given time would make this super shop look rather crowded. Anyway, the visitors of this super shop can be anybody, from regular factory workers to top executives of some big companies, who visit it in order to meet their daily shopping needs, be it buying just a loaf of bread or some fruits and vegetables. The super shop also offers other products and merchandises like cosmetics, perfumes, dairy products, toiletries, small kitchen appliances, meat products, fish and different kinds of snacks among other things. Anyway, I like visiting this shop mainly because it is very close to my home. Great customer services and relatively cheaper prices on many of its products, and the availability of some fresh fruits and vegetables are some of the reasons for which I like to visit this super shop. Finally, I like this shop because it remains clean and tidy most of the times.   Sample Answer 3: The store, named “The Daily Shop”, is located near the place where I live in the city of Samsun in Turkey. This is a large superstore and sells a wide variety of products. The shop has many positive aspects. First of all, it is accessible from any part of the city for its geographical location. Further, the interior decoration of the shop is admirable. This is an interesting cue card topic and I am glad to have it. I will answer the reaming questions and describe the shop in brief. And thank you for the opportunity to let me talk about it. This store is open to all and they have numerous types of commodities. People often go there to purchase products for their household use. Besides, this a good place to pick a gift item for someone. I guess the number of adult-male customers is higher than females and children on an ordinary day. On a weekend, however, more female customers could be seen. I am not sure why this is the case but I guess female shoppers prefer shopping on weekends rather than weekdays! The shop mostly sells the daily necessaries like the canned food, toiletries, cosmetics, fruits, groceries, vegetables, dairy products, fish, packaged food, various types of meats like beef, chicken, soft beverages like juice and the list goes on.   I appreciate their efforts to ensure the quality of each product. I frequently visit the shop as it is adjacent to my residence. So, while returning from my office, I go there to buy something I need at home. And I sometimes visit this store to check their latest collection of toiletries and perfumes. I also like the way they serve the clients.   More Ideas: Cue Card Topic: Describe a shop or store you often go to. 1. My mom has diabetes and she often gets hyper. So I need to visit the drugstore located at the end of my street where I live in Paris. I need to buy medicines for her. The most irritating thing is that she often skips the medicines and that is quite unexpected. 2. I often visit the phone-accessories selling shops at a local shopping mall here in Thailand. These shops sell different types of mobile accessories like mobile covers, tempered glass protectors, batteries, keypad etc. Whenever I need to buy an accessory for my mobile phone, I visit there. 3. I need groceries every day and that's why I often visit the grocer’s shop near my home. The shop is on the ground floor on the apartment block I live in Indonesia. It has become helpful for me and I often use my debit card to purchase groceries from there. 4. The urban planning subject that I am studying requires completing numerous projects and I often need to visit the DIY stores for that. I am a student at a local university in Malaysia and frequently visit the 'Help Yourself DIY' store located near my university. 5. Reading books is a pleasant hobby for me. I also like to add new books to my personal library. So, I frequently buy books from a local bookstore named – 'The Book Lovers'. It sells various types of books and reading materials. 6. Wearing new dresses is my passion and I like to follow the trendy fashions. Every month I get some new clothes. So, I have to visit clothing stores frequently. But I prefer to have my clothes from street shops in Shanghai. The prices are affordable and they have a great variation and rich collection. 7. My baby boy is only one-and-a-half-year-old. I frequently buy different types of toys for the baby. Hence, I need to go to toy shops regularly. I visit the toy store in Broadway in New York City at least once a week. 8. Visiting the newspaper stand daily has become a habit for me. I collect my newspaper from the seller every morning as my home is located at the end of Hang Dong, a street in Hanoi in Vietnam. Delivery service is unavailable there and I visit the newspaper stand to get my copy. Your preparation for the cue card topic - "Describe a shop or store you often go to" would help you talk about the following topics as well: 1. Describe a shop or store near your home. 2. Describe a small shop that you frequently go to. 3. Describe your favourite shop. 4. Describe a shop or market that has a large number of customers. 5. Describe a shop that sells expensive products. 6. Describe a shop or store that sells antique items. 7. Describe a shop from where you purchase gift items. 8. Describe a shop or market that has recently opened in your locality.
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a
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shop
or a
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store
you
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often
go to. You should say: where it is what
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type
of
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people
go there what
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types
of
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goods
are sold
there and
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explain
why you go there and like/dislike most about it. [You will
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have to
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talk
about the
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for one to two minutes. You have one
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minute
to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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1:
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‘Coffee
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Time’
is a
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coffee
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shop
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located
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near
my
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university
campus and it offers the best
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coffee
in the town. It is on the 4th floor of the Grand Royal Plaza building which is
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just
3 blocks away from my
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university
. Thank you, sir/madam, for this lovely
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cue
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card
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topic
. Students, teachers and office executives
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who
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love
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coffee
, milkshake, tea,
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fast
food and like to play billiards
mostly
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visit
this
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coffee
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shop
. Though this
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shop
has a menu with over 20
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items
,
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coffee
is their hot selling
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product
. I
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sometimes
drink tea or eat a sandwich,
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but
most of the
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time
I go there to have a refreshing cup of hot
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coffee
. They
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sell
both hot and
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cold
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coffee
and as far as I recall, they have more than 20 variations of the
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coffee
they
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serve
. I would
easily
attest them as the best
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coffee
maker in the town. I
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love
their
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coffee
and
mainly
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visit
this
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shop
for that. The opportunity to play billiards for free seems like a discount to me! Apart from that, they have a great environment and polite and professional staff to
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serve
the
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customers
. I
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sometimes
sit there to chat with my friends or pass an hour and there is no rush to empty the seat for a
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new
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customer
. I
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love
their music choice, interior design, and friendly attitude. They even offer a complimentary menu to regular
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customers
. The
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only
thing I dislike about them is the
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time
they take to
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serve
an
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item
. It’s like I
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have to
wait around 20-25 minutes every
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time
I order something! The delay,
I guess
, irritates office executives
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who
are in a hurry! I have notified them about it and their explanation to my complaint was something like
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-
‘We take
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time
to
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serve
a
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customer
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because
we value quality and the taste. And to ensure the taste, we give our best effort. ’ The response might seem a
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little
lame to others,
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but
I don’t mind waiting for a few extra minutes
especially
when I have
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time
to kill or have
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some
friends with me to
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talk
to.
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Model
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Answer
2:
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Shopping
is one of my least
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favourite
things to do,
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but
unfortunately, life doesn’t exactly care whether I like it or not.
So
, I
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have to
go to a
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shop
regardless.
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But
, to
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make
my
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“shopping
job”
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little
less troubling, I have picked up one particular
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shop
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–
a
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super
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shop
that is
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–
which I would like to
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talk
about.

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“super
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shop”
which is
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only
about a few minutes drive from where I
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live
.
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But
, since it is not
really
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located
at
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some
popular part of the city, this
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super
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shop
has remained “obscure” to
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many
city-dwellers
for the most part
.
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But
,
still
, this
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super
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attracts a
rather
large number of shoppers from all walks of life
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who
almost
regularly
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visit
this
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shop
. In fact, it wouldn’t be an exaggeration to suggest that most of the
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customers
of this particular
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shop
consider it as their “family
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super
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shop”
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because
they have built up a special relationship with its staffs.
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Here it is worth mentioning that it is not exactly a
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very
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big
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shop
,
probably
not more than
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1000 square feet
, and
so
even a
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small
gathering of
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customers
in it at any
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given
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time
would
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make
this
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super
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shop
look
rather
crowded.

Anyway
, the visitors of this
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super
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shop
can be anybody, from regular factory workers to top executives of
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some
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big
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companies
,
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who
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visit
it in order to
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meet
their
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daily
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shopping
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needs
, be it buying
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just
a loaf of bread or
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some
fruits and vegetables. The
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super
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shop
also
offers other
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products
and merchandises like cosmetics, perfumes, dairy
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products
, toiletries,
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small
kitchen appliances, meat
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products
, fish and
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different
kinds of snacks among other things.

Anyway
, I like visiting this
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shop
mainly
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because
it is
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very
close to my home. Great
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customer
services and
relatively
cheaper prices on
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many
of its
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products
, and the availability of
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some
fresh fruits and vegetables are
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some of the
reasons for which I like to
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visit
this
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super
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shop
.
Finally
, I like this
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shop
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because
it remains clean and tidy most of the
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times
.
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Sample
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Answer
3: The
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store
, named “The
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Daily
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Shop”
, is
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located
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near
the place where I
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live
in the city of
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Samsun
in Turkey. This is a large superstore and sells a wide variety of
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products
. The
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shop
has
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many
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positive
aspects.
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First of all
, it is accessible from any part of the city for its geographical location.
Further
, the interior decoration of the
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shop
is admirable. This is an interesting
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cue
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card
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topic and
I am glad to have it. I will
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answer
the reaming questions and
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describe
the
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shop
in brief
. And thank you for the opportunity to
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let
me
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talk
about it. This
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store
is open to
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all and
they have numerous
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types
of commodities.
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People
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often
go there to
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purchase
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products
for their household
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use
.
Besides
, this a
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good
place to pick a gift
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item
for someone.
I guess
the number of adult-male
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customers
is higher than females and children on an ordinary day. On a weekend,
however
, more female
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customers
could be
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seen
. I am not sure why this is the case
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but
I guess
female shoppers prefer
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shopping
on weekends
rather
than weekdays! The
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shop
mostly
sells the
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daily
necessaries like the canned food, toiletries, cosmetics, fruits, groceries, vegetables, dairy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products
, fish, packaged food, various
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types
of meats like beef, chicken, soft beverages like juice and the list goes on.
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I appreciate their efforts to ensure the quality of each
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product
. I
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frequently
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visit
the
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shop
as it is adjacent to my residence.
So
, while returning from my office, I go there to
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buy
something I
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need
at home. And I
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sometimes
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visit
this
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store
to
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check
their latest collection of toiletries and perfumes. I
also
like the way they
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serve
the clients.
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Ideas
:
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Cue
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Card
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Topic
:
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Describe
a
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shop
or
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store
you
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often
go to. 1. My mom has diabetes and she
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often
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gets
hyper.
So
I
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need
to
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visit
the drugstore
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located
at the
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end
of my street where I
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live
in Paris. I
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need
to
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buy
medicines for her. The most irritating thing is that she
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often
skips the medicines and
that is
quite unexpected.

2. I
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often
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visit
the phone-accessories selling
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shops
at a local
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shopping
mall here in Thailand. These
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shops
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sell
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different
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types
of mobile accessories like mobile covers, tempered glass protectors, batteries, keypad etc. Whenever I
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need
to
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buy
an accessory for my mobile phone, I
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visit
there.

3. I
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need
groceries every day and that's why I
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often
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visit
the grocer’s
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shop
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near
my home. The
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shop
is on the
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ground floor
on the apartment block I
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live
in Indonesia. It has become helpful for me and I
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often
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
my debit
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card
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
groceries from there.

4. The urban planning subject that I am studying requires completing numerous projects and I
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often
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need
to
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visit
the DIY
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stores
for that. I am a student at a local
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university
in Malaysia and
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frequently
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visit
the '
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Help
Yourself DIY'
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store
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located
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near
my
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university. 5
. Reading
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books
is a pleasant hobby for me. I
also
like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
add
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new
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books
to my personal library.
So
, I
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frequently
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buy
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books
from a local bookstore named
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
'The
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Book
Lovers'. It sells various
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types
of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
books
and reading materials.

6. Wearing
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new
dresses is my passion and I like to follow the trendy fashions. Every month I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
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new
clothes.
So
, I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
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visit
clothing
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stores
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frequently
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I prefer to have my clothes from street
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shops
in Shanghai. The prices are
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
affordable and
they have a great variation and rich collection.

7. My baby boy is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
one-and-a-half-year-
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old
. I
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frequently
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buy
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
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types
of toys for the baby.
Hence
, I
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need
to go to toy
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shops
regularly
. I
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visit
the toy
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store
in Broadway in
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New
York City at least once a week.

8. Visiting the newspaper stand
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daily
has become a habit for me. I collect my newspaper from the seller every morning as my home is
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located
at the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of Hang Dong, a street in Hanoi in Vietnam. Delivery service is unavailable there and I
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visit
the newspaper stand to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
my copy.

Your preparation for the
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cue
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card
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topic
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
-
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Describe
a
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shop
or
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store
you
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often
go to
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you
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talk
about the following
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topics
as
well
:

1.
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Describe
a
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shop
or
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store
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near
your home.

2.
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Describe
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop
that you
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
frequently
go to.

3.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
your
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.
favourite
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop. 4
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop
or market that has
Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"
a large number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
customers. 5
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop
that sells expensive
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
products. 6
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop
or
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
store
that sells antique
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items. 7
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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shop
from where you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
gift
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
items. 8
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
shop
or market that has recently opened in your locality.
20Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
246Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
32Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a shop or a store you often go to. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
20 paragraphs
1591 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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