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Describe an old object which your family has kept for a long time. v.1

Describe an old object which your family has kept for a long time. v. 1
Describe an old object which your family has kept for a long time. You should say: what the object is where your family got it from how long it has been in your family and explain why your family has kept this old object for a long time.   Model Answer 1: There usually are so many objects in a household that we use for different purposes. Of course, not all of these objects are equally valued by us because some of them become old and worn out while the others look still new and decent. But, then, there are some objects in our households which we use for a long time but they still look very nice. Today, I would like to talk about one such object which my family has used and kept for a long time. The object, which my family has kept for a long time, is a dining table. I have seen so many objects being replaced by newer items in my family for the last 15 years or so, but the dining table is still declaring its presence at our dining space aloud. Of course, the dining chairs around it have been changed on numerous occasions, but the dining table is still there. This is a round-shape dining table which is made of “mahogany” wood. By the way, I must admit that this is one of the best mahogany wood tables I have ever seen. In fact, the wood of this particular table seems to be so seasoned and solid that I can hardly see any scratch on it, even after using it for almost 15 years. Of course, some regular painting works on this table, which was made at the shop of a local carpenter in my home town, have also helped it to remain smooth and in good shape for such a long time. Anyway, we all like the dining table, and it probably will remain in our dining space for another 210 years because it has some emotional value attached to it. In fact, my parents have kept this table for such a long time because it was made from the wood of a tree, which was planted by my paternal grandfather about 60 years ago. So, again, it is some emotional stuff. Besides, I think that my family has kept it for such a long time also because it still looks nice and decent after using for so many years.   Sample Answer 2: Some of the books which once owned and used by my grandfather are still kept with care in our house. My grandfather was a doctor and he kept his medical books and reference books with him. When he died, I was a 5 years old kid and can hardly remember things about him. But I heard that he was a great person and a first-class doctor. Everyone in our locality revered him and respected him very much. After his death, my father took one of his used tables, an armchair, and a big portrait of my grand-grandfather and some of my grandfather’s books as the remembrance of his memory. Among those things my grandfather’s medical books survived and are still reserved in our bookshelf. These books would be more than 70-80 years old and we have those books on our shelf for the last 20 years. The caretakers sometimes bring out those books and clean those and finally put them on the shelf again. These books are mainly the academic books of my grandfather's medical college and some of the reference books for his practice as a doctor. I once opened some of the books when I was a school boy and found almost everything very obscure. Basically, they are medical science-related terms and that's why seemed jargon to me. My family has kept these books as the souvenir of my grandfather's memory. My father was very beloved by my grandfather and I am sure he esteemed my grandfather very much. These books are the only tangible belongings my father has which were used by my grandfather and conveys my grandfather's reminiscences. Though these books do not have their material values, they are priceless to our family and remind us of the precious memory of our grandfather.   Similar Cue Card Topics: 1. Describe something old in your house. 2. Describe an old thing in your family. 3. Describe something your family has kept for a long time.
Describe
an
old
object
which your
family
has
kept
for a
long
time
. You should say: what the
object
is where your
family
got
it from how
long
it has been in your
family
and
explain
why your
family
has
kept
this
old
object
for a
long
time
.
 
Model Answer 1:

There
usually are
so
many
objects
in a household that we
use
for
different
purposes.
Of course
, not all of these
objects
are
equally
valued by us
because
some
of them become
old
and worn out while the others look
still
new and decent.
But
, then, there are
some
objects
in our households which we
use
for a
long
time
but
they
still
look
very
nice.
Today
, I would like to talk about one such
object
which my
family
has
used
and
kept
for a
long
time.

The
object
, which my
family
has
kept
for a
long
time
, is a
dining
table
. I have
seen
so
many
objects
being replaced
by newer items in my
family
for the last 15 years or
so
,
but
the
dining
table
is
still
declaring its presence at our
dining
space aloud.
Of course
, the
dining
chairs around it have been
changed
on numerous occasions,
but
the
dining
table
is
still
there.

This is a round-shape
dining
table
which
is made
of “mahogany”
wood
. By the way, I
must
admit that this is one of the best mahogany
wood
tables
I have ever
seen
. In fact, the
wood
of this particular
table
seems to be
so
seasoned and solid that I can hardly
see
any scratch on it, even after using it for almost 15 years.
Of course
,
some
regular painting works on this
table
, which
was made
at the shop of a local carpenter in my home town, have
also
helped
it to remain smooth and in
good
shape for such a
long
time.

Anyway
, we all like the
dining
table
, and it
probably
will remain in our
dining
space for another 210 years
because
it has
some
emotional value attached to it. In fact, my parents have
kept
this
table
for such a
long
time
because
it
was made
from the
wood
of a tree, which
was planted
by my paternal
grandfather
about 60 years ago.
So
, again, it is
some
emotional stuff.
Besides
, I
think
that my
family
has
kept
it for such a
long
time
also
because
it
still
looks nice and decent after using for
so
many
years.
 
Sample Answer 2:

Some of the
books
which once
owned
and
used
by my
grandfather
are
still
kept
with care in our
house
. My
grandfather
was a
doctor and
he
kept
his
medical
books
and reference
books
with him. When he
died
, I was a 5 years
old
kid and can hardly remember things about him.
But
I heard that he was a great person and a
first
-
class
doctor. Everyone in our locality revered him and respected him
very
much. After his death, my father took one of his
used
tables
, an armchair, and a
big
portrait of my grand-grandfather and
some
of my
grandfather’s
books
as the remembrance of his memory. Among those things my
grandfather’s
medical
books
survived and are
still
reserved in our bookshelf.

These
books
would be more than 70-80 years
old and
we have those
books
on our shelf for the last 20 years. The caretakers
sometimes
bring out those
books
and clean those and
finally
put them on the shelf again. These
books
are
mainly
the academic
books
of my grandfather's
medical
college and
some of the
reference
books
for his practice as a doctor. I once opened
some of the
books
when I was a school boy and found almost everything
very
obscure.
Basically
, they are
medical
science-related terms and that's why seemed jargon to me.

My
family
has
kept
these
books
as the souvenir of my grandfather's memory. My father was
very
beloved by my
grandfather and
I am sure he esteemed my
grandfather
very
much. These
books
are the
only
tangible belongings my father has which were
used
by my
grandfather
and conveys my grandfather's reminiscences. Though these
books
do not have their material values, they are priceless to our
family
and remind us of the precious memory of our
grandfather
.
 
Similar Cue Card Topics: 1.
Describe
something
old
in your
house
.

2.
Describe
an
old
thing in your
family. 3
.
Describe
something your
family
has
kept
for a
long
time
.
18Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
99Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe an old object which your family has kept for a long time. v. 1

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10 paragraphs
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5.5
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