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Describe an interesting part of your country. v.1

Describe an interesting part of your country. v. 1
Describe an interesting part of your country. You should say: where it is what people can see and do there what it is famous for and explain why you think it is an interesting place.   [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: Being a site to one of the 7th wonders of the world, it is not really necessary to introduce China anew. But, then again, a country as huge, unique and diverse as China, with more than 4000 years of recorded history, certainly deserves to be re-discovered again and again. For now, we will just talk about an interesting part of my country (instead of the whole country) just to see what it has in store for us and the rest of the world. The name of this place is “Chengdu” (the capital city of the Sichuan province) which is located in the southwest part of China. Chengdu is a very interesting place because of its many cultural, natural and historical sites in and around the city. In fact, west Chengdu offers some of the most beautiful and breathtaking natural sceneries in China. If someone wants to see some crystal-clear lakes, waterfalls, colourful ponds, small canyons and mountains covered with snow, Chengdu is the place to go. Chengdu is also home to many “Tibetan” people. In fact, as soon as you step into this great city, consider that you have started your journey into the “mysterious world of Tibet”. However, apart from being an interesting place, Chengdu is one of the most, if not the most, famous place in the world for a very special and unique reason. Can you guess why? Well, the place is so famous because it is home to one of the most beautiful and cute creatures under the sky called “Pandas”. In fact, this is the number one reason for which tourists from all over the world visit “Chengdu”. The lovely giant pandas and panda cubs there are just so adorable that you will actually want to work there as a “panda keeper”. And guess what, you can actually become one! This place is also very famous for its delicious “Sichuan dishes” like “Kung Pao Chicken” and Hotpot which can be really, really spicy and hot! Finally, this place is also a famous place because if you remember “Po” in movie “Kung Fu Panda 2”, then you should also remember how the big, chubby, squishy and cuddly panda “Po” visited Chengdu (his home town) to learn more about his ancestors and family history! Pretty neat, isn’t it!
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Describe
an
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interesting
part of your
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country
. You should say: where it is what
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people
can
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see
and do there what it is
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famous
for and
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explain
why you
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think
it is an
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interesting
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place
.
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[You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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Model Answer 1: Being a site to one of the 7th wonders of the
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world
, it is not
really
necessary to introduce China anew.
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But
, then again, a
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country
as huge, unique and diverse as China, with more than 4000 years of recorded history,
certainly
deserves to be re-discovered again and again. For
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now
, we will
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just
talk about an
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interesting
part of my
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country
(
instead
of the whole
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country)
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just
to
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see
what it has in store for us and the rest of the
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world
. The name of this
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place
is “Chengdu” (the capital city of the Sichuan province) which
is located
in the southwest part of China.

Chengdu is a
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interesting
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place
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because
of its
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many
cultural, natural and historical sites in and around the city. In fact, west Chengdu offers
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some
of the most
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beautiful
and breathtaking natural sceneries in China. If someone wants to
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see
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some
crystal-
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clear
lakes, waterfalls,
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colourful
ponds,
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small
canyons and mountains covered with snow, Chengdu is the
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place
to go. Chengdu is
also
home to
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many
“Tibetan”
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people
. In fact, as
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soon
as you step into this great city, consider that you have
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started
your journey into the “mysterious
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world
of Tibet”.

However
, apart from being an
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interesting
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place
, Chengdu is one of the most, if not the most,
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famous
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place
in the
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world
for a
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very
special and unique reason. Can you guess why?
Well
, the
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place
is
so
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famous
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because
it is home to one of the most
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beautiful
and cute creatures under the sky called “Pandas”. In fact, this is the number one reason for which tourists from all over the
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world
visit “Chengdu”. The lovely giant pandas and panda cubs there are
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just
so
adorable that you will
actually
want to work there as a “panda keeper”. And guess what, you can
actually
become one! This
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place
is
also
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very
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famous
for its delicious “Sichuan dishes” like “
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Kung
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Pao
Chicken” and Hotpot which can be
really
,
really
spicy and hot!

Finally
, this
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place
is
also
a
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famous
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place
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because
if you remember “Po” in movie “
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Kung
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Fu
Panda 2”, then you should
also
remember how the
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big
, chubby, squishy and cuddly panda “Po” visited Chengdu (his home town) to learn more about his ancestors and family history! Pretty neat, isn’t it!
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
29Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Mistakes
As a hawk flieth not high with one wing, even so a man reacheth not to excellence with one tongue.
Roger Ascham

IELTS speaking Describe an interesting part of your country. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
4 paragraphs
459 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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