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Describe something you would like to do in the future that would be good for your health. v.1

Describe something you would like to do in the future that would be good for your health. v. 1
Describe something you would like to do in the future that would be good for your health. You should say: what you would like to do what it would involve when you would like to do it and explain why it would be good for your health. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: I would like start taking part in outdoor activities for the betterment of my health. And I have selected swimming for that. In fact, swimming has numerous health benefits and it also helps to keep the swimmers fit. This exercise helps people to remain healthy and fit round the day. It also improves our muscle strengths and raises the stamina level. I like this cue card topic very much and would like to thank you for the opportunity to let me talk about it. And I will answer the remaining questions in brief. Swimming is an exercise that is not suitable for all types of people. Only who has the physical ability are able to swim. I will need the right place for swimming and have planned to become the member of The Dolphin Club here in San Francisco. I will need to follow the swimming schedule and get some proper costumes for swimming. Besides, I need to be careful while swimming as I am a fresher here. I would like to attend the classes in the evening or on the weekends. Actually, this is not possible for me to attend the classes held in the early morning or in the afternoon as I remain busy with my professional engagements. I can manage time only in the evening or on the weekends when I do not have any tasks to do. The swimming classes are held for over one or two hours at a stretch, and this is unmanageable for me to attend those classes. Swimming is a good exercise. This is the exercise that helps to make the arm-and leg-muscles stronger. It also needs the movement of the entire body at a time. So, it turns into a very good form of exercise for the swimmers. Therefore, I think this would be a good one for my health. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe something you would like to do in the future that would be good for your health. 1. I would like to be a renowned chef. In fact, I love to cook and have a small restaurant in Madrid. This is a lengthy process and will involve different things. First of all, I need to take some academic degrees about nutrition and cuisine of other countries. I am planning to get admitted at the end of this year. I also have talked with a chef of an international restaurant. It would help me to cook nutritious and delicious food and I would remain healthy. 2. Since my childhood, I have been dreaming to become an aeroplane pilot. But this requires some specific rules and regulations to follow. I have to take academic degrees in aeronautics. Besides, I also will need to get trained in piloting an aeroplane. I will start the training soon and already been trying to get admitted at a university in Germany where aeronautics is taught. It would be good for me for many reasons, and importantly my mental health would boost up. 3. Travelling is my hobby and I have a plan to complete visiting my own land, Russia. This is a large country with lots of places to visit. It would require ample leisure hours to complete the travel. Moreover, I will also need money to bear all the expenses. I have a plan to take a break from all my activities in next year and will begin the trip in the first week of February. Of course, it would be beneficial for me. I will learn numerous real-life issues from the trip. Besides, travelling will help me to get fresh air and foods that would keep me healthy. 4. Population in India is enough but most of them are not literate or lack civic sense. So, I am planning to become a social worker in future. Becoming a social worker needs some specific skills. Firstly, I have to grow my inter-personal communication skills so that I could make people aware of any issues. I am planning to do it after completing my academic studies. Definitely, it would a be a great task for me. When I will inform people about health, I will also follow them to maintain a balanced health. 5. A library is the storehouse of knowledge. So, I would like to make a library of my own. This is a hefty task and requires lots of stages to complete. As the first step, I have to collect a remarkable number of books for the library. I have already started collecting books. Sometimes, I buy books while some of my friends also donate me. I want it to complete by next year. If the library is completed, it would be beneficial for my mental faculty. In fact, reading books help me alleviate my mood. And when I am in a good mood, I can take care of my health. Your preparation for this cue card topic would help you talk about the following cue card topics as well: 1. Describe something you do for to stay fit/ healthy. 2. Describe an activity you enjoy doing. 3. Describe an outdoor activity you do regularly. 4. Describe something you want to start but have not started yet. 5. Describe something people in your country do to remain healthy. 6. Something you used to do but no longer do now. 7. Describe a plan you want to execute in the future. 8. Describe a type of exercise you do or once did.
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something
you would like to do in the
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future
that would be
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good
for your
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health
. You should say: what you would like to do what it would involve when you would like to do it and
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explain
why it would be
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good
for your
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health
. [You will
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have to
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about the
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topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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Sample Answer:

I would like
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start
taking part in outdoor
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activities
for the betterment of my
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health
. And I have selected swimming for that. In fact, swimming has numerous
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health
benefits and it
also
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helps
to
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keep
the swimmers fit. This
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exercise
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helps
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people
to
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remain
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healthy
and fit round the day. It
also
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improves
our muscle strengths and raises the stamina level. I like this
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cue
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card
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topic
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very
much and would like to thank you for the opportunity to
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let
me
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talk
about it. And I will answer the remaining questions
in brief
.

Swimming is an
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exercise
that is
not suitable for all types of
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people
.
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Only
who has the physical ability are able to swim. I will
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need
the
right
place for swimming and have planned to become the member of The Dolphin Club here in San Francisco. I will
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need
to follow the swimming schedule and
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get
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some
proper costumes for swimming.
Besides
, I
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need
to be careful while swimming as I am a fresher here.

I would like to attend the classes in the evening or on the weekends.
Actually
, this is not possible for me to attend the classes held in the early morning or in the afternoon as I
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remain
busy with my professional engagements. I can manage time
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only
in the evening or on the weekends when I do not have any
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tasks
to do. The swimming classes
are held
for over one or two hours at a stretch, and this is unmanageable for me to attend those classes.

Swimming is a
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good
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exercise
. This is the
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exercise
that
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helps
to
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make
the arm-and leg-muscles stronger. It
also
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needs
the movement of the entire body at a time.
So
, it turns into a
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very
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good
form of
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exercise
for the swimmers.
Therefore
, I
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think
this would be a
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good
one for my
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health
. More
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Ideas
to
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talk
about this
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Cue
Card/ Candidate
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Task
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topic
:
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Topic
:
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something
you would like to do in the
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future
that would be
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good
for your
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health
. 1. I would like to be a renowned chef. In fact, I
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love
to cook and have a
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small
restaurant in Madrid. This is a lengthy process and will involve
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different
things.
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First of all
, I
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need
to take
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some
academic degrees about nutrition and cuisine of other countries. I am planning to
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get
admitted at the
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end
of this year. I
also
have talked with a chef of an international restaurant. It would
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help
me to cook nutritious and delicious food and I would
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remain
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healthy. 2
. Since my childhood, I have been dreaming to become an
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aeroplane
pilot.
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But
this requires
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some
specific
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rules
and regulations to follow. I
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have to
take academic degrees in aeronautics.
Besides
, I
also
will
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need
to
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get
trained in piloting an
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aeroplane
. I will
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start
the training
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soon
and already been trying to
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get
admitted at a university in Germany where aeronautics
is taught
. It would be
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good
for me for
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many
reasons, and
importantly
my mental
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health
would boost up.

3. Travelling is my hobby and I have a plan to
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complete
visiting my
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own
land, Russia. This is a large country with lots of places to visit. It would require ample leisure hours to
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complete
the travel.
Moreover
, I will
also
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need
money to bear all the expenses. I have a plan to take a break from all my
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activities
in
next
year and will
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begin
the trip in the
first
week of February.
Of course
, it would be beneficial for me. I will learn numerous real-life issues from the trip.
Besides
, travelling will
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help
me to
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get
fresh air and foods that would
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keep
me
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healthy. 4
. Population in India is
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enough
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but
most of them are not literate or lack civic sense.
So
, I am planning to become a social worker in
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future
. Becoming a social worker
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needs
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some
specific
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skills
.
Firstly
, I
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have to
grow my inter-personal communication
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skills
so
that I could
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make
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people
aware of any issues. I am planning to do it after completing my academic studies. Definitely, it would
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a be
a great
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task
for me. When I will inform
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people
about
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health
, I will
also
follow them to maintain a balanced
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health. 5
. A library is the storehouse of knowledge.
So
, I would like to
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make
a library of my
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own
. This is a hefty
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task
and requires lots of stages to
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complete
. As the
first
step, I
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have to
collect a remarkable number of
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books
for the library. I have already
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started
collecting
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books
.
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Sometimes
, I
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buy
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books
while
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some
of my friends
also
donate me. I want it to
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complete
by
next
year. If the library
is completed
, it would be beneficial for my mental faculty. In fact, reading
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books
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help
me alleviate my mood. And when I am in a
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good
mood, I can take care of my
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health
. Your preparation for this
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cue
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card
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topic
would
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help
you
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talk
about the following
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cue
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card
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topics
as
well
:

1.
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Describe
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something
you do for to stay fit/
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healthy. 2
.
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Describe
an
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activity
you enjoy doing.

3.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
an outdoor
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activity
you do
regularly
.

4.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
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something
you want to
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start
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but
have not
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started
yet
.

5.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
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something
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people
in your country do to
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remain
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healthy. 6
.
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Something
you
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used
to do
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but
no longer do
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now
.

7.
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Describe
a plan you want to execute in the
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future. 8
.
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Describe
a type of
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exercise
you do or once did.
24Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
111Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes
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Sarah Caldwell

IELTS speaking Describe something you would like to do in the future that would be good for your health. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
17 paragraphs
1005 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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