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Describe a historic place that you know about. v.1

Describe a historic place that you know about. v. 1
Describe a historic place that you know about. You should say: what the place is where it is located what is the significance of the place and describe your experience of the place. Follow-up Questions: • What do you think of the future trend of historic places? • Will the government strengthen its protection toward historic places? • What are the changes brought about by the historic place in the local economy and people? • What is the effect of tourists to such a place?
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Describe
a
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historic
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place
that
you know
about. You should say: what the
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place
is where it
is located
what is the significance of the
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place
and
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describe
your experience of the place.

Follow-up Questions:

• What do you
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think
of the future trend of
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historic
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places? •
Will the
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government
strengthen its protection toward
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historic
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places? •
What are the
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changes
brought about by the
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historic
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place
in the local economy and
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people
?

• What is the effect of tourists to such a
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place
?
0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
11Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a historic place that you know about. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
6 paragraphs
85 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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