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Describe a museum you have visited and liked. v.1

Describe a museum you have visited and liked. v. 1
Describe a museum you have visited and liked. You should say: what kind of museum it was when you went there what you saw and did there and explain why you liked this museum. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: Some people might argue otherwise, but I would certainly like to suggest that no trip to Toronto is complete without visiting the “Royal Ontario Museum” because it happens to be the largest museum of art, world culture and natural history in Canada. The museum attracts more than one million visitors every year from all over the world, making it the most visited museum in the country. When I visited the museum about a few years ago, I felt like I was looking at a “luminous beacon” (or a lighthouse), made of steel structure with aluminium cladding and prismatic forms of glasses, from outside as if it wants to make a bold statement to its visitors. But, what I saw, after entering the amazing looking museum complex, was what just blew away my mind because it was so huge inside with so many things to see, I would actually need the entire day, if not longer, to be able to see only a fraction of it. So, I chose to use my common sense instead and decided to see only those exhibitions which were generally popular among the common visitors. Included among those exhibitions are a “granite bust of Cleopatra” (an image of ancient Egyptian goddess), the magnificent “Paradise of Maitreya”, a mural that once adorned the wall of a Chinese Buddhist monastery, back in the days of Khubilai Khan and Marco Polo, and the bat cave (presenting bats in a simulated natural habitat to show how bats use echolocation to navigate at night). Then, I also saw a lot of dinosaurs fossils and skeletons, some of which were even real and original bones, among many other collections. Anyway, I really liked visiting this museum because it allowed me to wander around without any bar or restriction. Of course, the layout was also great, exhibits were all well designed and interactive, and the information was easily absorbed. In fact, I would dare suggest that there were definitely something for everybody to see and enjoy. Finally, the exhibitions were great overall and they all came at a fair price.   Sample Answer 2: I went to Paris a few months ago and visited the Museum of Perfume and that was a unique experience for me. The exhibits of the museum were perfumes from different times and categories. In fact, the idea of exhibiting perfumes and perfume bottles was a bit unusual to me. Later, I realized that it was good to be there and I felt wonderful with the displays of the museum. This is a nice candidate task card and I am feeling lucky to have it in my share. I went to the museum last February. The museum is located in Paris where I went to close a business deal. I got some leisurely hours to spend after a successful business meeting. Then I decided to visit any of the notable places in the city and went to this museum. This was a private museum that began its journey in 1983. The mansion where the museum is located looks delicate with its Napoleonic style. I was attracted by the name of the museum. At first, I thought it might be a majestic perfume selling shop but later I was thrilled with the exhibitions of the museum. The building looked strikingly beautiful and the perfume collections of different ages were something worth enjoying. Luckily, I got a guided tour and came to know about the history of perfume and their brands. I witnessed the perfume of different eras and was informed about the perfumery items of those ages. I liked this museum as it reveals the secret of perfume and informs the visitors about the history of perfumes of different ages. It preserves a remarkable number of items related to perfume production and located in the centre of the city. And there was no entry fee to access this museum. I was thrilled about the concept and enjoyed my time there. Model Answer 3:   Thank you very much for letting me talk about a museum where I have been to and relished my experience. In fact, whenever I visit a new city or a new country, I try to go to famous museums there to learn more about its history, culture, people and the way of life. For this cue card topic, I would like to talk about the ‘National Museum of Australia’, that I visited more than once and which is one of the best museums I have ever been to. As far as I know, this museum was established in 1980, not a long ago, and it is located in Acton, Australia. This museum preserves and interprets the social history of Australia and represents the people and events that have primarily shaped the country. It is a prominent witness of Australia's history. I went to visit the museum in 1999 for the first time with my father. I was merely a teenager at that time. However, I went there with some of my friends in 2016 for the second time and the memory of my visit is still fresh. My latest visit to the museum was a fabulous experience. I learned that this is the world's largest museum in terms of its collection of Aboriginal bark painting. It has more than 50 thousand years of indigenous heritage and prolific collections of different events of Australian history. It is a must visiting place for anyone interested in Australian history. This museum is also famous for its publications of a wide range of books, journals and catalogues besides the innovative technology it usages that have brought an international reputation for the museum. The location of the museum is another attraction to the visiting tourists as it is situated on the Acton peninsula and it offers a great view both from the inside and outside. I was taken aback by the splendid and memorable way it has decorated its entrance, a unique design for a museum. Anyone will find so many reasons to like this museum and I adored it specifically for its outstanding design, use of technology and unique collections. Visiting this museum was like witnessing the past and I felt like I had been time travelling to the past. I liked it so much that I would like to visit it again someday.   Idea generating: Cue Card Topic: Describe a museum you have visited and liked. 1. The Metropolitan Museum of Art (better known as the 'Met') is a classical place in New York City in the USA to visit. I was amazed by the paintings and sculptures the museum has as a collection. In fact, all the artefacts were adorable. 2. My visit to the Pergamon Museum in Berlin gave me the biggest surprise of my life. The museum was filled with fantastic artefacts. I wondered at the huge Altar of Zeus. In fact, I did not have any idea about it before. The Ishtar Gate of Babylon is a gem. 3. Indian Museum in Kolkata contains some rare collections and ornaments of ancient time. It comes with six sections and contains numerous scientific and cultural artefacts. The museum was founded in 1814 and it is still a great attraction for many tourists and locals. 4. Canada Science and Technology Museum is a wonderful place to get new ideas about science and technology. The museum has exhibitions of virtual travelling, science and other things. It also runs some educational programmes. 5. My last visit to the Acropolis Museum was awesome. The museum mostly focuses on the archaeological findings of Athens. The museum houses numerous artefacts including rocks of different ages. It was founded in 2003 and it has gained huge popularity these days. 6. The Pakistan Army Museum is a great place indeed to know about the military of the country. It is located in Rawalpindi and been in operation since 1961. The museum contains relics of Pakistan army like old uniforms, tanks, weaponry etc. 7. The Hong Kong Science Museum exhibits the wonders of science. This is a thematic museum in Kowloon in Hong Kong. It exhibits areas for children, driving simulation, video flight etc. The museum houses around 500 exhibits. 8. The Museum of Islamic Art is located in Doha, Qatar and is a magnificent place where some old Islamic manuscripts are exhibited. The ceramic and metal works are impressive. Besides, musical events of this museum are adorable. 9. My recent visit to the State Russian Museum was exceptional. It was established in 1895. The collections of the museum were taken from some other museums but the prevalence of private collections is more there. If you can talk about this cue card topic, you should be able to answer the following topics as well: 1. Describe your favourite museum. 2. Describe a museum in your city/country. 3. Describe a museum or art gallery that you want to visit. 4. Describe a museum or art gallery which does not have an entry fee. 5. Describe a place you would like to visit again. 6. Describe a worth visiting place in your city. 7. Describe a place you went with your friends. 8. Describe a place you would recommend to a foreign tourist to visit. 9. Describe a famous museum or gallery you have visited. 10. Describe a public place in your city.
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because
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, world culture and natural
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history
in Canada. The
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attracts more than one million
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every year from all over the world, making it the most
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in the country.

When I
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about a few years ago, I felt like I was looking at a “luminous beacon” (or a lighthouse), made of steel structure with
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cladding and prismatic forms of glasses, from outside as if it wants to
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.
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really
liked visiting this
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allowed
me to wander around without any bar or restriction.
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,
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exhibits
were all
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well designed
and interactive, and the information was
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, I would dare suggest that there were definitely something for everybody to
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see
and enjoy.
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, the exhibitions were
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overall and
they all came at a
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fair
price.
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2: I
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and that was a unique experience for me. The
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were
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from
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bottles was a bit unusual to me. Later, I realized that it was
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to be there and I felt wonderful with the displays of the
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card and
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last February. The
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located
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. This was a private
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that began its journey in 1983. The mansion where the
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is
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looks delicate with its Napoleonic style. I
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by the name of the
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. At
first
, I
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later I
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. The building looked
strikingly
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were something worth enjoying. Luckily, I
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about the perfumery items of those
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as it reveals the secret of
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and informs the
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. It preserves a remarkable number of items related to
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production and
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centre
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was thrilled
about the concept and enjoyed my
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there.

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where I have been to and relished my experience. In
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, whenever I
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new
city or a
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country, I try to go to
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museums
there to learn more about its
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history
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people
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about the ‘National
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Museum
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I have ever been to. As far as I know, this
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was established
in 1980, not a long ago, and it is
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located
in Acton, Australia. This
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preserves and interprets the social
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history
of Australia and represents the
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people
and
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events
that have
primarily
shaped the country. It is a prominent witness of Australia's
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. I
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in 1999 for the
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with my father. I was
merely
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is
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was a fabulous experience. I learned that this is the world's largest
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in terms of its
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of Aboriginal bark painting. It has more than 50 thousand years of indigenous heritage and prolific
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events
of Australian
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for anyone interested in Australian
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is
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for its publications of a wide range of books, journals and
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catalogues
besides
the innovative
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technology
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it usages
that have brought an international reputation for the
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museum
. The location of the
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is another attraction to the visiting tourists as it
is situated
on the Acton peninsula and it offers a
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great
view both from the inside and outside. I
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. Anyone will find
so
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many
reasons to like this
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and I adored it
specifically
for its outstanding design,
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of
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technology
and unique
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. Visiting this
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was like witnessing the past and I felt like I had been
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time
travelling to the past. I liked it
so
much that I would like to
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visit
it again someday.
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:
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Describe
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museum
you have
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visited
and liked. 1. The Metropolitan
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of
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Art
(better known as the 'Met') is a classical
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place
in
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New
York City in the USA to
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visit
. I
was amazed
by the paintings and sculptures the
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has as a
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collection
. In
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fact
, all the
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artefacts
were adorable.

2. My
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to the
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Pergamon
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in Berlin gave me the biggest surprise of my life. The
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museum
was filled
with fantastic
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artefacts
. I wondered at the huge Altar of Zeus. In
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, I did not have any
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about it
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before
. The Ishtar Gate of Babylon is a gem.

3. Indian
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in Kolkata contains
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some
rare
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and ornaments of ancient
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. It
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comes
with six sections and contains numerous scientific and cultural
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artefacts
. The
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was founded
in 1814 and it is
still
a
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great
attraction for
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many
tourists and locals.

4. Canada
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Science
and
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is a wonderful
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get
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about
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and
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. The
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has exhibitions of virtual travelling,
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science
and other things. It
also
runs
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educational
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programmes
. 5. My last
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to the Acropolis
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was awesome. The
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mostly
focuses on the archaeological findings of Athens. The
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houses
numerous
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artefacts
including rocks of
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different
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ages
. It
was founded
in 2003 and it has gained huge popularity these days.

6. The Pakistan Army
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Museum
is a
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great
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place
indeed
to know about the military of the country. It is
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located
in Rawalpindi and been in operation since 1961. The
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museum
contains relics of Pakistan army like
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old
uniforms, tanks, weaponry etc.

7. The Hong Kong
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Science
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Museum
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exhibits
the wonders of
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science
. This is a thematic
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museum
in Kowloon in Hong Kong. It
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exhibits
areas for children, driving simulation, video flight etc. The
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museum
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houses
around 500
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exhibits. 8
. The
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Museum
of Islamic
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Art
is
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located
in Doha, Qatar and is a magnificent
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place
where
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some
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old
Islamic manuscripts
are exhibited
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
ceramic and metal works are impressive.
Besides
, musical
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events
of this
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museum
are adorable.

9. My recent
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visit
to the State Russian
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Museum
was exceptional. It
was established
in 1895. The
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collections
of the
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museum
were taken
from
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some
other
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museums
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but
the prevalence of private
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collections
is more there.

If you can
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talk
about this cue
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card
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topic
, you should be able to
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answer
the following
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topics
as
well
:

1.
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Describe
your
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.
favourite
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museum. 2
.
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Describe
a
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museum
in your city/country.

3.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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museum
or
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art
gallery that you want to
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visit. 4
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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museum
or
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art
gallery which does not have an entry fee.

5.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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place
you would like to
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visit
again.

6.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a worth visiting
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place
in your city.

7.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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place
you
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went
with your friends.

8.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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place
you would recommend to a foreign tourist to
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visit. 9
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
famous
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museum
or gallery you have
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visited. 10
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a public
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place
in your city.
19Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
223Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
30Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a museum you have visited and liked. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
23 paragraphs
1632 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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