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Describe a movie you would like to watch again. v.1

Describe a movie you would like to watch again. v. 1
Describe a movie you would like to watch again. You should say: what it was about when and where you watched it who you watched it with and explain why you would like to watch it again. Sample Answer 1: ‘Saving Private Ryan’- directed by Steven Spielberg, is the movie I would like to watch again. As I recall I watched this movie about 12 years ago when I was in my high school. This was an outstanding movie with a compelling storyline, set during the World War II. I enjoyed this movie quite a lot and this was one of the best movies I have ever seen. I watched this movie in our DVD player with two of my friends. On a weekend I rented this movie and invited Patrick and Stephen to watch it at our home. This movie tells the story of the invasion of Normandy in the World War 2. It is considered an epic war drama film and it shows notable graphics and depiction of wars. This is indeed the kind of film that most of the viewers are bound to like. This film has got many positive criticisms and won many international awards. Personally, I liked it so much because of its high-quality production, realistic portrayals of war, praiseworthy acting, notable casting and historic significance. I believe that this movie easily qualifies to be listed in someone’s all-time favourite movies and watching it again would not be less enjoyable by any means. Patrick and Stephen are both working full time- Patrick as a lawyer and Stephen as an investment banker. A few months back we hung out together and we agreed that we will enjoy a day off together just for the old time’s sake. We also agreed that we will spend our time at home just like we used to do in our high school days. Then I proposed to select a movie to watch and finally we decided to watch this movie again. Personally, I am a fan of Steven Spielberg movies and ‘Saving Private Ryan’ is one of his best works. I am sure I will enjoy this movie again with my two close friends, as much as I did at our young age.
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Describe
a
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you would like to
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watch
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again
. You should say: what it was about when and where you
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watched
it who you
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watched
it with and
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explain
why you would like to
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it
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. Sample Answer 1:

‘Saving Private Ryan’- directed by Steven Spielberg, is the
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movie
I would like to
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watch
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again
. As I recall I
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watched
this
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movie
about 12 years ago when I was in my high school. This was an outstanding
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movie
with a compelling storyline, set during the World
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War
II. I enjoyed this
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movie
quite a lot and this was one of the best
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movies
I have ever
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seen
. I
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watched
this
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movie
in our DVD player with two of my friends. On a weekend I rented this
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movie
and invited Patrick and Stephen to
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watch
it at our home. This
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movie
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tells
the story of the invasion of Normandy in the World
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War
2. It
is considered
an epic
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war
drama film and it
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shows
notable graphics and depiction of
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wars
. This is
indeed
the kind of film that most of the viewers
are bound
to like. This film has
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got
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many
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positive
criticisms and won
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many
international awards.
Personally
, I liked it
so
much
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because
of its high-quality production, realistic portrayals of
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war
, praiseworthy acting, notable casting and historic significance. I believe that this
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movie
easily
qualifies to
be listed
in someone’s all-time
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favourite
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movies
and watching it
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would not be less enjoyable by any means. Patrick and Stephen are both working full time- Patrick as a lawyer and Stephen as an investment banker. A few months back we hung
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out
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together and
we
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agreed
that we will enjoy a day off together
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just
for the
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old
time’s sake. We
also
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agreed
that we will spend our time at home
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just
like we
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used
to do in our high school days. Then I proposed to select a
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movie
to
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watch
and
finally
we decided to
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this
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movie
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again
.
Personally
, I am a fan of Steven Spielberg
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movies
and ‘Saving Private Ryan’ is one of his best works. I am sure I will enjoy this
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movie
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again
with my two close friends, as much as I did at our young age.
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32Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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IELTS speaking Describe a movie you would like to watch again. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
2 paragraphs
373 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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