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Describe a subject taught in your school. v.1

Describe a subject taught in your school. v. 1
Describe a subject taught in your school. You should Say: what subject it was and who taught it how the teacher taught it what you learned from the class and explain how it helped you. Follow-up Questions: • Is there any difference between the traditional and modern educational systems? • What are the pros and cons of the current education system in your country? • Do you think it is necessary to give comment or criticism to teachers? • How can a teacher make learning more interesting? • Are there any subjects that shouldn’t be taught in school? Why? • How can the school help students overcome a problem with a certain subject? • Do you think that visiting different websites has benefits for a student?     Model Answer 1: As a student of business administration, I had to study all the subjects of business faculty, but one subject, which I found to be unique and interesting during my university, was “Marketing”. But, it became even more interesting when I decided to study the subject with one of the most accomplished academics called Mr Chun Lee. Mr Chun had a unique way of teaching whether he was teaching the basic principles of marketing, consumer behaviour, principle of retailing, new product management, advertising management, pricing policy, new product development or any other marketing concepts, In fact, Mr Lee would assume that, as surprising as it may sound, all of the students in his marketing class was “expert marketeer” and that his students would teach him how to become an expert marketing professional. Besides, he would advise us to consider “marketing” always as a way to “help” consumers instead of aiming at “profiteering” because such practice would help ensure “goodwill” among the prospective consumers in the long run. However, the best aspect, in my opinion, of the teaching methods of Mr Lee was that he didn’t really have any formal test or examination in order to test how much we had learned in his class, and instead all he had for us was some random “case studies”. So, how much exactly did the class of Mr Lee help me? Well, whatever I learned from Mr Lee has helped me a lot in real and professional world as it has taught me the art of “listening” (yes, one has to be a really good “listener” if he/she wants to be an expert “Marketeer”) because listening is probably is the most important part of learning how to be an “effective communicator”. Besides, it has also helped me to become habitually aware of the “trends” in different kinds of industries so that I can adjust and adapt accordingly in order to become a successful professional. Finally, it has also helped me to understand the needs of another human being (a “customer” in marketing “term”), not only in the professional sphere but also in personal space, and thus improving the relationship with others in the real world.   Sample Answer 2: Thank you very much for this great cue card topic. The subject I would like to talk about is physics and it was taught in our high school as a compulsory subject. We had this subject every year in our high school curriculum and each year a new teacher used to teach us physics. I remember Mr Alex, Burter, John, David and Mrs Jeniffer teaching us physics in different years in my high school. We were lucky to have some great teachers who taught us physics and they had a great way of teaching. Their interesting discussions made the subject worth enjoying. Our teachers used to tell us fascinating stories first and then relate them to the theory, experiment and mathematics of the textbooks. They often explained the life and dedication of a scientist before they started explaining the intricacies of the topic. Sometimes they used to take us to the physics labs and explain how something works. I have learned numerous aspects of physics - from the simple definition of mass to the complex explanation of Einstein's Theory of Relativity, from those discussions and lectures. My foundation of physics was built at that time and later extended with the help of those teachers. The subject itself is utterly interesting if someone has passions for it. Physics is a subject that seems difficult at first but one would start loving it if s/he starts to understand the underlying concepts of it. Physics is all around us and the lessons I learned from my school had helped me greatly throughout my academic years.
Describe
a
subject
taught in your
school
. You should Say: what
subject
it was and who taught it how the
teacher
taught it what you
learned
from the
class
and
explain
how it
helped
you.

Follow-up Questions:

• Is there any difference between the traditional and modern educational systems?

• What are the pros and cons of the
current
education system in your country?

• Do you
think
it is necessary to give comment or criticism to
teachers? •
How can a
teacher
make
learning more
interesting? •
Are there any
subjects
that shouldn’t
be taught
in
school
? Why?

• How can the
school
help
students
overcome a problem with a certain
subject? •
Do you
think
that visiting
different
websites has benefits for a
student
?
   
Model Answer 1:

As a
student
of business administration, I had to study all the
subjects
of business faculty,
but
one
subject
, which I found to be unique and
interesting
during my university, was
“Marketing”
.
But
, it became even more
interesting
when I decided to study the
subject
with one of the most accomplished academics called Mr
Chun
Lee.

Mr
Chun
had a unique way of
teaching
whether he was
teaching
the basic principles of
marketing
, consumer
behaviour
, principle of retailing, new product management, advertising management, pricing policy, new product development or any other
marketing
concepts, In fact, Mr
Lee
would assume that, as surprising as it may sound,
all of the
students
in his
marketing
class
was “expert marketeer” and that his
students
would teach him how to become an expert
marketing
professional
.
Besides
, he would advise us to consider
“marketing”
always as a way to “
help
” consumers
instead
of aiming at “profiteering”
because
such practice would
help
ensure “goodwill” among the prospective consumers in the long run.
However
, the best aspect, in my opinion, of the
teaching
methods of Mr
Lee
was that he didn’t
really
have any formal
test
or examination in order to
test
how much we had
learned
in his
class
, and
instead
all he had for us was
some
random “case studies”.
So
, how much exactly did the
class
of Mr
Lee
help
me?

Well
, whatever I
learned
from Mr
Lee
has
helped
me a lot in real and
professional
world as it has taught me the art of “listening” (yes, one
has to
be a
really
good
“listener” if he/she wants to be an expert “Marketeer”)
because
listening is
probably
is the most
important
part of learning how to be an “effective communicator”.
Besides
, it has
also
helped
me to become
habitually
aware of the “trends” in
different
kinds of industries
so
that I can adjust and adapt
accordingly
in order to become a successful
professional
.
Finally
, it has
also
helped
me to understand the needs of another human being (a “customer” in
marketing
“term”), not
only
in the
professional
sphere
but
also
in personal space, and
thus
improving the relationship with others in the real world.
 
Sample Answer 2:

Thank you
very
much for this great cue card topic. The
subject
I would like to talk about is physics and it
was taught
in our high
school
as a compulsory
subject
. We had this
subject
every
year
in our high
school
curriculum and each
year
a new
teacher
used
to teach us physics. I remember Mr Alex,
Burter
, John, David and
Mrs
Jeniffer
teaching
us physics in
different
years in my high
school
. We were lucky to have
some
great
teachers
who taught us
physics and
they had a great way of
teaching
. Their
interesting
discussions made the
subject
worth enjoying.

Our
teachers
used
to
tell
us fascinating stories
first
and then relate them to the theory, experiment and mathematics of the textbooks. They
often
explained
the life and dedication of a scientist
before
they
started
explaining the intricacies of the topic.
Sometimes
they
used
to take us to the physics labs and
explain
how something works. I have
learned
numerous aspects of physics
-
from the simple definition of mass to the complex explanation of Einstein's Theory of Relativity, from those discussions and lectures. My foundation of physics
was built
at that time and later extended with the
help
of those teachers.

The
subject
itself is
utterly
interesting
if someone has passions for it. Physics is a
subject
that seems difficult at
first
but
one would
start
loving it if s/he
starts
to understand the underlying concepts of it. Physics is all around us and the lessons I
learned
from my
school
had
helped
me
greatly
throughout my academic years.
14Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
69Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a subject taught in your school. v. 1

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  American English
15 paragraphs
758 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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