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Describe a skill which is important to you. v.1

Describe a skill which is important to you. v. 1
Describe a skill which is important to you. You should say: What is it How difficult it is to learn How can one learn it and explain why this is important to you. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Model Answer: I’ll talk about driving which I think is the most important skill I’ve ever learned. I guess the main reason as to why it’s so special is that it was a long life passion for me to see myself at the wheel driving at a fast speed and going where ever I fancied. What’s more, my father bought me a car when I got my driving license which is a great gift to me, both financially and sentimentally. It is not a very difficult skill to learn but it requires some dedication, practice and concentration to learn. One can learn it in 7 days with few hours practice daily. But to become a really expert driver, someone needs to keep driving regularly for about a year in my opinion. Someone interested to learn driving can contact to the local driving school and can get enrolled with the quick driving lessons they have. Alternatively, if someone has his/ her access to a car and can manage someone to teach him/her the driving; s/he can do it as well.
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Describe
a
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skill
which is
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important
to you. You should say: What is it How difficult it is to
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learn
How can one
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learn
it and
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explain
why this is
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important
to you. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
Model Answer:

I’ll talk about
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driving
which I
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think
is the most
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important
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skill
I’ve ever learned.
I guess
the main reason as to why it’s
so
special is that it was a long life passion for me to
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see
myself at the wheel
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driving
at a
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fast
speed and going where ever I fancied. What’s more, my father
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bought
me a car when I
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got
my
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driving
license which is a great gift to me, both
financially
and
sentimentally
. It is not a
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very
difficult
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skill
to
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learn
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but
it requires
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some
dedication, practice and concentration to
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learn
. One can
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learn
it in 7 days with few hours practice daily.
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But
to become a
really
expert driver, someone needs to
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keep
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driving
regularly
for about a year in my opinion.

Someone interested to
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learn
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driving
can contact to the local
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driving
school and can
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get
enrolled with the quick
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driving
lessons they have.
Alternatively
, if someone has his/ her access to a car and can manage someone to teach him/her the
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driving
; s/he can do it as
well
.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
14Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a skill which is important to you. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
3 paragraphs
249 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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