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Describe your study room. v.1

Describe your study room. v.1
Describe your study room. You should say: how it looks like how much time you spend in this room how an ideal study room should be and give details of your study room. Follow-up questions: • How does a study room help a student? • Do you like to study? What type of books do you read? • Which one do you prefer - reading or travelling? Why?
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. You should say:

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how
it looks like how much time you spend in this
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room
how an ideal
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study
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should be and give
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details
of your
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room.

Follow-up questions:

• How does a
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help
a student?

• Do you like to
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? What type of books do you read?

• Which one do you prefer
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reading or travelling? Why?
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
9Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe your study room. v.1

Speaking
  American English
6 paragraphs
68 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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