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Describe something that you have always wanted to buy. v.1

Describe something that you have always wanted to buy. v. 1
Describe something that you have always wanted to buy. You should say: what it is how long you wanted to buy it why you wanted to buy it and explain what you would do after you buy it. Sample Answer: I have always wanted to buy a flat near a lake and open space. My father has his own home where I used to live until I had to move to a new city for my job. Currently. I am living in a rented house in the metropolitan city for my job and yet I have a great desire to own a house of my own that would be a large house with lots of rooms and which would be near a lake or river. I have wanted to buy this house most probably after I moved to the new city where I am currently residing. I wanted a house of my own where I would have my family members and that would give me freedom of living. The house would be near open space and close to nature. It is almost impossible to have such a house in the metropolitan city I am currently living in. I have the plan to return to my hometown, buy this house and then start a business of my own. I will have the house decorated and arranged in the way I have always wanted. I will have my family members to move to this house. I will keep an open space in front of this house and I will grow many plants and flowers in this open space. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe a gift you want to get.   Describe something you are planning to buy.   Describe something important you possess. Describe a gift you gave to a friend.
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Describe
something that you have always
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wanted
to
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buy
. You should say: what it is how long you
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wanted
to
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buy
it why you
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wanted
to
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buy
it and
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explain
what you would do after you
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buy
it. Sample Answer:

I have always
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wanted
to
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buy
a flat near a lake and
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open
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space
. My father has his
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own
home where I
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used
to
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live
until I had to
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move
to a new city for my job.
Currently
. I am living in a rented
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house
in the metropolitan city for my
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job and
yet
I have a great desire to
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own
a
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house
of my
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own
that would be a large
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house
with lots of rooms and which would be near a lake or river.

I have
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wanted
to
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buy
this
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house
most
probably
after I
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moved
to the new city where I am
currently
residing.
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I
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wanted
a
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house
of my
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own
where I would have my family members and that would give me freedom of living. The
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house
would be near
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open
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space
and close to nature. It is almost impossible to have such a
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house
in the metropolitan city I am
currently
living in. I have the plan to return to my hometown,
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buy
this
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house
and then
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start
a business of my
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own
.

I will have the
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house
decorated and arranged in the way I have always
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wanted
.
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I
will have my family members to
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move
to this
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house
.
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I
will
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keep
an
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open
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space
in front of this
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house
and I will grow
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many
plants and flowers in this
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open
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space
. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
a gift you want to
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get
.
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Describe
something you are planning to
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buy
.
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Describe
something
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important
you possess.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a gift you gave to a friend.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
39Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe something that you have always wanted to buy. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
4 paragraphs
319 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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