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Describe an occasion when you borrowed something from others. v.1

Describe an occasion when you borrowed something from others. v. 1
Describe an occasion when you borrowed something from others. You should say: what you borrowed when you borrowed it whom you borrowed it from and explain why you borrowed the thing. Sample Answer 1: Well, I can think of many occasions when I had to borrow important things from others and for this cue card topic, I will talk about such an occasion when I borrowed a pen from an unknown person when I was in a bank. I had to borrow a pen to correct the amount I wrote on a cheque leaf and to add a new signature below it. This was an ordinary gel pen that I bowed from a person who was also in the bank to withdraw money. I can’t recall his name but he was standing just behind me at the cashier counter. It was probably 6 or 7 months ago when I went to my bank to withdraw some money. I wrote the cheque and signed it from home and went to the bank to withdraw the amount. I waited about 20 minutes in the queue and when I handed over the cheque to the cashier, she informed me that my current balance does not cover the amount I have written on the cheque and my savings account does not permit over-limit. She requested me to rewrite and figure so that she can give me the allowed amount. After she returned the cheque leave which I was supposed to correct, I found that I totally forgot to bring a pen. I asked the cashier if she had a spare pen and she told me that she had lent a pen to a customer and could not find it. I was quite embarrassed and had no other option but to ask the person for a pen who was standing behind me. He smiled and borrowed me a pen that I used to correct the cheque. After I finished with the correction, I thanked that person and showed my gratitude for lending me the pen. I asked his name and it was probably Richard or Ricardo, which I am not quite sure now. Borrowing something in desperate moments is something we cannot avoid and I think there are several occasions when I had to do it. The particular even I talked about is a moment I needed the pen and had no other way than to borrow it from someone.   Sample Answer 2: Enjoying a walk in the Grand Canyon National Park was a dream for me and I made the dream come true last month. But I had to borrow a car from Robin, my best college buddy. Since he was unable to go, he allowed me using his car. I am an undergrad student at the University of Arizona. Before moving to the university in Arizona this year, I used to live in Arkansas with my parents and other family members. So, I did not have the chance to visit the Grand Canyon National Park before. Besides, being an undergrad, I have to handle extreme academic pressure. Considering all the issues, I was unable to manage time. Finally, everything was set but I needed a car. Robin Campbell borrowed his car to me to make the trip. Actually, the academic pressure in the university goes round the year but it is a bit tolerable in the last quarter of the year (October - December). So, I made the plan to visit the Grand Canyon National Park and will stay there for a day. Accordingly, I made the plan, gathered some partners and arranged everything except a car. I could not realise before that this is an issue to be considered. In such situation, my buddy came forward to borrow his own car. In fact, he had bought this 2016 FORD Explorer a few months ago for travelling out of the city but could not use the car for academic engagement. So, he allowed using the car but under certain strict conditions. Robin Campbell is one of my best buddies in the university. He lives in the downtown with his parents. He loves surfing and taking part in outdoor activities and most importantly travelling. Both of us had made lots of planning to move here and there in the state but hardly could manage time for the short trips. Robin wanted to move to the Grand Canyon for a couple of days, in fact, he wanted to have some camping on the spot. But the others did not agree to stay at night under the open sky. Then it was decided that we will start early in the morning and come back by evening. Robin will drive the car and we will be his passengers. I had to borrow the car for some specific reasons. Firstly, I did not plan for the car in my original planning for the trip. Secondly, I have my own Fiat and have left that at Arkansas for my sister’s use. Besides, moving inside the park without a car is almost impossible. Using the public transport may help us reaching near the park, but we need our own vehicles to move into this huge area. Robin suddenly felt some abdominal disorders on the trip day. So, he was unable to drive and actually he was not ready for the trip at all. His physical condition made him unfit for the day. So, considering all the issues, I asked him to borrow the car and he willingly did. It was a memorable trip for us all indeed. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe an occasion when you borrowed something from others. 1. Last  month, I attended a wedding ceremony here in Adelaide. I had to borrow a tie clip to hold my tie perfectly. I borrowed the clip before going to the ceremony. Actually, I lost my tie clip a few days ago and did remember to get another one. So, I borrowed it from Andrew. When I use my coat, I do not need the tie clip but when I am without a coat, I use the clip to hold the firm position of the tie. And since the coat was sent for a dry wash, I had to go without it. So, I needed to borrow that tiny thing. 2. Attending a viva is a matter of luck here in Mumbai because the number of unemployed people is on the rise. So, I went to attend a viva and borrowed a leather bag to carry all my necessary documents. I borrowed it the night before the viva, 27th September this year, at a multinational company. I borrowed the bag from my cousin, Arvind. Actually, it was my very first viva for a job and I did not have any idea how to get prepared for it. Arvind told me to use a bag to carry the documents and lent me his one. 3. My colleagues were all set to visit my home and so, I had to borrow some decorative artworks. I borrowed the artworks at noon while they were set to arrive in the evening. Mr Simpson is my neighbour and a nice person indeed. He lent me the large piece of artwork to hang in my living room. I borrowed the piece because my living room was almost empty. I have rented the apartment recently and could not manage time to decorate it perfectly. 4. Celebrating the birthday of my younger sister was enjoyable but I had fallen into trouble with the cake stand. I forgot to bring it and so, had to borrow a cake stand from our neighbour Ms Julia. I borrowed the stand a few minutes before the arrival of the guests. In fact, if I had not borrowed the cake stand, it would be uncomfortable to cut the cake and distribute it among the guests. So, I needed to borrow the stand. 5. On the last day of my college, I wore a diamond necklace and I borrowed it from my mom. I borrowed the necklace in the early morning of the day and also asked her to lend it me a couple of days ago. So, mom did not object to letting me use the necklace on that special day. But she told me to be careful with the piece as it was an expensive one and a gift from my grandparents. Actually, I needed the necklace because I picked a dress which would only suit with diamond jewellery. Since I do not have my own, I borrowed it from mom. If you prepare for this cue card you should be able to answer the following cue cards as well: Talk about an event when someone helped you. Describe a time when you borrowed something from an unknown person. Describe an occasion when you forgot about something important. An occasion when you borrowed something from a friend or a relative.
Describe
an
occasion
when you
borrowed
something
from others. You should say: what you
borrowed
when you
borrowed
it whom you
borrowed
it from and
explain
why you
borrowed
the thing. Sample Answer 1:

Well
, I can
think
of
many
occasions
when I had to
borrow
important
things from others and for this
cue
card
topic, I will talk about such an
occasion
when I
borrowed
a
pen
from an unknown
person
when I was in a
bank
. I had to
borrow
a
pen
to correct the
amount
I wrote on a
cheque
leaf and to
add
a new signature below it. This was an ordinary gel
pen
that I bowed from a
person
who was
also
in the
bank
to withdraw money. I can’t recall his name
but
he was standing
just
behind me at the cashier counter. It was
probably
6 or 7
months
ago when I went to my
bank
to withdraw
some
money. I wrote the
cheque
and signed it from home and went to the
bank
to withdraw the
amount
. I waited about 20 minutes in the queue and when I handed over the
cheque
to the cashier, she informed me that my
current
balance does not cover the
amount
I have written on the
cheque
and my savings account does not permit over-limit. She requested me to rewrite and figure
so
that she can give me the
allowed
amount
. After she returned the
cheque
leave
which I
was supposed
to correct, I found that I
totally
forgot to bring a
pen
. I
asked
the cashier if she had a spare
pen and
she
told
me that she had lent a
pen
to a customer and could not find it. I was quite embarrassed and had no
other
option
but
to ask the
person
for a
pen
who was standing behind me. He smiled and
borrowed
me a
pen
that I
used
to correct the
cheque
. After I finished with the correction, I thanked that
person
and
showed
my gratitude for lending me the
pen
. I
asked
his name and it was
probably
Richard or Ricardo, which I am not quite sure
now
. Borrowing
something
in desperate moments is
something
we cannot avoid and I
think
there are several
occasions
when I had to do it. The particular even I talked about is a moment I
needed
the
pen
and had no
other
way than to
borrow
it from someone.
 
Sample Answer 2:

Enjoying a walk in the
Grand
Canyon
National
Park
was a dream for me and I made the dream
come
true last
month
.
But
I had to
borrow
a
car
from Robin, my best college buddy. Since he was unable to go, he
allowed
me using his car.

I am an undergrad student at the
University
of Arizona.
Before
moving to the
university
in Arizona this
year
, I
used
to
live
in Arkansas with my parents and
other
family members.
So
, I did not have the chance to visit the
Grand
Canyon
National
Park
before
.
Besides
, being an undergrad, I
have to
handle extreme academic pressure. Considering all the issues, I was unable to manage
time
.
Finally
, everything
was set
but
I
needed
a
car
. Robin Campbell
borrowed
his
car
to me to
make
the trip.

Actually
, the academic pressure in the
university
goes round the
year
but
it is a bit tolerable in the last quarter of the
year
(
October - December
).
So
, I made the plan to visit the
Grand
Canyon
National
Park
and will stay there for a day.
Accordingly
, I made the plan, gathered
some
partners and arranged everything except a
car
. I could not
realise
before
that this is an issue to
be considered
. In such situation, my buddy came forward to
borrow
his
own
car
. In fact, he had
bought
this 2016
FORD Explorer
a few
months
ago for travelling out of the city
but
could not
use
the
car
for academic engagement.
So
, he
allowed
using the
car
but
under certain strict conditions.

Robin Campbell is one of my best buddies in the
university
. He
lives
in the downtown with his parents. He
loves
surfing and taking part in outdoor activities and most
importantly
travelling. Both of us had made lots of planning to
move
here and there in the state
but
hardly could manage
time
for the short
trips
. Robin wanted to
move
to the
Grand
Canyon
for a couple of days, in fact, he wanted to have
some
camping
on the spot
.
But
the others did not
agree
to stay at night under the open sky. Then it
was decided
that we will
start
early in the morning and
come
back by evening. Robin will drive the
car and
we will be his passengers.

I had to
borrow
the
car
for
some
specific reasons.
Firstly
, I did not plan for the
car
in my original planning for the
trip
.
Secondly
, I have my
own
Fiat and have
left
that at Arkansas for my sister’s
use
.
Besides
, moving inside the
park
without a
car
is almost impossible. Using the public transport may
help
us
reaching
near the
park
,
but
we need our
own
vehicles to
move
into this huge area. Robin
suddenly
felt
some
abdominal disorders on the
trip
day.
So
, he was unable to drive and
actually
he was not ready for the
trip
at all. His physical condition made him unfit for the day.
So
, considering all the issues, I
asked
him to
borrow
the
car and
he
willingly
did. It was a memorable
trip
for us all
indeed
. More
Ideas
to talk about this
Cue
Card/ Candidate Task
Card
topic: Topic:
Describe
an
occasion
when you
borrowed
something
from others. 1. Last
 
month
, I attended a wedding ceremony here in Adelaide. I had to
borrow
a
tie
clip
to hold my
tie
perfectly
. I
borrowed
the
clip
before
going to the ceremony.
Actually
, I lost my
tie
clip
a few days ago and did remember to
get
another one.
So
, I
borrowed
it from Andrew. When I
use
my coat, I do not need the
tie
clip
but
when I am without a coat, I
use
the
clip
to hold the firm position of the
tie
. And since the coat was
sent
for a dry wash, I had to go without it.
So
, I
needed
to
borrow
that tiny thing.

2. Attending a viva is a matter of luck here in Mumbai
because
the number of unemployed
people
is on the rise.
So
, I went to attend a viva and
borrowed
a leather bag to carry all my necessary documents. I
borrowed
it the night
before
the viva, 27th September this
year
, at a multinational
company
. I
borrowed
the bag from my cousin, Arvind.
Actually
, it was my
very
first
viva for a job and I did not have any
idea
how to
get
prepared for it. Arvind
told
me to
use
a bag to carry the documents and lent me his one.

3. My colleagues were all set to visit my home and
so
, I had to
borrow
some
decorative artworks. I
borrowed
the artworks at noon while they
were set
to arrive in the evening. Mr Simpson is my
neighbour
and a nice
person
indeed
. He lent me the large piece of artwork to hang in my living room. I
borrowed
the piece
because
my living room was almost empty. I have rented the apartment recently and could not manage
time
to decorate it
perfectly
.

4. Celebrating the birthday of my younger sister was enjoyable
but
I had fallen into trouble with the
cake
stand
. I forgot to bring it and
so
, had to
borrow
a
cake
stand
from our
neighbour
Ms Julia. I
borrowed
the
stand
a few minutes
before
the arrival of the guests. In fact, if I had not
borrowed
the
cake
stand
, it would be uncomfortable to
cut
the
cake
and distribute it among the guests.
So
, I
needed
to
borrow
the
stand. 5
. On the last day of my college, I wore a diamond
necklace
and I
borrowed
it from my mom. I
borrowed
the
necklace
in the early morning of the day and
also
asked
her to lend it me a couple of days ago.
So
, mom did not object to letting me
use
the
necklace
on that special day.
But
she
told
me to be careful with the piece as it was an expensive one and a gift from my grandparents.
Actually
, I
needed
the
necklace
because
I picked a dress which would
only
suit with diamond
jewellery
. Since I do not have my
own
, I
borrowed
it from mom. If you prepare for this
cue
card
you should be able to answer the following
cue
cards
as
well
: Talk about an
event
when someone
helped
you.
Describe
a
time
when you
borrowed
something
from an unknown
person
.
Describe
an
occasion
when you forgot about
something
important
. An
occasion
when you
borrowed
something
from a friend or a relative.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
178Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19Mistakes
As a hawk flieth not high with one wing, even so a man reacheth not to excellence with one tongue.
Roger Ascham

IELTS speaking Describe an occasion when you borrowed something from others. v. 1

Speaking
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11 paragraphs
1498 words
5.5
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