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Describe a teacher from your past that you remember. v.3

Describe a teacher from your past that you remember. v. 3
Describe a teacher from your past that you remember. You should say: what class the teacher taught you how old you were then what the teacher’s special qualities and characteristics were and explain why you still remember this teacher. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ]
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Describe
a
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teacher
from your past that you remember. You should say: what
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class
the
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teacher
taught you how
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old
you were then what the
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teacher’s
special qualities and characteristics were and
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explain
why you
still
remember this
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teacher
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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1Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a teacher from your past that you remember. v. 3

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
75 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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