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Talk about a hobby that someone in your family has. v.1

Talk about a hobby that someone in your family has. v. 1
Talk about a hobby that someone in your family has. You should say: Whose hobby it is Where and when s/he do it Why s/he enjoys it And say if you would enjoy doing the same thing or not, and why. Sample Answer: My younger sister has a hobby that I found interesting and this is a rare hobby in my experience. My younger sister’s name is (…say a name…. ) and she is a bright and intelligent girl. Her academic record is enviable and she had been the headline of our local newspaper for her extraordinary merit in mathematics. She has a hobby of collecting famous persons’ picture from the newspaper. She already has more than 5 volumes of albums which are full of the faces of famous people. She has maintained an index for the famous person’s name and all of the pictures were collected from the local and international newspapers. She had few others hobbies that I noticed different times including blog writing and stamp collecting but I have never found her that much fascinated with other hobbies as I found her with the current one she has. One day she told me that when she would be around 26 years old, she would make a Guinness record for the hobby she has. I am not sure if that’s going to be fulfilled or not but I find her hobby very interesting. We have 2 newspapers in our house and she mostly collects the pictures of famous persons from those newspapers. Sometimes she goes to the nearby library that has almost all the local and international newspapers and she had made a way to having the pictures from the old newspapers from this library. I have thought about her hobby several times and I venerate her hobby and I am sure the hobby helps her to learn about the famous persons. But personally, I would not be that much interested in having the same hobby. First of all, adopting this particular hobby would put me in a position that others would think that I have simply copied my sister's idea and I have more interest in blogging and content writing and collecting coins than simply collecting pictures from newspapers. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as well: Describe your favourite past time. Describe something you enjoy doing.   Describe an interesting hobby you know about.   Describe a hobby you had in your childhood.
Talk about a
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hobby
that someone in your family has. You should say: Whose
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hobby
it is Where and when s/he
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do
it Why s/he enjoys it And say if you would enjoy doing the same thing or not, and why. Sample Answer:

My younger sister has a
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hobby
that I found interesting and this is a rare
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hobby
in my experience. My younger sister’s name is (…say a name….
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)
and she is a bright and intelligent girl. Her academic record is
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enviable and
she had been the headline of our local
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newspaper
for her extraordinary merit in mathematics.

She has a
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hobby
of
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collecting
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famous
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persons’
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picture
from the
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newspaper
. She already has more than 5 volumes of albums which are full of the faces of
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famous
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people
.
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She
has maintained an index for the
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famous
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person’s
name and
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all of the
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pictures
were collected
from the local and international
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newspapers
.
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She
had few others
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hobbies
that I noticed
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different
times including blog writing and stamp
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collecting
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but
I have never found her that much fascinated with other
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hobbies
as I found her with the
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current
one she has.

One day she
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told
me that when she would be around 26 years
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old
, she would
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make
a Guinness record for the
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hobby
she has. I am not sure if that’s going to
be fulfilled
or not
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but
I find her
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hobby
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very
interesting. We have 2
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newspapers
in our
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house and
she
mostly
collects the
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pictures
of
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famous
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persons
from those
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newspapers
.
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Sometimes
she goes to the nearby library that has almost all the local and international
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newspapers and
she had made a way to having the
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pictures
from the
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old
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newspapers
from this library.

I have
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thought
about her
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hobby
several times and I venerate her
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hobby and
I am sure the
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hobby
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helps
her to learn about the
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famous
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persons
.
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But
personally
, I would not be that much interested in having the same
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hobby
.
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First of all
, adopting this particular
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hobby
would put me in a position that others would
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think
that I have
simply
copied my sister's
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idea
and I have more interest in blogging and content writing and
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collecting
coins than
simply
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collecting
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pictures
from
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newspapers
. Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card would enable you to talk about the following Cue Cards as
well
:
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Describe
your
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favourite
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past time
.
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Describe
something you enjoy doing.
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Describe
an interesting
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hobby
you know
about.
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Describe
a
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hobby
you had in your childhood.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
46Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Mistakes

IELTS speaking Talk about a hobby that someone in your family has. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
5 paragraphs
423 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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