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Describe an important tree or plant in your country. v.1

Describe an important tree or plant in your country. v. 1
Describe an important tree or plant in your country. You should say: what it is where it grows how it looks like and explain why is it an important tree/plant in your country. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you are going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: Bangladesh, apart from being home to the largest mangrove forest in the world, is also a land of many other kinds of trees, making it one of the greenest and beautiful countries in the world at the same time. However, today we will pick only one of those many different kinds of trees and talk about it. The common name of this tree, I am about to talk, is “Date palm”, and its scientific name is Phoenix Dactylifera. However, in Bengali language, it is called “Khejur” tree. Being a tree of the palm family, it grows pretty much all over Bangladesh whether we want to grow them in a field or our front yard. It can be anywhere between 15 feet to 60 feet tall, and its trunk is about 10 cubic feet thick at its bottom. Having leaves of about 5 to 6 feet long (depending on the size of the tree), its leaflets are thin and pointy, and can be about one to one-and-half feet long and 0. 75 inch wide. The date palm tree is an important tree mainly because of its juice and syrup which is just loved by everybody in my country during the winter time. In fact, the livelihood of many people depends on this tree since they collect the juice of this tree use it to make “jiggery” (or “Gur”) in our local language which, in turn, is also used to make some really savoury and sweet dishes. Its trunks are also used to make furniture and timbers (suitable for structural uses) while its leaflets are also used to make beautiful baskets and mats. Besides, the fibre of date palm trees is used to make rope and packaging materials of real high qualities. Thus, the date palm has remained a tree of great economic value in my country for thousands of years.
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Describe
an
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important
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tree
or plant in your
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country
. You should say: what it is where it grows how it looks like and
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explain
why is it an
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important
tree/plant in your
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country
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you are going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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Model Answer 1: Bangladesh, apart from being home to the largest mangrove forest in the world, is
also
a land of
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many
other kinds of
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trees
, making it one of the greenest and
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beautiful
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countries
in the world at the same time.
However
,
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today
we will pick
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only
one of those
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many
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different
kinds of
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trees
and talk about it. The common name of this
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tree
, I am about to talk, is
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“Date
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palm”
, and its scientific name is
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Phoenix Dactylifera
.
However
, in Bengali language, it
is called
“
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Khejur
” tree.

Being a
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tree
of the
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palm
family, it grows pretty much all over Bangladesh whether we want to grow them in a field or our front yard. It can be anywhere between
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15 feet
to
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60 feet
tall, and its trunk is about
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10 cubic feet
thick at its bottom. Having
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leaves
of about 5 to
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6 feet
long (depending on the size of the
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tree)
, its leaflets are thin and pointy, and can be about one to one-and-half feet long and 0.
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75 inch
wide.

The
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date
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palm
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tree
is an
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important
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tree
mainly
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because
of its juice and syrup which is
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just
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loved
by everybody in my
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country
during the winter time. In fact, the livelihood of
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many
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people
depends on this
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tree
since they collect the juice of this
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tree
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use
it to
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make
“
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jiggery
” (or “
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Gur
”) in our local language which, in turn, is
also
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used
to
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make
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some
really
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savoury
and sweet dishes. Its trunks are
also
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used
to
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make
furniture and timbers (suitable for structural
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uses
) while its leaflets are
also
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used
to
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make
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beautiful
baskets and mats.
Besides
, the
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fibre
of
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date
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palm
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trees
is
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used
to
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make
rope and packaging materials of real high qualities.
Thus
, the
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date
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palm
has remained a
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tree
of great economic value in my
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country
for thousands of years.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe an important tree or plant in your country. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
3 paragraphs
384 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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