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Describe a bike/ motorbike/ car trip you would like to have. v.1

Describe a bike/ motorbike/ car trip you would like to have. v. 1
Describe a bike/ motorbike/ car trip you would like to have. You should say: where you would like to go how you would like to go there who you would like to go with and explain why you would like to go there by bike/ motorbike or car. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer 1: Las Vegas is one of the most impressive resort towns I have ever seen, and I want to be there with some of my close mates. I want a trip in a car with them. Las Vegas is most famous for the colourful nightlife. This is a resort town located in the Mojave Desert in Nevada. The town has some specialities and during the night times, it looks best. The entire city is well decorated and illuminated. The most amazing feature of the city is the musical fountain. It is synchronised with music. Besides, the Strip is also another attractive issue at the town. The replicas like Eiffel Tower, Egyptian Pyramids etc. are also some adorable things here. The city is around 125 kilometres away from my town, Bullhead City in Arizona. Recently my buddy David has got a brand new car on his 19th birthday. But he is unable to drive the car since his dad is not allowing him to move with the car until the college exams are done. Thereby, he is planning to make a trip with his car. Hence I want to go there on David’s car. In fact, I have my own motorbike but my parents are highly anxious about my rough and tough driving. They have become more cautious after my last accident when I broke my knee. I am under a kind of restriction on driving. So, I am unable to move for the trip and if I had the chances, I would have moved alone. Alas! I have no other way to wait until the exams are over. David has also turned crazy like me make the tour. I am a student at Everest College and I am doing my undergrad course in economics. I have a group of six members of the college. We love to be together always like having a group study, moving to a theatre, joining at any ceremony and more. Sometimes we make some short trips in some less distant areas. Now we are planning to have a trip to Las Vegas. Though I went there for several times with my dad to meet my uncle who owns a small pub there, I did not have the chance to move on my own. Dad always was with me lest I get into any bar or pub and have a drink. In fact, my parents are conservative in some aspects. I would like to go there by car because it is a long journey. Las Vegas is around 125 kilometres away from my home. Moving such a distance alone is not preferable to me. Moreover, if I become a victim of an accident, there is none to look after me on the highway to Vegas. Even there are some risks to move alone in the city until you are matured enough to protect yourself from any sudden invasion. Considering all the issues, I have decided to make the trip with my friends and moreover, it would be great fun for us. All of us have visited the town but we lack the experience to stay at night there. So, I am going there on the car that will be driven by David. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe a bike/ motorbike/ car trip you would like to have. 1. I would like to go to the Columbia River Scenic Highway. I would like to have a motorbike drive there. This would be a solo drive. Earlier, I had the experience to visit the area and I went there with my dad. But this time, I would like to have a solo visit there. I also have plans to spend some time near the river bank and enjoy the natural views. But if someone accompanies me, I will lose the flexibilities. 2. The Great Ocean Road in Australia is very beautiful and I want to have a ride there. I would like to make the ride by my car. And I want my girlfriend to be with me there. I have been driving cards for past five years and this is hard to get the top car speed inside the city. This is the only place in Victoria where I would be able to test my car speed. Besides, the accompany of my girlfriend will make the moments enjoyable to all extent. 3. I would like to have a bike ride at the O Quy Ho Pass in Vietnam. This is a dream for me. I would like to cross this longest mountain pass in the country using a motorbike. And it would be fun if all the members of my biker gang attend with me. I would like to enjoy the natural beauties of the place. And the O Quy Ho Pass is also known as the Heaven Gate for the outstanding beauty. The highway in the place is natural and for all the reasons, I would like to have a trip there. 4. Mumbai to Pune expressway is my favourite road to drive a car. I have a plan that I would like to make a car trip on the expressway. A solo travel is not preferable there, rather I would like to get some companies. A friend showed his interest in the trip and I will ask him. I would like to ride in my car there to enjoy the speed. It is tough to travel inside the city. The traffic congestions have made it nearly impossible to cross the 40s limit. So, I have planned to drive on the expressway and get some different experience. 5. Yaxi Expressway is a wonderful highway in China and I would like to make a trip here. I will prefer my bike during the trip. The highway is excellent to look at so; it is imperative to be with someone during the trip. I would like to be with my younger sister during the trip. The highway comes with ample spaces to get the taste of speed. And since I do not have any car, I will ride on that to make the trip complete.
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Describe
a bike/ motorbike/
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car
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trip
you would like to have. You should say: where you would like to go how you would like to go there who you would like to
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go with
and
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explain
why you would like to go there by bike/
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motorbike
or
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car
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
Sample Answer 1:

Las Vegas is one of the most impressive resort
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towns
I have ever
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seen
, and I
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want
to be there with
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some
of my close mates. I
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want
a
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trip
in a
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car
with them.

Las Vegas is most
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famous
for the
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colourful
nightlife. This is a resort
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town
located in the Mojave Desert in Nevada. The
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town
has
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some
specialities and during the night
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times
, it looks best. The entire city is
well
decorated and illuminated.
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The
most amazing feature of the city is the musical fountain. It is
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synchronised
with music.
Besides
, the Strip is
also
another attractive issue at the
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town
. The replicas like Eiffel Tower, Egyptian Pyramids etc. are
also
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some
adorable things here. The city is around 125
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kilometres
away from my
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town
, Bullhead City in Arizona.

Recently my buddy David has
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got
a
'brand new' seems to be a compound adjective in front of a noun. Use a hyphen: "brand-new".
brand new
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car
on his 19th birthday.
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But
he is unable to
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drive
the
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car
since his
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dad
is not allowing him to
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move
with the
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car
until the college exams
are done
. Thereby, he is planning to
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make
a
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trip
with his
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car
.
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Hence
I
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want
to go there on David’s
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car
. In fact, I have my
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own
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motorbike
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but
my parents are
highly
anxious about my rough and tough driving. They have become more cautious after my last accident when I broke my knee. I am under a kind of restriction on driving.
So
, I am unable to
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move
for the
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trip
and if I had the chances, I would have
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moved
alone. Alas! I have no other way to wait until the exams are over. David has
also
turned crazy like me
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make
the tour.

I am a student at Everest
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College and
I am doing my undergrad course in economics. I have a group of six members of the college. We
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love
to be together always like having a group study, moving to a
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theatre
, joining at any ceremony and more.
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Sometimes
we
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make
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some
short
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trips
in
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some
less distant areas.
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Now
we are planning to have a
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trip
to Las Vegas. Though I went there for several
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times
with my
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dad
to
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meet
my uncle who
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owns
a
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small
pub there, I did not have the chance to
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move
on my
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own
.
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Dad
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always was
with me lest I
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get
into any bar or pub and have a drink. In fact, my parents are conservative in
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some
aspects.

I would like to go there by
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car
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because
it is a long journey. Las Vegas is around 125
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kilometres
away from my home. Moving such a distance alone is not preferable to me.
Moreover
, if I become a victim of an accident, there is none to look after me on the
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highway
to Vegas. Even there are
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some
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risks
to
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move
alone in the city until you
are matured
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enough
to protect yourself from any sudden invasion. Considering all the issues, I have decided to
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make
the
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trip
with my friends and
moreover
, it would be great fun for us. All of us have visited the
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town
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but
we lack the experience to stay at night there.
So
, I am going there on the
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car
that will
be driven
by David. More
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Ideas
to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic:
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Describe
a bike/ motorbike/
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car
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trip
you would like to have. 1. I would like to go to the Columbia River Scenic
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Highway
. I would like to have a
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motorbike
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drive
there. This would be a solo
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drive
. Earlier, I had the experience to visit the area and I went there with my
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dad
.
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But
this
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time
, I would like to have a solo visit there. I
also
have plans to spend
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some
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time
near the river bank and enjoy the natural views.
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But
if someone accompanies me, I will lose the
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flexibilities
.

2. The Great Ocean Road in Australia is
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very
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beautiful
and I
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want
to have a
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ride
there. I would like to
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make
the
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ride
by my
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car
. And I
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want
my girlfriend to be with me there. I have been driving cards for past five years and this is
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hard
to
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get
the top
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car
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speed
inside the city. This is the
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only
place in Victoria where I would be able to
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test
my
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car
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speed
.
Besides
,
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the accompany
of my girlfriend will
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make
the moments enjoyable to all extent.

3. I would like to have a bike
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ride
at the O
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Quy
Ho Pass in Vietnam. This is a dream for me. I would like to cross this longest mountain pass in the country using a
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motorbike
. And it would be fun if all the members of my biker gang attend with me. I would like to enjoy the natural beauties of the place. And the O
Possible spelling mistake found.
Quy
Ho Pass is
also
known as the Heaven Gate for the outstanding beauty. The
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highway
in the place is natural and for all the reasons, I would like to have a
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trip
there.

4. Mumbai to Pune
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expressway
is my
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favourite
road to
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drive
a
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car
. I have a plan that I would like to
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make
a
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car
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trip
on the
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expressway
.
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "solo travel".
A solo travel
is not preferable there,
rather
I would like to
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get
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some
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companies
. A friend
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showed
his interest in the
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trip
and I will ask him. I would like to
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ride
in my
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car
there to enjoy the
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speed
. It is tough to travel inside the city. The traffic congestions have made it
nearly
impossible to cross the 40s limit.
So
, I have planned to
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drive
on the
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expressway
and
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get
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some
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different
experience.

5.
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Yaxi
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Expressway
is a wonderful
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highway
in China and I would like to
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make
a
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trip
here. I will prefer my bike during the
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trip
. The
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highway
is excellent to look at
so
; it is imperative to be with someone during the
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trip
. I would like to be with my younger sister during the
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trip
. The
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highway
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comes
with ample spaces to
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get
the taste of
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speed
. And since I do not have any
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car
, I will
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ride
on that to
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make
the
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trip
complete.
11Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
95Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a bike/ motorbike/ car trip you would like to have. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
10 paragraphs
1113 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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