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Describe a mistake you once made. v.1

Describe a mistake you once made. v. 1
Describe a mistake you once made. You should say: what it was how you made this mistake when it was and explain how it affected you. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer 1: No one wants to talk about his mistakes and it seems like the human psychology is prone to forget blunders and remember good things in life. But some mistakes are hard to forget and have severe consequences in life. I, too, as an ordinary human try to learn from my mistakes, forget them most of the time and go ahead with my dreams to do something remarkable in my life. I would like to thank you for this cue card topic that expects me to talk about a mistake I have made in my life. The biggest mistake in my life was falling in love with the wrong girl who had a completely different view of life, love and relationship. I was hardly 17 years old when I fall hard for this girl. Initially, we were classmates and then became friends. In a year I started to feel something about her that was quite extraordinary and hard to explain. I guess people call this 'love'. My whole world started to shift and I was surrounded by a mirage for this whole time. Not a single moment had passed when I didn't think about her. She was the centre and power source of my universe. When I proposed her, she expressed her boundless joys and acted as if I should have proposed her earlier. So far, this is a sweet and innocent love story of a teenager and I was happy to have her in my life. However, it took me only a few months to realise that she was not serious about our relationship. When she was my whole world, I was her just another temporary boyfriend. The relationship ended in ten months and I was so broken-hearted that I could not concentrate on anything for a while. My parents also knew about it and they were very supportive of me. First few days, it was quite difficult for me to get back to my normal life, study or go outside. I simply could not appease my mind that I made a great mistake and it was like an illusion that I need to come out from soon. However, when I started realising that I made a big mistake by approaching a serious relationship without even knowing the girl genuinely, I started making peace with my mind. I was completely honest with myself and that eventually helped me to get out of the depressive time I went through at that time. The lesson learned from this mistake made me more cautious about making any kind of relationship and I am happy that I took this mistake as an event to learn a lesson. However, I often feel bad that how someone could be so naive to play with someone's sentiment so cheaply.   Sample Answer 2: Making a mistake is quite natural for human beings. In fact, everyone makes mistakes. I also did so, recently while preparing for a cooking. I set fire at home by mistake and got injured. I live in Pakistan with my parents. Now I am a student of 12th grade here and attended some courses related to cooking, managing families and other domestic matters. In fact, I was instructed to cook something for the school as part of a practical exam for the course of Home Economics. Accordingly, I tried to cook the food but made the blunder which leads to a fire-related incident at our kitchen. Fortunately, it was a small-scale fire and I was a bit injured while the fire destroyed some of the kitchen utensils. None else was injured in this incident. The course title was about cooking foods for home. It was the Food Preparation course - a part of the of Home Economics subject at my school. Since I am unable to cook, it was my very first attempt to prepare something. I took preparations and a recipe book. I collected all the necessary materials for cooking and my mother also instructed me. But while I was about to light the stove, I made the mistake. In most of the parts, where we live in, people cook with stoves. Cooking in stoves requires some special set of skills. Lighting the stove is most difficult. You need to use a lighter to lit all the laces that will provide the heat by burning. Unfortunately, I failed to light the stove. It fell to the ground and the nearby stuff was set on fire. It was right before the day of practical exam of the course. The students were asked to bring two pieces of paratha and cooked chicken curry from home and the teachers would score on the cooking. In fact, it was the year-ending exam and the grades on the cooking would help us to get a good grade. So, everyone tried their best to prepare the instructed items. I attempted so. But the mistake I made was horrible. Though my mother taught me to light up the stove several times, I could not imitate her rightly. So, when she was irritated with my attempts, she left me alone in the kitchen to attend to some other tasks. Hence, I commit the mistake and set a fire in the kitchen. Though the impacts were less instantly, I was shocked to a great extent. My father was worried about the issue after he heard of it. Moreover, I was unable to prepare the foods for my physical injury. I burnt both of my hands and informed the issue to my teachers. They helped me pass the course considering the issue. It was a great lesson for me. Actually, I made the mistake as I could not light up the stove perfectly. The rule to light up a stove is to light up the laces one after another. But what I did was completely wrong. I threw the matchstick on the stove that caused the fire. Consequently, my hands suffered minor injuries for the next two weeks. Now, I am extremely careful about cooking issues and try to avoid lighting up the stoves by myself. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe a mistake you once made. 1. While drafting a report for my office, I made the mistake. I did not notice the instruction and inserted a wrong image on the report. I made the mistake in the middle of the night. In fact, I had to work until the late night to complete the report which was supposed to be submitted in the next day. So, when my boss noticed the matter, he politely asked me about it. I replied everything was okay and when he pointed at the report, I felt ashamed. Actually, I never made such mistakes before. 2. I have two mobile phones and I forgot to take the second one during a college function here in Delhi. Actually, I was in a rush to attend the functions. The event was set to be held at 3. 30 pm and started from home at 2. 45 pm. It was a deep trouble for me. I left my primary phone at home and could not make phone calls. Besides, some of my friends made phones and I was unable to receive them. 3. Depositing money in bank accounts is easier but it became the most terrible event for me last month. Mistakenly, I altered a digit of the bank account number. It was around 4. 30 pm and the closing hour of the day and week as well. So, before depositing the money, I filled in a form with an altered digit. The money was sent to another person’s account. Later, I had to waste many times and meet many people and bank officials to settle the matter. 4. I am unable to draw something and made a mistake while drawing my practical exam book for college. I made the mistake unintentionally while drawing a frog and its internal organs. I was attending the practical biology class in the college, in Lahore, Pakistan. There was a frog lied before us and the teacher instructed to draw the image. But being unable to draw, I did not know what I drew them. The teacher and the other students laughed at me with the piece of drawing. 5. Driving is my hobby but last week I forgot to take my driving license. Actually, it was a private gathering of my friends here in Munich and I went there amid rush. It was in the afternoon and I drove with a high speed to reach my destination. But the consequences were worst. I was caught. The police officer charged me with a couple of charges. And forgetting drivers’ license at the home was the prime one. I had to pay a heavy amount of fine.
Describe
a
mistake
you once made. You should say: what it was how you made this
mistake
when it was and
explain
how it
affected
you. [You will
have to
talk
about the
topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
think
about what you're going to say. You can
make
some
notes to
help
you if you wish.
]
Sample Answer 1:

No one wants to
talk
about his
mistakes
and it seems like the human psychology is prone to forget blunders and remember
good
things in
life
.
But
some
mistakes
are
hard
to forget and have severe consequences in
life
. I, too, as an ordinary human try to learn from my
mistakes
, forget them most of the
time
and go ahead with my dreams to do
something
remarkable in my
life
. I would like to thank you for this cue card
topic
that
expects
me to
talk
about a
mistake
I have made in my life.

The biggest
mistake
in my
life
was falling in
love
with the
wrong
girl who had a completely
different
view of
life
,
love
and
relationship
. I was hardly 17 years
old
when I fall
hard
for this girl.

Initially
, we were classmates and then became friends. In a year I
started
to feel
something
about her that was quite extraordinary and
hard
to
explain
.
I guess
people
call this '
love
'. My whole world
started
to
shift and
I
was surrounded
by a mirage for this whole
time
. Not a single moment had passed when I didn't
think
about her. She was the
centre
and power source of my universe. When I proposed her, she expressed her boundless joys and acted as if I should have proposed her earlier.
So
far, this is a sweet and innocent
love
story of a
teenager and
I was happy to have her in my life.

However
, it took me
only
a few months to
realise
that she was not serious about our
relationship
. When she was my whole world, I was her
just
another temporary boyfriend. The
relationship
ended in ten
months and
I was
so
broken-hearted that I could not concentrate on anything for a while. My parents
also
knew about
it and
they were
very
supportive of me.
First
few days, it was quite difficult for me to
get
back to my normal
life
, study or go outside. I
simply
could not appease my mind that I made a great
mistake
and it was like an illusion that I need to
come
out from
soon
.
However
, when I
started
realising
that I made a
big
mistake
by approaching a serious
relationship
without even knowing the girl
genuinely
, I
started
making peace with my mind. I was completely honest with myself and that
eventually
helped
me to
get
out of the depressive
time
I went through at that time.

The lesson learned from this
mistake
made me more cautious about making any kind of
relationship and
I am happy that I took this
mistake
as an
event
to learn a lesson.
However
, I
often
feel
bad
that how someone could be
so
naive to play with someone's sentiment
so
cheaply
.
 
Sample Answer 2:

Making a
mistake
is quite natural for human beings. In
fact
, everyone
makes
mistakes
. I
also
did
so
, recently while preparing for a cooking. I set
fire
at home by
mistake
and
got
injured.

I
live
in Pakistan with my parents.
Now
I am a student of 12th grade here and attended
some
courses
related to cooking, managing families and other domestic matters. In
fact
, I was
instructed
to cook
something
for the school as part of a
practical
exam for the
course
of Home Economics.
Accordingly
, I tried to cook the
food
but
made the blunder which leads to a fire-related incident at our
kitchen
.
Fortunately
, it was a
small
-scale
fire and
I was a bit injured while the
fire
destroyed
some of the
kitchen
utensils. None else
was injured
in this incident.

The
course
title was about cooking
foods
for home. It was the
Food
Preparation
course
-
a part of the of Home Economics subject at my school. Since I am
unable
to cook, it was my
very
first
attempt to prepare
something
. I took preparations and a recipe book. I collected all the necessary materials for cooking and my mother
also
instructed
me.
But
while I was about to
light
the
stove
, I made the
mistake
. In most of the parts, where we
live
in,
people
cook with
stoves
. Cooking in
stoves
requires
some
special set of
skills
. Lighting the
stove
is most difficult. You need to
use
a lighter to lit all the laces that will provide the heat by burning. Unfortunately, I failed to
light
the
stove
. It fell to the ground and the nearby stuff
was set
on fire.

It was
right
before
the day of
practical
exam of the
course
. The students
were asked
to bring two pieces of
paratha
and cooked chicken curry from home and the
teachers
would score on the cooking. In
fact
, it was the year-ending exam and the grades on the cooking would
help
us to
get
a
good
grade.
So
, everyone tried their best to prepare the
instructed
items. I attempted
so
.
But
the
mistake
I made was horrible. Though my mother taught me to
light
up the
stove
several
times
, I could not imitate her
rightly
.
So
, when she
was irritated
with my attempts, she
left
me alone in the
kitchen
to attend to
some
other tasks.
Hence
, I commit the
mistake
and set a
fire
in the
kitchen
. Though the impacts were less
instantly
, I
was shocked
to a great extent. My father
was worried
about the
issue
after he heard of it.
Moreover
, I was
unable
to prepare the
foods
for my physical injury. I burnt both of my hands and informed the
issue
to my
teachers
. They
helped
me pass the
course
considering the
issue
. It was a great lesson for me.
Actually
, I made the
mistake
as I could not
light
up the
stove
perfectly
. The
rule
to
light
up a
stove
is to
light
up the laces one after another.
But
what I did was completely
wrong
. I threw the matchstick on the
stove
that caused the
fire
.
Consequently
, my hands suffered minor injuries for the
next
two weeks.
Now
, I am
extremely
careful about cooking
issues
and try to avoid lighting up the
stoves
by myself. More
Ideas
to
talk
about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card
topic
:
Topic
:
Describe
a
mistake
you once made. 1. While drafting a
report
for my office, I made the
mistake
. I did not notice the instruction and inserted a
wrong
image on the
report
. I made the
mistake
in the middle of the night. In
fact
, I had to work until the late night to complete the
report
which
was supposed
to
be submitted
in the
next
day.
So
, when my boss noticed the matter, he
politely
asked me about it. I replied everything was okay and when he pointed at the
report
, I felt ashamed.
Actually
, I never made such
mistakes
before. 2
. I have two mobile
phones
and I forgot to take the second one during a college function here in Delhi.
Actually
, I was in a rush to attend the functions. The
event
was set
to
be held
at 3. 30 pm and
started
from home at 2. 45 pm. It was a deep trouble for me. I
left
my primary
phone
at home and could not
make
phone
calls.
Besides
,
some
of my friends made
phones and
I was
unable
to receive them.

3. Depositing money in bank accounts is easier
but
it became the most terrible
event
for me last month.
Mistakenly
, I altered a digit of the bank account number. It was around 4. 30 pm and the closing hour of the day and week as
well
.
So
,
before
depositing the money, I filled in a form with an altered digit. The money was
sent
to another person’s account. Later, I had to waste
many
times
and
meet
many
people
and bank officials to settle the matter.

4. I am
unable
to draw
something
and made a
mistake
while drawing my
practical
exam book for college. I made the
mistake
unintentionally
while drawing a frog and its internal organs.
I
was attending the
practical
biology
class
in the college, in Lahore, Pakistan. There was a frog lied
before
us and the
teacher
instructed
to draw the image.
But
being
unable
to draw, I did not know what I drew them. The
teacher
and the other students laughed at me with the piece of drawing.

5. Driving is my hobby
but
last week I forgot to take my driving license.
Actually
, it was a private gathering of my friends here in Munich and I went there amid rush. It was in the afternoon and I drove with a high speed to reach my destination.
But
the consequences were worst. I
was caught
. The police officer charged me with a couple of charges. And forgetting drivers’ license at the home was the prime one. I had to pay a heavy amount of fine.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
130Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
17Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a mistake you once made. v. 1

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5.5
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