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Describe a magazine that you often read. v.1

Describe a magazine that you often read. v. 1
Describe a magazine that you often read. You should say: What is it What type of people read it Is it popular in your country? Explain why it is important to you to read it. Sample Answer 1: Reading is a great habit and not everyone has it. I am lucky in that regards that I have formed the habit of reading different types of books and magazines from an early age. Now, this is a pleasant moment for me to describe my habit of reading a magazine and my favourite magazine. Besides reading books, I also love reading magazines. They contain a good number of interesting elements to entertain the readers. I regularly read the Reader’s Digest of Australia and this is the best magazine in my opinion. This is a standard magazine to go through and pass the leisure hours. Besides, this is an enriched magazine that deals with some specific issues and themes. As a result, the readers of the magazine come to know about a lot of things from a single place. It tells the readers about health, shopping, travelling, living at homes and more other issues. Actually, there is no exact information that which types of people read the magazine. But it is anticipated that the Australians who have crossed their 30s are highly interested in this Reader’s Digest. In fact, they are the people who need some real-life information to deal with ‘situations’ in their life. So, as part of their external needs, they take help from the magazine. The Home Living section of the magazine is particularly useful for the women. They can get ideas to improve their living conditions at home. Besides, they also can generate newer ideas and implementation them on decorating their respective households through the earned knowledge from the magazine. This is also a great resource for the adventurers. The travelling section deals with the travels and adventures and they also provide numerous valuable tips and tricks to be applied in trips. The magazine is extremely popular in Australia and it has gained popularity by its own capacity. The magazine comes with a nice cover and size, Besides, this is also available in online. So, if someone misses the printed version of the magazine, this is easier to read the articles and stories on its online version. Further, the magazine is popular for some other reasons. This is a special type of magazine that deals with most necessary issues for each of the Australians. It deals with recipes, health, travel, home living and other important aspects of human life. Since we all are to remain busy with our professional engagement, it really becomes hard to take decisions on any important issues, and this is the only magazine that comes with necessary articles, tips and other ways to help in dealing with the situations. Hence, it is a popular magazine. I love to read books, particularly novels. But this is the only magazine that has attracted my attention because it comes with the necessary things in need. I also love to travel but managing days for a long travel is really tougher for me. With the ideas of travelling tips, I plan for some small trips nearby. Besides, my wife also loves to read the recipe section. She, in fact, loves to learn cooking using the recipes provide on the magazine. Both of us read the magazine and have subscribed to it. Now, it appears that if I had not read the magazine, my life could have been incomplete in some sense. I am really fond of this magazine.
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Describe
a
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magazine
that you
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often
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read
. You should say: What is it What
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type
of
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people
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read
it Is it
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popular
in your country?
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Explain
why it is
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important
to you to
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read
it.

Sample Answer
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1: Reading
is a great habit and not everyone has it. I am lucky in that regards that I have formed the habit of
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reading
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different
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types
of books and
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magazines
from an early age.
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Now
, this is a pleasant moment for me to
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describe
my habit of
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reading
a
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magazine
and my
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favourite
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magazine
.
Besides
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reading
books, I
also
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love
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reading
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magazines
. They contain a
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good
number of interesting elements to entertain the readers.

I
regularly
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read
the Reader’s Digest of Australia and this is the best
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magazine
in my opinion. This is a standard
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magazine
to go through and pass the leisure hours.
Besides
, this is an enriched
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magazine
that deals with
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some
specific issues and themes.
As a result
, the readers of the
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magazine
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come
to know about
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a lot of
things from a single place. It
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tells
the readers about health, shopping, travelling,
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living
at
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homes
and more
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other
issues.

Actually
, there is no exact information that which
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types
of
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people
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read
the
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magazine
.
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But
it
is anticipated
that the Australians who have crossed their 30s are
highly
interested in this Reader’s Digest. In fact, they are the
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people
who need
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some
real-life information to
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deal
with ‘situations’ in their life.
So
, as part of their external needs, they take
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
from the
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magazine
. The Home
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Living
section of the
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magazine
is
particularly
useful for the women. They can
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get
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ideas
to
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improve
their
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living
conditions at home.
Besides
, they
also
can generate newer
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
ideas
and implementation them on decorating their respective households through the earned knowledge from the
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magazine
. This is
also
a great resource for the adventurers. The travelling section deals with the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
travels
and
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
adventures and
they
also
provide numerous valuable tips and tricks to
be applied
in trips.

The
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magazine
is
extremely
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popular
in Australia and it has gained popularity by its
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own
capacity.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
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magazine
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comes
with a nice cover and size,
Besides
, this is
also
available in online.
So
, if someone misses the printed version of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
magazine
, this is easier to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
read
the articles and stories on its online version.
Further
, the
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magazine
is
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popular
for
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some
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other
reasons. This is a special
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type
of
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magazine
that deals with most necessary issues for each of the Australians. It deals with recipes, health,
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travel
, home
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living
and
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other
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important
aspects of human life. Since we all are to remain busy with our professional engagement, it
really
becomes
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
to take decisions on any
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important
issues, and this is the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
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magazine
that
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comes
with necessary articles, tips and
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other
ways to
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help
in dealing with the situations.
Hence
, it is a
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popular
magazine.

I
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love
to
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read
books,
particularly
novels.
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But
this is the
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only
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magazine
that has attracted my attention
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because
it
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comes
with the necessary things in need. I
also
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love
to
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travel
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but
managing days for a long
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travel
is
really
tougher for me. With the
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ideas
of travelling tips, I plan for
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some
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small
trips nearby.
Besides
, my wife
also
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loves
to
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read
the recipe section. She, in fact,
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loves
to learn cooking using the recipes provide on the
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magazine
. Both of us
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read
the
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magazine
and have subscribed to it.
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Now
, it appears that if I had not
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read
the
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magazine
, my life could have been incomplete in
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some
sense. I am
really
fond of this
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magazine
.
17Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
70Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a magazine that you often read. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
7 paragraphs
599 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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