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Describe a small business you want to start. v.1

Describe a small business you want to start. v. 1
Describe a small business you want to start. You should say: what business it would be when you want to start it why you have not you started it yet and explain why you want to start this business. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer 1: I am really lucky to have this candidate task card topic as it is something I would be able to talk about from my heart. I am 32 and a doting father of a 4 years old daughter. Both I and my wife work and I have been planning for a while to quit my daytime job and start a small business. I personally thank you for letting me talk about it. The small business that I have in my mind is establishing a cyber cafe in our area. The cyber cafe I have planned for would be an exclusive one and primarily target the foreign tourists who visit our area. Though there are already three cyber cafes in our locality, most tourists do not feel comfortable there as they do not have a world-class environment and high-speed internet connections. My cyber cafe would have a large zone for browsing the internet, a small cafeteria, a bookselling point and definitely a very classy environment. If I can make my cyber cafe popular, I would then plan to expand it in other tourists spots in my city. Frankly speaking, I and my wife want to start it right now! However, from a practical point of view, it would take us another year to start it. The budget we would need to manage to launch this cyber cafe is yet to be managed and we want to start it from the savings we have without taking a loan from a bank or family members. Moreover, we would need to resign from our current jobs and then arrange a suitable location and a great interior designer for our cafe. We will also need to hire 7-8 staff members to run this business. These all seem time-consuming to me and up until last January, we were not absolutely convinced that the time has come for us to start something of our own. Probably this is the main reason we are yet to start it. Why do we want to start it? Well, I am not satisfied with my current job. Though I get a steady amount of money per month from my job, I have little time to spend with my family, take vacations and enjoy things I feel passionate about. The office consumes more than 50 hours weekly and most of my energy and this is why I often feel stressed out. I can not take vacations and manage time to visit my relatives. 'Freedom' - I guess is the reason I would like to start this business. I also want to stay close to my family and work as a free-lance journalist for a local daily newspaper. I have got only one life and I want to enjoy it and explore more possibilities.   Sample Answer 2: This is a great topic to discuss and thank you for allowing me on the issue. Photography is an art but not everyone is the artist here. It requires some specific set of skills and expertise to capture a moment nicely. Besides, this is a very good business as well. So, I want to start a photography as a small business for me. Photography is now one of the most impressive ways to earn and a type of small business for individual level. Since I am a student of graduate level, I think the earning would be enough for me. Besides, it would not hamper my academic activities as well. A large number of people, particularly students are engaged in this profession while most of them have no professional certifications in photography. But my six-month long course on photography has made me skilled enough to undertake this scheme. In fact, this is the small business where you do not need to invest a huge amount of money to start with. I am planning to start the business from next year. I live with my parents and this is a joint family in India. So, it often becomes difficult for the family heads to run the family expenses. My father is to pay a notable amount of his income after my education at a private university here in Delhi. So, I want to start the business as soon as possible. I have also arranged for enough money to buy a top quality digital camera. If everything goes right with me, I am planning to advertise for my business. I have also planned to arrange for an office room on the ground floor of the house we live in. I have to pay the rent for the room though it belongs to my family. I had long been planning to do something for myself so that I could bear my own expenses. Hence, the idea of photography appeared in my mind and I started a thorough research. Actually, I wanted to be a professional photographer in all terms and thus I planned the entire scheme into different parts. As part of the plan, I had to complete a professional photography course. Then I learnt photo editing. These activities took around one year to complete. Basically, people seek the skilled photographers with the latest device and technical know-how about photo editing. Without the preparation, I would be unable to satisfy my potential clients. So, I could not start the business earlier. Photography is a hobby to many but this is a business scheme for me to bear my own expenses. It has potentials to grow. I took several professional training to be a notable photographer and take the right shot at the right moment. There are certain categories but I have mastered almost all the skills. So, I think I would be a versatile photographer and someday will be a reputed one. I have planned to start it now and gradually I will grow. I also dream to open a professional photography institute in the long run but to fulfil the dream I have to survive. Initially, the income I will generate will be sufficient to meet my expenses and also I would be able to contribute to my family income as well. Considering all the issues, I want to start photography as my own small business that will grow to the extreme in future. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe a small business you want to start. 1. The demand for catering service is growing in the downtown of New York Cities. So, I have a plan to start a catering business in this locality. I would like to start it within next six months. I could not start it because I needed to analyze the business trend. The number of caterers providing lunch in offices is lower but they are having a good profit. And if I start the business, I would be able to make a smart profit and later my business will get expanded. 2. Writing is my passion and I think I would open a small business of freelance writing. I would like the start this business as I have gained a huge experience in writing. In fact, I have been ghostwriting for past three years. But owing to my professional engagements, I could not focus on the matter and now have the plan to open a small business. The business will also provide me with benefits like I will have an extra income. So, I want to start it. 3. The demand for antique products is high in Greece. A large number of tourists come here and get their necessary antique products. I have a plan to start a small antique shop in Athens. I could not start that because I needed to collect necessary funds to start a business like that. This is a profitable business and has huge potentials to grow in near future centring the city I live in. Hence, I want to start it. 4. Rock bands are the sensation of the day and they use electric guitars during performances. So, I want to start an electric guitar servicing centre here in New Delhi. I was undergoing a course on guitar servicing from a local training institute. So, I could not manage time to start the business until today. But I have plenty of skills and the necessary funding to start it now. This small business owns potentials and guitar servicing will make me closer to the band groups. 5. Search Engine Optimization, also known as SEO is a great job in the present context. I have gathered a pile of experience on the issue. And I am planning to start an SEO service providing business shortly. I have a plan to open it within next two months. As I was busy with learning and serving at an organization, I could not open it so far. I want to start the business because it would be a leading profession within next few years and the demand for SEO service will increase to a great height due to technological advancement.
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it would be when you
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it why you have not you
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it
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Sample Answer 1:

I am
really
lucky to have this candidate task card
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topic
as it is something I would be able to
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talk
about from my heart. I am 32 and a doting father of a 4 years
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old
daughter. Both I and my wife work and I have been
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planning
for a while to quit my daytime
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job
and
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start
a
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small
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business
. I
personally
thank you for letting me
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talk
about it.

The
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small
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business
that I have in my mind is establishing a
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cyber
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cafe
in our area. The
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cyber
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cafe
I have
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planned
for would be an exclusive one and
primarily
target the foreign
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tourists
who visit our area. Though there are already three
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cyber
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cafes
in our locality, most
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tourists
do not feel comfortable there as they do not have a world-
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class
environment and high-speed internet connections. My
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cyber
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cafe
would have a large zone for browsing the internet, a
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small
cafeteria, a
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bookselling
point and definitely a
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very
classy environment. If I can
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make
my
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cyber
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cafe
popular, I would then
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plan
to expand it in other
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tourists
spots in my city.

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speaking, I and my wife
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to
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start
it
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now
!
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, from a practical point of view, it would take us another
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to
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it. The budget we would
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need
to manage to launch this
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cafe
is
yet
to be
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managed and
we
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to
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start
it from the savings we have without taking a loan from a bank or
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family
members.
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, we would
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to resign from our
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current
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jobs
and then arrange a suitable location and a
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great
interior designer for our
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cafe
. We will
also
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need
to hire 7-8 staff members to run this
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business
. These all seem time-consuming to me and up until last January, we were not
absolutely
convinced that the
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time
has
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come
for us to
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start
something of our
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own
.
Probably
this is the main reason we are
yet
to
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Why do we
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. Though I
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get
a steady amount of money per month from my
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job
, I have
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little
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to spend with my
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, take vacations and enjoy things I feel passionate about. The office consumes more than 50 hours weekly and most of my energy and this is why I
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often
feel
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stressed
out. I can not take vacations and manage
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time
to visit my relatives. 'Freedom'
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-
I guess
is the reason I would like to
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this
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business
. I
also
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and work as a free-lance journalist for a local daily newspaper. I have
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got
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only
one life and I
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to enjoy it and explore more possibilities.
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Sample Answer 2:

This is a
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great
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topic
to discuss and thank you for allowing me on the issue. Photography is an art
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but
not everyone is the artist here. It requires
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some
specific set of
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skills
and expertise to capture a moment
nicely
.
Besides
, this is a
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very
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good
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business
as
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to
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a photography as a
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small
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business
for me.

Photography is
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now
one of the most impressive ways to earn and a type of
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small
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business
for individual level. Since I am a student of graduate level, I
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think
the earning would be
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enough
for me.
Besides
, it would not hamper my academic activities as
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well
.
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people
,
particularly
students
are engaged
in this profession while most of them have no
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professional
certifications in photography.
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But
my
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six-month long
course on photography has made me skilled
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enough
to undertake this scheme. In fact, this is the
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small
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business
where you do not
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need
to invest a huge amount of money to
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start
with.

I am
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to
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the
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business
from
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next
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. I
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live
with my parents and this is a joint
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family
in India.
So
, it
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often
becomes difficult for the
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family
heads to run the
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family
expenses. My father is to pay a notable amount of his
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income
after my education at a private university here in Delhi.
So
, I
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to
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the
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as
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soon
as possible. I have
also
arranged for
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enough
money to
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buy
a top quality digital camera. If everything goes
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right
with me, I am
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to advertise for my
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business
. I have
also
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to arrange for an office room on the
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ground floor
of the
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we
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live
in. I
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have to
pay the rent for the room though it belongs to my family.

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I
had long been
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to do something for myself
so
that I could bear my
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own
expenses.
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, the
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idea
of photography appeared in my mind and I
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started
a thorough research.
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, I wanted to be a
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professional
photographer in all terms and
thus
I
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planned
the entire scheme into
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different
parts. As part of the
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, I had to complete a
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professional
photography course. Then I
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learnt
photo editing. These activities took around one
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year
to complete.
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,
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people
seek the skilled photographers with the latest device and technical know-how about photo editing. Without the preparation, I would be unable to satisfy my
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potential
clients.
So
, I could not
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start
the
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business
earlier.

Photography is a hobby to
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but
this is a
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business
scheme for me to bear my
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own
expenses. It has
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potentials
to
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grow
. I took several
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professional
training to be a notable photographer and take the
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right
shot at the
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right
moment. There are certain categories
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but
I have mastered almost all the
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skills
.
So
, I
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think
I would be a versatile photographer and someday will be a reputed one. I have
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planned
to
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start
it
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now
and
gradually
I will
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. I
also
dream to
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open
a
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professional
photography institute in the long run
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but
to fulfil the dream I
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have to
survive.
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, the
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income
I will generate will be sufficient to
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meet
my expenses and
also
I would be able to contribute to my
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family
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income
as
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. Considering all the issues, I
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want
to
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start
photography as my
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own
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small
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business
that will
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to the extreme
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in future
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about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card
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:
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small
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business
you
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want
to
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. 1. The demand for catering service is growing in the downtown of New York Cities.
So
, I have a
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plan
to
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start
a catering
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business
in this locality. I would like to
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it within
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next
six months. I could not
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start
it
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because
I needed to analyze the
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business
trend. The number of caterers providing lunch in offices is lower
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but
they are having a
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good
profit. And if I
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start
the
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business
, I would be able to
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make
a smart profit and later my
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business
will
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get
expanded.

2. Writing is my passion and I
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think
I would
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open
a
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small
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business
of freelance writing. I would like the
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start
this
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business
as I have gained a huge experience in writing. In fact, I have been ghostwriting for past three years.
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But
owing to my
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professional
engagements, I could not focus on the matter and
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now
have the
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plan
to
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open
a
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small
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business
. The
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business
will
also
provide me with benefits like I will have an extra
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income
.
So
, I
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want
to
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start
it.

3. The demand for antique products is high in Greece.
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tourists
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come
here and
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get
their necessary antique products. I have a
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plan
to
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start
a
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small
antique shop in Athens. I could not
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start
that
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
I needed to collect necessary funds to
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start
a
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business
like that. This is a profitable
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business
and has huge
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potentials
to
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grow
in near future
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centring
the city I
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live
in.
Hence
, I
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want
to
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start
it.

4. Rock bands are the sensation of the
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day and
they
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use
electric guitars during performances.
So
, I
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want
to
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start
an electric guitar servicing
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centre
here in New Delhi. I was undergoing a course on guitar servicing from a local training institute.
So
, I could not manage
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time
to
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start
the
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business
until
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today
.
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But
I have
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plenty
of
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skills
and the necessary funding to
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start
it
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now
. This
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small
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business
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
owns
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potentials
and guitar servicing will
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make
me closer to the band groups.

5. Search Engine Optimization,
also
known as SEO is a
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great
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job
in the present context. I have gathered a pile of experience on the issue. And I am
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planning
to
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start
an SEO service providing
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business
shortly. I have a
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plan
to
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open
it within
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next
two months. As I was busy with learning and serving at an organization, I could not
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open
it
so
far. I
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want
to
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start
the
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business
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because
it would be a leading profession within
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next
few years and the demand for SEO service will increase to a
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great
height due to technological advancement.
26Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
211Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a small business you want to start. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
14 paragraphs
1578 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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