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Describe a shop that recently opened in your city/country. v.1

Describe a shop that recently opened in your city/country. v. 1
Describe a shop that recently opened in your city/country. You should say: what its name is where it is who the typical customers are and say if you have bought anything from the shop. Why/Why not? [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: I would like to thank you for this nice cue card topic. A store for babies named “The Baby Shop” has been opened in my locality. The shop is specialized for babies and sells products for children only. The shop provides the best necessaries for the children including the newborn babies. This is a great cue card to answer and I am feeling lucky with this. The shop is located in the centre of my town and initially has only a single branch in my country, Indonesia. Being located in the centre of the town, the shop is accessible from every corner and remains open round the day. This is a great shop for the babies and provides a wide range of necessary stuff for the people. Interestingly, it sells almost all types of products for babies ranging from zero to five years old. New parents are the typical customers for this shop. Besides, the other parents who have babies under five-years-old at their home are also the visitors to this shop. They frequently visit the shop and get their necessaries. The options are broad and thus there are plenty of chances to get the right product for their babies. Moreover, people who need any baby products and cannot find them in other places also visit this shop. This is of a great importance to them. Recently, I had to visit the shop for getting a baby product. In fact, one of my cousins has become a new mother and I went to see the baby. Before visiting the baby, I was planning to what I can take as a gift for the baby. Suddenly, I realized that baby shop is the best place to find the right thing for the newborn. I visited the shop and got some clothes for this newly born angel. More Ideas to help you prepare your own answer: Cue Card Topic: Describe a shop that recently opened in your city/country. 1.   A new shop for toys, named TOY STORE, has been launched in my city, Jakarta in Indonesia, a few months ago. The shop is located in the centre of the city. The shop has different types of customers and most of them are children. Often their parents visit the store to get the right toys for their children or to present any other children. Actually, I did not buy anything from the shop so far because I do not have any child in my family. Besides, I have not been invited to any event related to children as well. 2. A new hairdresser has opened its branch here in Mumbai. The shop is named as Hair Styler. The shop is located at the end of the street where I live in the city. People of all ages need a haircut. So, no specific type of customer visits the shop; rather almost all of them take the service. Recently, I have taken a haircut from the shop. It was nice indeed. The haircut price was reasonable too. 3. The bookstore named 'The Library' has newly been opened in our town. The store is located in the downtown of Manchester. The store sells almost all types of books including textbooks for academic studies, novel, poetry and more. Usually, the book lovers, teachers and students are the typical customers of this store. I also have become one of its customers. Recently, I have bought a bestselling novel from the store. They sold the book at a discounted price. 4. The newly opened flower shop, named ‘Flowers Dane’ is a nice shop. The shop is located in the southeast corner of the 23rd Street in Orlando. The shop has some specific types of customers. Everyone comes here to get the right flower for their beloved ones or for their home decoration. I bought some roses from the shop last week. I took the roses to decorate my home as some guests were supposed to arrive. 5. I have seen a new clothing store in my city. It is named as ‘Outfit 1’. The store was located on the Baraga street in Indonesia. The store sells different types of clothing for all ages of people. So, people of all classes and ages visit the shop whenever they need to purchase new clothes. I also went to visit the shop and bought a nice pair of jeans for me. I liked it so much for its simple design and reasonable price.
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Describe
a
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shop
that
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recently
opened in your city/country. You should say: what its name is where it is who the typical
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customers
are and say if you have
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bought
anything from the
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shop
. Why/Why not? [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
Sample Answer:

I would like to thank you for this nice cue card topic. A
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store
for
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babies
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named
“The Baby
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Shop”
has
been opened
in my locality. The
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shop
is specialized
for
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babies
and sells
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products
for
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children
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only
. The
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shop
provides the best necessaries for the
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children
including the newborn
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babies
. This is a great cue card to
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answer and
I am feeling lucky with this.

The
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shop
is
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located
in the
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centre
of my town and
initially
has
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only
a single branch in my country, Indonesia. Being
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located
in the
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centre
of the town, the
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shop
is accessible from every corner and remains open round the day. This is a great
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shop
for the
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babies
and provides a wide range of necessary stuff for the
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people
.
Interestingly
, it sells almost all
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types
of
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products
for
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babies
ranging from zero to five years
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old
.

New parents are the typical
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customers
for this
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shop
.
Besides
, the other parents who have
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babies
under five-years-
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old
at their home are
also
the visitors to this
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shop
. They
frequently
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visit
the
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shop
and
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get
their necessaries. The options are broad and
thus
there are
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plenty
of chances to
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get
the
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right
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product
for their
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babies
.
Moreover
,
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people
who need any baby
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products
and cannot find them in other places
also
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visit
this
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shop
. This is of a great importance to them.

Recently, I had to
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visit
the
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shop
for getting a baby
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product
. In fact, one of my cousins has become a
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new
mother and I went to
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see
the baby.
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Before
visiting the baby, I was planning to what I can take as a gift for the baby.
Suddenly
, I realized that baby
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shop
is the best place to find the
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right
thing for the newborn. I visited the
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shop
and
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got
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some
clothes for this
newly
born angel. More
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Ideas
to
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help
you prepare your
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own
answer: Cue Card Topic:
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Describe
a
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shop
that
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recently
opened in your city/country. 1.
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A
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new
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shop
for toys,
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named
TOY
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STORE
, has
been launched
in my city, Jakarta in Indonesia, a few months ago. The
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shop
is
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located
in the
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centre
of the city. The
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shop
has
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different
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types
of
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customers
and most of them are
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children
.
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Often
their parents
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visit
the
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store
to
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get
the
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right
toys for their
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children
or to present any other
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children
.
Actually
, I did not
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buy
anything from the
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shop
so
far
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because
I do not have any child in my family.
Besides
, I have not
been invited
to any
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event
related to
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children
as
well
.

2. A
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new
hairdresser has opened its branch here in Mumbai. The
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shop
is
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named
as Hair Styler. The
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shop
is
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located
at the
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end
of the street where I
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live
in the city.
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People
of all ages need a haircut.
So
, no specific
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type
of
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customer
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visits
the
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shop
;
rather
almost all of them take the service.
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Recently
, I have taken a haircut from the
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shop
. It was nice
indeed
. The haircut price was reasonable too.

3. The bookstore
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named
'The Library' has
newly
been opened
in our town.
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The
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store
is
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located
in the downtown of Manchester.
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The
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store
sells almost all
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types
of books including textbooks for academic studies, novel, poetry and more.
Usually
, the book lovers, teachers and students are the typical
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customers
of this
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store
. I
also
have become one of its
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customers
.
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Recently
, I have
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bought
a bestselling novel from the
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store
. They sold the book at a discounted price.

4. The
newly
opened flower
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shop
,
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named
‘Flowers Dane’ is a nice
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shop
. The
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shop
is
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located
in the southeast corner of the 23rd Street in Orlando.
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The
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shop
has
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some
specific
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types
of
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customers
. Everyone
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comes
here to
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get
the
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right
flower for their beloved ones or for their home decoration. I
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bought
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some
roses from the
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shop
last week. I took the roses to decorate my home as
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some
guests
were supposed
to arrive.

5.
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I
have
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seen
a
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new
clothing
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store
in my city. It is
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named
as ‘Outfit 1’. The
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store
was
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located
on the
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Baraga
street in Indonesia. The
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store
sells
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different
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types
of clothing for all ages of
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people
.
So
,
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people
of all classes and ages
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visit
the
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shop
whenever they need to
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purchase
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new
clothes. I
also
went to
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visit
the
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shop
and
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bought
a nice pair of jeans for me. I liked it
so
much for its simple design and reasonable price.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
110Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a shop that recently opened in your city/country. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
9 paragraphs
818 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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