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Describe a subject you didn’t like before but have an interest in now. v.1

Describe a subject you didn’t like before but have an interest in now. v. 1
Describe a subject you didn’t like before but have an interest in now. You should say: what subject it was when you studied the subject why you didn’t like it before and explain why you have an interest in it now. Sample Answer 1: Accounting is the subject that I find very interesting these days though I did not like it when I had to study it at my university level. I have finished my graduation in Computer Science major and we had Accounting part 1 and part 2 in our second year; 5th and 6th semesters. Thought Accounting was an important subject for us, I had very little interest in it. This was possibly because of my misconception that it is only important for Commerce and Business Studies students. I studied accounting subject only to pass my course and also missed few classes. Thus I failed to enter into the interesting world of accounting and that’s why disliked this subject. Science had always been major and I was never introduced to the accounting subject in my pre-university level. The teacher who took our accounting classes did not introduce us to the basic concept of accounting. Moreover, he went through chapters so quickly that I missed it completely. As a result, when the teacher explained the advanced concepts of accounting, I was completely lost. For all these reasons I was weak in accounting and this formed the disliking in me until the very recent time. Well, the reason I like accounting these days is quite interesting. After I started working as a Software Engineer in a multinational company, I worked on various projects. A year ago I was assigned to a project that required me to develop an accounting software for an Australian company. Ironically I had to study many accounting books and tutorials to understand how I should implement the concepts and calculation in this software. I also attended few training sessions organised by our office related to accounting and banking concepts. Once I understood the basic and interesting part of this subject, I actually started enjoying it a lot. The project took around 8 months to be delivered to the client and I was kind of forced to study and discuss a lot of accounting concepts during this period. Once I started understanding the fundamental concepts and its application in the real world, this subject became one of my favourite subjects.
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you didn’t like
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before
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but
have an interest in
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now
. You should say: what
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it was when you studied the
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subject
why you didn’t like it
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before
and
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explain
why you have an interest in it
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now
. Sample Answer
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1: Accounting
is the
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subject
that I find
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very
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interesting
these days though I did not like it when I had to
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study
it at my university level. I have finished my graduation in Computer Science
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major and
we had
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Accounting
part 1 and part 2 in our second year; 5th and 6th semesters.
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Thought
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Accounting
was an
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important
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subject
for us, I had
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very
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little
interest in it. This was
possibly
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because
of my misconception that it is
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only
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important
for Commerce and Business
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Studies
students. I studied
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accounting
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subject
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only
to pass my course and
also
missed few classes.
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Thus
I failed to enter into the
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interesting
world of
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accounting
and that’s why disliked this
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subject
. Science had always been
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major and
I was never introduced to the
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accounting
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subject
in my
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pre-university
level. The teacher who took our
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accounting
classes did not introduce us to the basic
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concept
of
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accounting
.
Moreover
, he went through chapters
so
quickly
that I missed it completely.
As a result
, when the teacher
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explained
the advanced
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concepts
of
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accounting
, I was completely lost. For all these reasons I was weak in
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accounting
and this formed the disliking in me until the
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very
recent time.
Well
, the reason I like
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accounting
these days is quite
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interesting
. After I
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started
working as a Software Engineer in a multinational
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company
, I worked on various projects. A year ago I
was assigned
to a project that required me to develop an
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accounting
software for an Australian
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company
.
Ironically
I had to
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study
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many
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accounting
books and tutorials to understand how I should implement the
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concepts
and calculation in this software. I
also
attended few training sessions
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organised
by our office related to
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accounting
and banking
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concepts
. Once I understood the basic and
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interesting
part of this
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subject
, I
actually
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started
enjoying it a lot. The project took around 8 months to
be delivered
to the
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client and
I was kind of forced to
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study
and discuss
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a lot of
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accounting
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concepts
during this period. Once I
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started
understanding the fundamental
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concepts
and its application in the real world, this
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subject
became one of my
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favourite
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subjects
.
5Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
40Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a subject you didn’t like before but have an interest in now. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
403 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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