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Describe an interesting person you know. v.1

Describe an interesting person you know. v. 1
Describe an interesting person you know. You should say: what sort of person s/he is how you first met him/her what s/he does for the living and explain why you think this person is interesting. Sample Answer 1: Wow, this topic is tough!   Not because I don’t know anyone interesting enough, quite the opposite.   I think everyone is interesting if you take the time to get to know them.   It is so easy to make assumptions about people, and then when you come to talk to them you find out all sorts of unexpected and extraordinary things.   When I first joined my running club I thought all the other runners had always been amazing athletes and found running easy – not like me, I was lumbering round sweating as they sprung ahead gazelle like!   Then once I got talking to them I found many had their own stories, turning their lives around after a setback such as illness, or obesity, everyone ran for a reason. To spend time with friends, to get time to reflect, to enjoy the outdoors; to improve their physical or mental health.   Every one of us is unique and interesting.   That’s just from my running club, if I think my wider social circle, the possibilities are endless! So, who shall I choose?   I like people who can surprise you, who are curious about the world, don’t judge and are confident enough in themselves to pursue their own dreams in their own quiet way, wherever that may take them. OK, so I know who is all of those things!   I’ll tell you what sort of person they are, how we first met, what they do for a living and I think from all of that it will be very obvious why they are so interesting to me! So, this person is one of the kindest, nicest people I’ve ever met.   I can tell you exactly when we first came across one another.   I had just relocated to Sheffield and didn’t know a soul.   One day I went for a walk from my house to the open countryside of the Peak District, and snow started to fall.   I ended up at a coffee shop on an alpaca farm, quite high up.   The snow was over a foot deep and still falling.   I went into the coffee shop and this man and his wife were there.   He was farm manager, and she ran the coffee shop.   There was a roaring fire in the corner and they both made me welcome, we chatted and I dried out with a steaming hot chocolate before heading back home through the snow.   I’d been worried about relocating on my own to a strange city, but these people were so friendly, I felt at home, this move was going to be OK. Some months later, I started volunteering at the farm, and I got to know Fred, the farm manager really well.   I found out that he’d done loads of different things in his life.   He’d travelled the world fixing x-ray machines at airports; he’d worked as an engineer; his wife and he had had various businesses including trading in second-hand goods and antiques.   Now they’d taken on this rural coffee shop and he was managing a farm.   It seems there was nothing he couldn’t do!   He and his wife were incredibly friendly and social, both could instantly put anyone at their ease.   You know how some people can just talk to anyone?   Well, Fred is like that.   Animals and children instantly adore him.    Whatever he turns his hand to, he seems to do with natural ease.   He was just as happy dressing up as Father Christmas or supervising a ‘spit-off’ between alpacas.   That’s what you call it when you put a male and female together to see if the female is pregnant.   If she is, she will reject the male forcefully – hence ‘spit off’!   We spent hours and hours together on the farm, working in all weathers and doing extraordinary things.   Lugging water down to far fields when pipes were frozen; herding animals together to move them from one field to another, or simply playing with the goats, dogs or other animals that could be great fun to interact with.   He patiently taught me practical skills like driving the tractor, and how to inject the alpacas or trim their feet.   We laughed all the time.   I think from the outside we were probably unexpected friends, but we got on brilliantly from the start and even today can talk each other into the ground when we do meet up now and again for a coffee and catch up in town. Fred is retired now, but still as busy as ever, he helps manage a pre-nursery school doing their books and administration, but also going in to help play with the kids when he can.   He also has a couple of energetic dogs to keep him up and about every day.   What makes him so interesting I think is his breadth of life experience.   He has seen and done so many things, yet he is unassuming and generous.   In all the years I’ve known him he’s never had a bad word to say about anyone – despite been given cause to do so.   He is generous with his time, always sees the best in other people and adoring of his wife.   They have been together for a very long time indeed, but still always hold hands together when I see them together walking down the street.   He isn’t just an interesting character, he is an inspirational one too.   He has quietly ploughed his own path as the saying goes, and he is a loyal and wise friend too.   In an age when many people feel compelled to constantly remind you how impressive and interesting they are through Facebook, celebrity or even what they wear – he is a breath of fresh air.   He genuinely has compelling stories to tell and interesting insights to share, but only with those who bother to take the time to stop and ask.   Every street, every bus stop, every café probably has someone like him.   It is always worth a cautious smile and a shy ‘hello’ in a new place, you might encounter someone more interesting than you could possibly imagine if you just keep an open mind and take the time to ask questions and listen as well as talk! [ Written by - Lucy Marris:   Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam) ]
Describe
an
interesting
person
you
know
. You should say: what sort of
person
s/he is how you
first
met him/her what s/he does for the living and
explain
why you
think
this
person
is
interesting
. Sample Answer 1:

Wow, this topic is tough!
 
Not
because
I don’t
know
anyone
interesting
enough
, quite the opposite.
 
I
think
everyone is
interesting
if you take the
time
to
get
to
know
them.
 
It is
so
easy to
make
assumptions about
people
, and then when you
come
to
talk
to them you find out all sorts of unexpected and extraordinary things.
 
When I
first
joined
my running club I
thought
all the
other
runners had always been amazing athletes and found running easy
not like me, I was lumbering round sweating as they sprung ahead gazelle like!
 
Then once I
got
talking to them I found
many
had their
own
stories, turning their
lives
around after a setback such as illness, or obesity, everyone ran for a reason. To spend
time
with friends, to
get
time
to reflect, to enjoy the outdoors; to
improve
their physical or mental health.
 
Every one of us is unique and
interesting
.
 
That’s
just
from my running club, if I
think
my wider social circle, the possibilities are endless!
So
,
who
shall I choose?
 
I like
people
who
can surprise you,
who
are curious about the world, don’t judge and are confident
enough
in themselves to pursue their
own
dreams in their
own
quiet way, wherever that may take them. OK,
so
I
know
who
is all of those things!
 
I’ll
tell
you what sort of
person
they are, how we
first
met, what they do for a living and I
think
from all of that it will be
very
obvious why they are
so
interesting
to me!
So
, this
person
is one of the kindest, nicest
people
I’ve ever met.
 
I can
tell
you exactly when we
first
came across one another.
 
I had
just
relocated to Sheffield and didn’t
know
a soul.
 
One day I went for a walk from my
house
to the open countryside of the Peak District, and snow
started
to fall.
 
I ended up at a
coffee
shop
on an alpaca
farm
, quite high up.
 
The snow was over a foot deep and
still
falling.
 
I went into the
coffee
shop
and this
man
and his
wife
were there.
 
He was
farm
manager, and she ran the
coffee
shop
.
 
There was a roaring fire in the
corner and
they both made me welcome, we chatted and I dried out with a steaming hot chocolate
before
heading back home through the snow.
 
I’d
been worried
about relocating on my
own
to a strange city,
but
these
people
were
so
friendly, I felt at home, this
move
was going to be OK.
Some
months later, I
started
volunteering at the
farm
, and I
got
to
know
Fred, the
farm
manager
really
well
.
 
I found out that he’d done loads of
different
things in his life.
 
He’d travelled the world fixing x-ray machines at airports; he’d worked as an engineer; his
wife and
he had had various businesses including trading in second-hand
goods
and antiques.
 
Now
they’d taken on this rural
coffee
shop and
he was managing a
farm
.
 
It seems there was nothing he couldn’t do!
 
He and his
wife
were
incredibly
friendly and social, both could
instantly
put
anyone
at their
ease
.
 
You
know
how
some
people
can
just
talk
to
anyone
?
 
Well
, Fred is like that.
 
Animals and children
instantly
adore him.
  
Whatever he turns his hand to, he seems to do with natural
ease
.
 
He was
just
as happy dressing up as Father Christmas or supervising a ‘spit-off’ between alpacas.
 
That’s what you call it when you put a male and female together to
see
if the female is pregnant.
 
If she is, she will reject the male
forcefully
hence
‘spit off’!
 
We spent hours and hours together on the
farm
, working in all weathers and doing extraordinary things.
 
Lugging water down to far fields when pipes
were frozen
; herding animals together to
move
them from one field to another, or
simply
playing with the goats, dogs or
other
animals that could be great fun to interact with.
 
He
patiently
taught me practical
skills
like driving the tractor, and how to inject the alpacas or trim their feet.
 
We laughed all the
time
.
 
I
think
from the outside we were
probably
unexpected friends,
but
we
got
on
brilliantly
from the
start
and even
today
can
talk
each
other
into the ground when we do
meet
up
now
and again for a
coffee
and catch up in town. Fred
is retired
now
,
but
still
as busy as ever, he
helps
manage a
pre-nursery
school doing their books and administration,
but
also
going in to
help
play with the kids when he can.
 
He
also
has a couple of energetic dogs to
keep
him up and about every day.
 
What
makes
him
so
interesting
I
think
is his breadth of life experience.
 
He has
seen
and done
so
many
things,
yet
he is unassuming and generous.
 
In all the years I’ve known him he’s never had a
bad
word to say about
anyone
despite been
given
cause to do
so
.
 
He is generous with his
time
, always
sees
the best in
other
people
and adoring of his
wife
.
 
They have been together for a
very
long
time
indeed
,
but
still
always hold hands together when I
see
them together walking down the street.
 
He isn’t
just
an
interesting
character, he is an inspirational one too.
 
He has
quietly
ploughed
his
own
path as the saying goes, and he is a loyal and wise friend too.
 
In an age when
many
people
feel compelled to
constantly
remind you how impressive and
interesting
they are through Facebook, celebrity or even what they wear
he is a breath of fresh air.
 
He
genuinely
has compelling stories to
tell
and
interesting
insights to share,
but
only
with those
who
bother to take the
time
to
stop
and ask.
 
Every street, every bus
stop
, every café
probably
has someone like him.
 
It is always worth a cautious smile and a shy ‘hello’ in a new place, you might encounter someone more
interesting
than you could
possibly
imagine if you
just
keep
an open mind and take the
time
to ask questions and listen as
well
as
talk
!
[
Written by
-
Lucy
Marris
:
 
Careers Adviser (UK), TEFL teacher (Vietnam)
]
13Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
84Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
62Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe an interesting person you know. v. 1

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2 paragraphs
1132 words
5.5
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