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Talk about an equipment of your household (computer, television, refrigerator, mobile phone and so on). v.1

Talk about an equipment of your household (computer, television, refrigerator, mobile phone and so on). v. 1
Talk about an equipment of your household (computer, television, refrigerator, mobile phone and so on). You should say: What is it What you do with it Will you always keep it and explain why it is important for you.
Talk about
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "equipment".
an equipment
of your household (computer, television, refrigerator, mobile phone and
so
on). You should say: What is it What you do with it Will you always
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
it and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
why it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
for you.
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS speaking Talk about an equipment of your household (computer, television, refrigerator, mobile phone and so on). v. 1

Speaking
  American English
1 paragraphs
39 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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