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Describe the best gift/ present you have ever received. v.1

Describe the best gift/ present you have ever received. v. 1
Describe the best gift/ present you have ever received. You should say: what the gift was who gave it to you when you have received it and explain why it is the best gift/ present you have ever received. Follow-up Questions: Q. Do you think that gift-giving will play an important role in daily life in the future? Why? Q. Compare the gifts which people have received 10 years ago to the gifts that people now are receiving? What's the difference between them? Q. Do you think that the brand name is very important for sales?   Model Answer 1: I have heard many times that 'money just can’t buy everything', but it certainly can buy some exceptional “gifts”, and I figured it out when I took a vacation to Europe (courtesy to the unexpected tax refunds in a check, which I received from the US government last year. Now, you may wonder what kind of gift I am talking about. Well, I am jealous of Europe and its people for two reasons. First, they work fewer hours and enjoy more vacation time than us “American” people. Secondly (I know, if I say this, many of my American compatriot citizens are going to “hate” me), they are arguably more “smart” than American people in general, and Sean Jeffry, my long-time British friend, has proved it by offering me such a gift which has put an American like me to shame. It’s a collection of some of the “American all-time movie hits”, a gift idea, I think that only a very few American people could come up with, even on the best of the occasions. At least, I have never heard of any of my own American friends or family members offering this kind of gifts to anybody. After receiving such a gift, which also included some of my favourite movies, I felt like I couldn’t possibly receive any better gifts than this from a “foreigner friend” who lives in a different continent in another part of the world. Anyway, I feel like this was the best gift I have ever received because my friend used a lot of his time and efforts to actually be able in order to find and make the list of all the movies in Hollywood movie history. Besides, it also takes a special friend and person to learn and remember about the preference, whatever that may be, of his friend, and my friend Sean proved that he is just that kind of friend and person. Finally, I consider this to be the best gift I have ever received because I received it when I expected it in the least.   Sample Answer 2: I have received numerous gifts in my life and among them, the most exciting one was the Laptop my father gave to me when I was 14 years old. When I was 10, I found that many of my friends had their own computers and I was profoundly fascinated by this wonderful machine and dreamt about owning one someday. I would like to thank you for the chance to let me talk about the best gift that I have ever received - luckily it was a gift that came from the person I really admire. After being promoted to grade six in my school, I got admitted to a computer training centre and learned some basic computing. Whenever I visited a friend or a classmate who had a computer, I felt fascinated being there-  especially when I could play games, learn how to operate a new software, browse the Internet, edit a picture and so on. I sometimes visited some of my friends’ houses more often than usual only because they had computers. Thus this phenomenon machine became the only dream of my life. As I knew my father was not in a financial condition to buy me a brand new computer, I did not ask for one. I made a dummy computer using papers, boards and other materials and played with it- something unusual for a boy at my age! One day I bought a piggy bank and started saving coins and notes with the sole intention to buy a computer someday. After one month or so, I found that I saved only ten dollars in total and that was somewhat frustrating! With time, and I would say with a little maturity, I got busy with other stuff and could hardly find time to visit friends’ houses to use their computers, but at a hidden corner of my heart, I felt the same fascination for owning a computer. On my 14th birthday, my father told me that he wants to take me to the computer shop and purchase a brand new computer for me. I could not believe what I heard! That night it was tough for me to sleep. In the morning I wake up earlier than usual and went to a computer shop with my father. He bought a Dell Laptop that was a Pentium 4 machine. While returning home, I found myself on cloud nine. I opened the box after returning home and showed it to my mother and other relatives. As a young child, that was a long-expected gift that my father gave to me, and till now it’s the best present -materialistically speaking, someone gave to me. You know how passionate we can sometimes become, especially in our childhood, when we long for something. I know it was not easy for my father to buy me this computer from his financial condition but still, he sacrificed his other joys to make me happy. That was something truly special.   Cue Card Answer 3: First of all, I would like to thank you for this nice topic. The best gift or present that I have ever received is a digital dictionary that my mother bought me on my 18th birthday. I was a college student at that time and my parents celebrated my birthday at home. Few friends and relatives were invited and it was a kind of family celebration. I was quite thrilled to open the gift boxes that my friends and family members gave to me and there were some books, chocolate boxes and other gift items. Out of these gifts, an electronic dictionary was something truly amazing. As soon as I opened it, I knew it was a gift from my mother. I once told my mother about this electronic dictionary and how some of my classmates were using it. I never told my mother that I wanted to buy one but I guess my mother knew very well how much I wanted to own this item. She had to save money, I guess, to purchase it for me and this is the best gift I have ever received in my life considering the passion and love it enwrapped. This was not merely a gift item or an electronic device, it was more than that - like a wonder box wrapped with care and love. My mother is a housewife and managing the money to buy me this gift must have been a result of her many small sacrifices. I thanked my mother for this fabulous gift and she was so happy to see me enthralled about the gift. It was a white and small digital dictionary, not more than 4 by 6 inches in dimension, but was one of the latest models. It was quite handy for me and having this dictionary encouraged me to learn more words, their synonyms and their origins. The gifts are always good gestures, tokens of appreciation and expression of love in our tradition. This gift was something even more special to me. I knew how much my mother has always loved me and her gift represented her love as well as sacrifices for me. In terms of utilisation, it was quite beneficial too. I could easily carry it in my pocket and I used it often to learn new words and that has helped me enhance my language skill. This is the only gift from my teenage time that I still have. I will always remember my mother's love that was blended with this gift. Tips for answering this Cue card question: Think about a gift that you received from one of your family members, relatives, friends, colleagues or someone else. Write down the name of the item and the person who gave it to you as well as when did you receive it and what was the occasion. Being able to make notes of these points will help you talk about this topic. The gift can be from someone special and for this, the gift can be a simple friendship card or a book. It does not matter if it is an expensive and exclusive gift - the most important part is the passion and love behind the gift. The gift can be something other than the conventional gift items like a piece of life-changing advice that you consider a gift. If you are a father or a mother, you can say your child is the best gift in your life. For gifts like a cell phone, computer or such electronic device, mention that you have been wishing to own this but could not afford to buy it. And after you received that item, you felt overwhelmed. A gift from parents on your birthday can also be a good example of the best gift you have received. For such gifts, mention that you received it in your childhood and had been touched by the whole idea of this gift-giving. For this cue card topic, the gift item is not itself important, be it an ordinary piece of gift or a luxurious item, so emphasise on your feelings rather than the gift item itself. Part 3 - Details Discussion: Q. Do you think that gift-giving will play an important role in daily life in the future? Why? Answer: It seems to me that this is a bit ambiguous. More precisely, present giving is something that occurs in special events, for example, at birthdays, festivals, anniversaries, wedding, graduation day, on name days, when someone visits others and so on. I don't think that there are many people around the world who give presents to their loved ones or to friends on a daily basis. Furthermore, with regards to the future, I am of the opinion that giving gifts won't have a special role in everyday life either because, as I said earlier, presents are given when something important happens. However, there is no doubt that present giving plays an important role in our relationship and that will always remain the same. Q. Compare the gifts which people have received 10 years ago to the gifts that people now are receiving? What's the difference between them? Answer: To answer this question we have to go back to the past and think of the types of presents we gave and received. Despite my young age, I have some memories of such presents that my family and relatives gave me. I would say that in the past, specifically 10 years ago, the types of gifts exchanged were primarily clothes, toys, household appliances and books. Apart from the fact that they weren't related to technology, they were also significantly important, educational and in most cases and most of the time expensive. Nowadays, presents are more symbolic than substantial or useful. People these days often give and receive technology-related gifts which were quite rare in the past. To illustrate, the important gifts that I received on my last birthday were perfumes and a laptop. Of course, gifts items in all decades do not remain the same. It will change for sure after ten years. The love and good wishes behind a gift are more important than the item itself. Q. Do you think that the brand name is very important for sales? Answer: I believe that the brand name really matters and it affects the sales volume of a product. Most companies spend a huge amount of money on branding in order to make the product or service famous. We could say that branding is an enterprise itself because it constitutes an amazingly important part of the company and its viability. As branding is a core aspect of a company, brand managers try to acquire customers and maintain relationships with them. Moreover, through advertising, media exposure and celebrity endorsement sales are on the rise most of the time for popular brands. Personally, I would spend more money to purchase a branded product. Hence I am quite positive that brand name is important for sales. [Part 3 answers are written by Maria, UK ] Some similar cue card topics that you can answer in a similar fashion: Describe a thing which is important to you. Talk about a gift you received in your childhood. Describe a gift you received on your birthday. Describe something you bought this year. Describe a memorable gift. Describe a valuable possession you have. Describe an expensive gift you have received. Describe a gift you gave to someone. Describe a gift you gave to your friend.
Describe
the
best
gift/
present
you have
ever
received
. You should say: what the
gift
was
who
gave
it to you when you have
received
it and
explain
why it is the
best
gift/
present
you have
ever
received.

Follow-up Questions: Q. Do you
think
that gift-giving will
play
an
important
role
in daily
life
in the future? Why?

Q. Compare the
gifts
which
people
have
received
10 years ago to the
gifts
that
people
now
are receiving? What's the difference between them?

Q. Do you
think
that the
brand
name
is
very
important
for
sales
?
 
Model
Answer
1:

I have heard
many
times
that 'money
just
can’t
buy
everything',
but
it
certainly
can
buy
some
exceptional
“gifts”
, and I figured it out when I took a vacation to Europe
(
courtesy to the unexpected tax refunds in a
check
, which I
received
from the US
government
last
year
.
Now
, you may wonder what
kind
of
gift
I am talking about.

Well
, I am jealous of Europe and its
people
for two reasons.
First
, they work fewer hours and enjoy more vacation
time
than us “American”
people
.
Secondly
(I know
, if
I say this,
many
of my American compatriot citizens are going to “hate” me), they are
arguably
more “smart” than American
people
in general
, and Sean Jeffry, my long-time British
friend
, has proved it by offering me such a
gift
which has put an American like me to shame. It’s a collection of
some of the
“American all-time
movie
hits”, a
gift
idea
, I
think
that
only
a
very
few American
people
could
come
up with, even on the
best
of the occasions. At least, I have never heard
of any of
my
own
American
friends
or
family
members offering this
kind
of
gifts
to anybody. After receiving such a
gift
, which
also
included
some
of my
favourite
movies
, I
felt
like I couldn’t
possibly
receive any better
gifts
than this from a “foreigner
friend”
who
lives
in a
different
continent in another
part
of the world.

Anyway
, I feel like this was the
best
gift
I have
ever
received
because
my
friend
used
a lot of
his
time
and efforts to
actually
be able in order to find and
make
the list of all the
movies
in Hollywood
movie
history.
Besides
, it
also
takes a
special
friend
and
person
to
learn
and remember about the preference, whatever that may be, of his
friend
, and my
friend
Sean proved that he is
just
that
kind
of
friend
and
person
.
Finally
, I consider this to be the
best
gift
I have
ever
received
because
I
received
it when I
expected
it in the least.
 
Sample
Answer
2:

I have
received
numerous
gifts
in my
life
and among them, the most exciting one was the Laptop my
father
gave
to me when I was 14 years
old
. When I was 10, I found that
many
of my
friends
had their
own
computers and
I was
profoundly
fascinated by this wonderful machine and dreamt about owning one someday. I would like to thank you for the chance to
let
me talk about the
best
gift
that I have
ever
received
-
luckily it was a
gift
that came from the
person
I
really
admire.

After
being promoted
to grade six in my school, I
got
admitted to a computer training
centre
and learned
some
basic computing. Whenever I visited a
friend
or a classmate
who
had a computer, I
felt
fascinated being there-
 
especially
when I could
play
games,
learn
how to operate a
new
software, browse the Internet, edit a picture and
so
on. I
sometimes
visited
some
of my
friends’
houses
more
often
than usual
only
because
they had computers.
Thus
this phenomenon machine became the
only
dream of my
life
. As I
knew
my
father
was not in a financial condition to
buy
me a
brand
new
computer, I did not
ask for
one. I made a dummy computer using papers, boards and
other
materials and played with it-
something
unusual for a boy at my age! One day I
bought
a piggy bank and
started
saving coins and notes with the sole intention to
buy
a computer someday. After one month or
so
, I found that I saved
only
ten dollars in total and that was somewhat frustrating!

With
time
, and I would say with a
little
maturity, I
got
busy with
other
stuff and could hardly find
time
to visit
friends’
houses
to
use
their computers,
but
at a hidden corner of my heart, I
felt
the same fascination for owning a computer. On my 14th birthday, my
father
told
me that he wants to take me to the computer shop and
purchase
a
brand
new
computer for me. I could not believe what I heard! That night it was tough for me to sleep. In the morning I wake up earlier than usual and went to a computer shop with my
father
. He
bought
a Dell Laptop that was a Pentium 4 machine. While returning home, I found myself
on cloud nine
. I opened the
box
after returning home and
showed
it to my
mother
and
other
relatives.

As a young child, that was a long-
expected
gift
that my
father
gave
to me, and till
now
it’s the
best
present
-
materialistically
speaking,
someone
gave
to me.
You know
how passionate we can
sometimes
become,
especially
in our childhood, when we long for
something
. I know it was not easy for my
father
to
buy
me this computer from his financial condition
but
still
, he sacrificed his
other
joys to
make
me happy. That was
something
truly
special
.
 
Cue
Card
Answer
3:

First of all
, I would like to thank you for this nice
topic
. The
best
gift
or
present
that I have
ever
received
is a digital
dictionary
that my
mother
bought
me on my 18th birthday. I was a college student at that
time
and my parents celebrated my birthday at home. Few
friends
and relatives
were invited
and it was a
kind
of
family
celebration. I was
quite
thrilled to open the
gift
boxes
that my
friends
and
family
members
gave
to me and there were
some
books, chocolate
boxes
and
other
gift
items
. Out of these
gifts
, an
electronic
dictionary
was
something
truly
amazing. As
soon
as I opened it, I
knew
it was a
gift
from my mother.

I once
told
my
mother
about this
electronic
dictionary
and how
some
of my classmates were using it. I never
told
my
mother
that I wanted to
buy
one
but
I guess
my
mother
knew
very
well
how much I wanted to
own
this
item
. She had to save
money
,
I guess
, to
purchase
it for me and this is the
best
gift
I have
ever
received
in my
life
considering the passion and
love
it
enwrapped
. This was not
merely
a
gift
item
or an
electronic
device, it was more than that
-
like a wonder
box
wrapped with care and
love
. My
mother
is a housewife and managing the
money
to
buy
me this
gift
must
have been a result of her
many
small
sacrifices. I thanked my
mother
for this fabulous
gift and
she was
so
happy to
see
me enthralled about the gift.

It was a white and
small
digital
dictionary
, not more than 4 by
6 inches
in dimension,
but
was one of the latest models. It was
quite
handy for me and having this
dictionary
encouraged me to
learn
more words, their synonyms and their origins.

The
gifts
are always
good
gestures, tokens of appreciation and expression of
love
in our tradition. This
gift
was
something
even more
special
to me. I
knew
how much my
mother
has always
loved
me and her
gift
represented her
love
as
well
as sacrifices for me. In terms of
utilisation
, it was
quite
beneficial too. I could
easily
carry it in my pocket and I
used
it
often
to
learn
new
words and that has
helped
me enhance my language
skill
. This is the
only
gift
from my teenage
time
that I
still
have. I will always remember my mother's
love
that
was blended
with this
gift
. Tips for answering this
Cue
card
question:
Think
about a
gift
that you
received
from one of your
family
members, relatives,
friends
, colleagues or
someone
else. Write down the
name
of the
item
and the
person
who
gave
it to you as
well
as when did you receive it and what was the occasion. Being able to
make
notes of these points will
help
you talk about this
topic
. The
gift
can be from
someone
special
and for this, the
gift
can be a simple friendship
card
or a book. It does not matter if it is an expensive and exclusive
gift
-
the most
important
part
is the passion and
love
behind the gift.

The
gift
can be
something
other
than the conventional
gift
items
like a piece of life-changing advice that you consider a
gift
. If you are a
father
or a
mother
, you can say your child is the
best
gift
in your life.

For
gifts
like a cell phone, computer or such
electronic
device, mention that you have been wishing to
own
this
but
could not afford to
buy
it. And after you
received
that
item
, you
felt
overwhelmed. A
gift
from parents on your birthday can
also
be a
good
example of the
best
gift
you have
received
. For such
gifts
, mention that you
received
it in your childhood and had
been touched
by the whole
idea
of this gift-giving.

For this
cue
card
topic
, the
gift
item
is not itself
important
, be it an ordinary piece of
gift
or a luxurious
item
,
so
emphasise
on your feelings
rather
than the
gift
item
itself.
Part
3
-
Details
Discussion: Q. Do you
think
that gift-giving will
play
an
important
role
in daily
life
in the future? Why?

Answer: It seems to me that this is a bit ambiguous. More
precisely
,
present
giving is
something
that occurs in
special
events
,
for example
, at birthdays, festivals, anniversaries, wedding, graduation day, on
name
days, when
someone
visits others and
so
on. I don't
think
that there are
many
people
around the world
who
give
presents
to their
loved
ones or to
friends
on a daily basis.
Furthermore
,
with regards to
the future, I am of the opinion that giving
gifts
won't have a
special
role
in everyday
life
either
because
, as I said earlier,
presents
are
given
when
something
important
happens.
However
, there is no doubt that
present
giving
plays
an
important
role
in our relationship and that will always remain the same. Q. Compare the
gifts
which
people
have
received
10 years ago to the
gifts
that
people
now
are receiving? What's the difference between them?

Answer: To
answer
this question we
have to
go back to the past and
think
of the types of
presents
we
gave
and
received
. Despite my young age, I have
some
memories of such
presents
that my
family
and relatives
gave
me. I would say that in the past,
specifically
10 years ago, the types of
gifts
exchanged were
primarily
clothes, toys, household appliances and books. Apart from the fact that they weren't related to technology, they were
also
significantly
important
, educational and
in most cases
and most of the
time
expensive. Nowadays,
presents
are more symbolic than substantial or useful.
People
these days
often
give and receive technology-related
gifts
which were
quite
rare in the past. To illustrate, the
important
gifts
that I
received
on my last birthday were perfumes and a laptop.
Of course
,
gifts
items
in all decades do not remain the same. It will
change
for sure after ten years. The
love
and
good
wishes behind a
gift
are more
important
than the
item
itself. Q. Do you
think
that the
brand
name
is
very
important
for sales?

Answer: I believe that the
brand
name
really
matters and it affects the
sales
volume of a product. Most
companies
spend a huge amount of
money
on branding in order to
make
the product or service
famous
. We could say that branding is an enterprise itself
because
it constitutes an
amazingly
important
part
of the
company
and its viability. As branding is a core aspect of a
company
,
brand
managers try to acquire customers and maintain relationships with them.
Moreover
, through advertising, media exposure and celebrity endorsement
sales
are on the rise most of the
time
for popular brands.

Personally
, I would spend more
money
to
purchase
a branded product.
Hence
I am
quite
positive
that
brand
name
is
important
for
sales
.
[Part
3
answers
are written
by Maria, UK
]


Some
similar
cue
card
topics
that you can
answer
in a similar fashion
:
Describe
a thing which is
important
to you. Talk about a
gift
you
received
in your childhood.
Describe
a
gift
you
received
on your birthday.
Describe
something
you
bought
this
year
.
Describe
a memorable
gift
.
Describe
a valuable possession you have.
Describe
an expensive
gift
you have
received
.
Describe
a
gift
you
gave
to
someone
.
Describe
a
gift
you
gave
to your
friend
.
26Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
384Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
33Mistakes
Language is the road map of a culture. It tells you where its people come from and where they are going.
Rita Mae Brown

IELTS speaking Describe the best gift/ present you have ever received. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
23 paragraphs
2196 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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