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Describe an important historical event in your country. v.1

Describe an important historical event in your country. v. 1
Describe an important historical event in your country. You should say: when it happened what happened who were the most important people involved and say why it is/was important to your country. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]   Model Answer 1: We have a number of important historical events in our country, Bangladesh, and all of those events have played an important role in making our country great. But, the “Victory Day” undoubtedly is the most important event of all in the historical context of my country as it gave us the “freedom” which we sought for more than a thousand years. This victory day is celebrated all over my country on 16th of December every year because that’s the day when my country defeated the occupying/enemy forces in order to gain its full independence from “Pakistan”. By the way, before 1971, Bangladesh, used to be called "East Pakistan" while the other part of it was called “West Pakistan”. But, unfortunately, there was a lot of discrimination against East Pakistan as far as its economic development was concerned. Even politically, the people of East Pakistan enjoyed very limited power when it came to taking any important decision in order to bring some positive changes or developments in our part of the country. In fact, East Pakistan had become a safe ground for economic exploitation for the west Pakistani ruling elites. Things got even worse when the military ruling junta of Pakistan refused to hand over the power to a democratically elected government, led by Sheikh Mujibur Rahman in 1971. Eventually, people in East Pakistan started a non-violent movement to seek independence from Pakistan and then a war broke out between two parts of Pakistan. By the way, apart from Sheikh Mujibur Rahman, some other key political figures like Taj Uddin Ahmed, Syed Nazrul Islam, and Major Ziaur Rahman (one of the 11 war sector commanders) actively took part in achieving the war victory on 16th of December of 1971. Anyway, it was an important historical event for my country, as it gave us a new identity as a new nation in the world map so that we could manage our own affairs as a nation. Besides, it also gave us an opportunity to achieve a more symmetrical economic development in our country which was not present under the rule of Pakistani military junta.   Sample Answer 2: The Umbrella Revolution is one of the most important historical events in Hong Kong. It was initiated by the students in 2014 and lasted for over three months, blocked traffic and usual activities for a couple of months. The movement was initiated to protest against the decision of the Standing Committee of the National People’s Congress. It was a political movement where the police turned violent and the situation went out of control for a certain time. This is a very smart cue card task for a candidate like me. I will answer the remaining questions in brief. The umbrella movement protested against some political decisions. In the beginning, it was only some peaceful sit-ins by students of different educational institutions. But later, the movement was participated by thousands of individuals from different classes of society. The demand of the movement was the cancellation of the NPCSS decision. Political harassment was a concerning issue then. It was a group movement and so, no true leadership was formed here. The movement was participated mostly by a group of students, and after sometimes, the locals started joining the movement. In fact, it was a movement for a free and fair election in Hong Kong so that each of the candidates gets an equal chance to be elected or rejected in the national election. The name was provided by Adam Cotton and social website - twitter helped greatly to spread the name. It was really important for the country on some grounds. It showed that the people are conscious about their rights and responsibilities on voting in elections. The government termed the movements as instigated by foreign sources and also blamed that the educational institutions were becoming political tools. But it was necessary to give the government a severe blow to political issues.   More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe an important historical event in your country. 1. The Black Death that occurred in the Mid-14th century was a historical event for London. Due to the outbreak of this disease, a good number of people died. People of every class were affected by this health disorder. Now, the event is considered as part of a dark history. The aftermaths of the disorder were notable. People turned back to religion with some new inspirations. 2. The event of September 11 in 2001 was one of the most historically important events in the USA. On this day, some so-called Islamic extremists destroyed the World Trade Center – an American landmark. Some people were brainwashed by Osama Bin Laden and conducted a deliberate attack to cause damage to the USA. It was the beginning of a new history in the USA and the War on Terror begin from that day. 3. The Battle of Plassey took place in 1757. It was the beginning of colonialization in India and surrounding areas. By bribing Mir Jafar Ali Khan, an associate of Siraj Ud-Daulah, the British East Indian company won the battle. Siraj Ud-Daulah was the last independent Nawab of the country and after his fall, the British regime began in this subcontinent. The event was important in some aspects. Settlements from different other places were done based on trade and other purposes. 4. The year 1964 is an important year for Canada. On this year, the country received its own flag. Before this year, Canada had to use the Union Jack. The legislative body of the country is largely commendable for this purpose. In fact, a flag helps to represent sovereignty and the country did not have that. So, it was an important event on December 15 in 1964 when the Canadian flag was hoisted. The maple leaf was picked after different options. 5. Independence of Japan was one of the important events in the country’s history. Before independence, Japan was under the USA authority. The USA emancipated Japan on January 1 in 1952 and declared it as an independent country. The inner movements for independence played an important role in this case. Now, we are an independent nation and have ample options for development. 6. The revolution of China in 1911 was an important event in the country’s history. It was termed as the Chinese Bourgeois Democratic Revolution and played a great role in the fall of the Qing Dynasty. The revolution also ended the feudalist society in China which was around 2000-year-old. The revolution was led by Dr Sun Yat-sen. This was an important event because it helped to create a new society in China.   Your preparation for this cue card topic would help you talk about the following cue card topics as well: 1. Describe an important historical event you know about. 2. Describe something you learned in your school. 3. Describe a national day in your country. 4. Describe something you think most of the people in your country know about. 5. Describe a historic event that changed the fate of your country.
Describe
an
important
historical
event
in your
country
. You should say: when it happened what happened who were the most
important
people
involved and say why it is/was
important
to your
country
. [You will
have to
talk about the
topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
think
about what you're going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]
 
Model Answer 1:

We have a number of
important
historical
events
in our
country
, Bangladesh, and all of those
events
have played an
important
role in making our
country
great.
But
, the “Victory Day”
undoubtedly
is the most
important
event
of all in the
historical
context of my
country
as it gave us the “freedom” which we sought for more than a thousand years.

This victory day
is celebrated
all over my
country
on 16th of December every
year
because
that’s the day when my
country
defeated the occupying/enemy forces in order to gain its full
independence
from “Pakistan”. By the way,
before
1971, Bangladesh,
used
to
be called
"
East Pakistan
"
while the
other
part
of it
was called
“West Pakistan”.
But
, unfortunately, there was
a lot of
discrimination against East Pakistan as far as its economic
development
was concerned
. Even
politically
, the
people
of East Pakistan enjoyed
very
limited power when it came to taking any
important
decision
in order to bring
some
positive
changes
or
developments
in our
part
of the country.

In fact, East Pakistan had become a safe ground for economic exploitation for the west Pakistani ruling elites. Things
got
even worse when the military ruling junta of Pakistan refused to hand over the power to a
democratically
elected
government
, led by Sheikh
Mujibur
Rahman in 1971.
Eventually
,
people
in East Pakistan
started
a non-violent
movement
to seek
independence
from Pakistan and then a
war
broke out between two
parts
of Pakistan. By the way, apart from Sheikh
Mujibur
Rahman,
some
other
key political figures like
Taj
Uddin
Ahmed,
Syed
Nazrul
Islam, and Major
Ziaur
Rahman (one of the 11
war
sector commanders)
actively
took
part
in achieving the
war
victory on 16th of
December of 1971
.

Anyway
, it was an
important
historical
event
for my
country
, as it gave us a
new
identity as a
new
nation in the world map
so
that we could manage our
own
affairs as a nation.
Besides
, it
also
gave us an opportunity to achieve a more symmetrical economic
development
in our
country
which was not present under the
rule
of Pakistani military junta.
 
Sample Answer 2:

The Umbrella
Revolution
is one of the most
important
historical
events
in Hong Kong. It
was initiated
by the students in 2014 and lasted for over three months, blocked traffic and usual activities for a couple of months. The
movement
was initiated
to protest against the
decision
of the Standing Committee of the National
People’s
Congress. It was a political
movement
where the police turned violent and the situation went out of control for a certain time. This is a
very
smart
cue
card
task for a candidate like me. I will answer the remaining questions
in brief
.

The umbrella
movement
protested against
some
political
decisions
. In the beginning, it was
only
some
peaceful sit-ins by students of
different
educational institutions.
But
later, the
movement
was participated
by thousands of individuals from
different
classes of society. The demand of the
movement
was the cancellation of the
NPCSS
decision
. Political harassment was a concerning issue then.

It was a group
movement
and
so
, no true leadership
was formed
here. The
movement
was participated
mostly
by a group of students, and after
sometimes
, the locals
started
joining the
movement
. In fact, it was a
movement
for a free and
fair
election in Hong Kong
so
that each of the candidates
gets
an equal chance to
be elected
or rejected in the national election. The name
was provided
by Adam Cotton and social website
-
twitter
helped
greatly
to spread the name.

It was
really
important
for the
country
on
some
grounds. It
showed
that the
people
are conscious about their rights and responsibilities on voting in elections. The
government
termed the
movements
as instigated by foreign sources and
also
blamed that the educational institutions were becoming political tools.
But
it was necessary to give the
government
a severe blow to political issues.
 
More
Ideas
to talk about this
Cue
Card/ Candidate Task
Card
topic
:
Topic
:
Describe
an
important
historical
event
in your
country
. 1. The Black Death that occurred in the Mid-14th century was a
historical
event
for London. Due to the outbreak of this disease, a
good
number of
people
died
.
People
of every
class
were
affected
by this health disorder.
Now
, the
event
is considered
as
part
of a dark
history
. The aftermaths of the disorder were notable.
People
turned back to religion with
some
new
inspirations.

2. The
event
of September 11 in 2001 was one of the most
historically
important
events
in the USA. On this day,
some
so
-called Islamic extremists
destroyed
the World Trade Center
an American landmark.
Some
people
were brainwashed
by
Osama Bin Laden
and conducted a deliberate attack to cause damage to the USA. It was the beginning of a
new
history
in the USA and the
War
on Terror
begin
from that day.

3. The Battle of
Plassey
took place in 1757. It was the beginning of
colonialization
in India and surrounding areas. By bribing Mir
Jafar
Ali Khan, an associate of
Siraj
Ud-Daulah
, the British East Indian
company
won the battle.
Siraj
Ud-Daulah
was the last independent
Nawab
of the
country
and after his fall, the British regime began in this subcontinent. The
event
was
important
in
some
aspects. Settlements from
different
other
places
were done
based on trade and
other
purposes.

4. The
year
1964 is an
important
year
for Canada. On this
year
, the
country
received its
own
flag.
Before
this
year
, Canada had to
use
the Union Jack. The legislative body of the
country
is
largely
commendable for this purpose. In fact, a flag
helps
to represent sovereignty and the
country
did not have that.
So
, it was an
important
event
on December 15 in 1964 when the Canadian flag
was hoisted
. The maple leaf
was picked
after
different
options.

5.
Independence
of Japan was one of the
important
events
in the
country’s
history
.
Before
independence
, Japan was under the USA authority. The USA emancipated Japan on January 1 in 1952 and declared it as an independent
country
. The inner
movements
for
independence
played an
important
role
in this case
.
Now
, we are an independent nation and have ample options for
development. 6
. The
revolution
of China in 1911 was an
important
event
in the
country’s
history
. It
was termed
as the Chinese Bourgeois Democratic
Revolution
and played a great role in the fall of the
Qing
Dynasty. The
revolution
also
ended the
feudalist
society in China which was around 2000-year-
old
. The
revolution
was led
by Dr Sun
Yat-sen
. This was an
important
event
because
it
helped
to create a
new
society in China.
 
Your preparation for this
cue
card
topic
would
help
you talk about the following
cue
card
topics
as
well
:

1.
Describe
an
important
historical
event
you know
about.

2.
Describe
something you learned in your school.

3.
Describe
a national day in your
country. 4
.
Describe
something you
think
most of the
people
in your
country
know about.

5.
Describe
a historic
event
that
changed
the fate of your
country
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
158Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
33Mistakes
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1257 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
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  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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    Present relevant ideas
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