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Describe an enjoyable place you visited in the countryside. v.1

Describe an enjoyable place you visited in the countryside. v. 1
Describe an enjoyable place you visited in the countryside. You should say: when you visited this place who was with you  why the place was enjoyable and say if you would like to go back there in the future. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: I have recently visited the Fraser Island, the largest sand island in the world. This is a great place to visit and enjoy the touch of nature. The freshwater lakes offer a wide number of activities to explore them. The sand formation of this island is spectacular and wins the hearts of its visitors. The white sands were really adorable. I would like to thank you for this nice cue card topic. The island is located adjacent to the Queensland coast in Australia. I went there with my family members. Actually, it was a two-day trip to the island for holiday purposes. I was accompanied by my parents and siblings. Everyone was happy with the natural view of the island. The sand was the most attractive thing there and now it has become an eco-tourism destination in the country. We paid a visit to the Cathedrals, the cliff which is also famous for the sculpted ribbons, and swimming sites. The place was enjoyable for its natural beauties. The freshwater lakes, camping facilities, fishing on the lakes, swimming in the freshwater pools etc. are the key attractions. In fact, we need leave from our daily life and this is a perfect place to enjoy the leaves. The site is enlisted with the World Heritage Site and offers a wide number of natural resources to explore. The rainforest is another attraction of this location which allows the visitors to walk along. The area is blessed with over 100 freshwater lakes which are always crowded with swimmers. If I get a chance again, I will get back there in the future. In fact, I am in love with this natural place. This blissful place has won my attention and the memories here haunt me every day. I will never forget the guided tour through the untouched beauty of the place. More Ideas to help you prepare your own answer: Cue Card Topic: Describe an enjoyable place you visited in the countryside. 1. I visited a village near Essex in England last week. One of my college friends accompanied me on this visit. In fact, we had planned long ago to make such a trip in the countryside. The place was enjoyable for many reasons. The surrounding areas were filled with trees and picturesque views. Obviously, I would like to go back there once again in the future. This was a very attractive place and the gentle breeze removed all the tiredness from inside me. The deep blue sky is still in my mind. 2. I went to a countryside in Oregon in last July. It was a stunning place indeed. My younger sister accompanied me on the trip. Actually, experiencing her pressure, I planned the sudden trip. The place was enjoyable for many reasons. The blue lake and the greeneries attracted me most. The place was wide and open. So, I liked it very much. And I want to go back there in the future. I have a plan to spend a night there with my family and friends. 3. There is fewer countryside in Malaysia but recently I visited a countryside in the country. The place came with an outstanding view. In fact, it was an excellent location filled with large trees, villages and more. The foods there were highly delicious and prices were reasonable. Considering everything, it was an enjoyable place. So, I want to get back there again in the future. I have a plan to take my girlfriend there. 4. The countryside in Vietnam is adorable. They come with eye catchy beauties. I went to such a place in last month with one of my college buddies. The place was enjoyable for many reasons. There were some archaeological sites in the place and they were charming indeed. So, I liked the place too much. Of course, I would like to go back there in the near future. And that time, I will take some other of my friends to visit the spot. 5. Nuwara Eliya in Sri Lanka is a great place to visit. I went there with my father. It was a nice trip. The place was enjoyable too. I gazed at the open wide sky and enjoyed the natural beauty of the location. The waterfalls and the tea plantations were amazing. This time I could not enjoy completely as I was with my father. But I have a plan to come back here whenever I will manage time next year.
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Describe
an
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enjoyable
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place
you
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visited
in the
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countryside
. You should say: when you
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visited
this
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place
who was with you
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why the
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place
was
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enjoyable
and say if you would like to go
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back
there in the
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future
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
Sample Answer:

I have recently
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visited
the Fraser
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Island
, the largest
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sand
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island
in the world. This is a great
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place
to
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visit
and enjoy the touch of nature. The freshwater
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lakes
offer a
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wide
number of activities to explore them. The
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sand
formation of this
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island
is spectacular and wins the hearts of its visitors.
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The
white
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sands
were
really
adorable. I would like to thank you for this nice cue card topic.

The
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island
is located
adjacent to the Queensland coast in Australia. I
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went
there with my family members.
Actually
, it was a two-day
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trip
to the
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island
for holiday purposes. I
was accompanied
by my parents and siblings. Everyone was happy with the
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natural
view of the
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island
. The
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sand
was the most attractive thing there and
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now
it has become an
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eco-tourism
destination in the country. We paid a
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visit
to the Cathedrals, the cliff which is
also
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famous
for the sculpted ribbons, and swimming sites.

The
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place
was
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enjoyable
for its
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natural
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beauties
. The freshwater
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lakes
, camping facilities, fishing on the
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lakes
, swimming in the freshwater pools etc. are the key attractions. In
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fact
, we need
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leave
from our daily life and this is a perfect
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place
to enjoy the
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leaves
. The site
is enlisted
with the World Heritage Site and offers a
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wide
number of
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natural
resources to explore. The rainforest is another attraction of this location which
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allows
the visitors to walk along.
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The
area
is blessed
with over 100 freshwater
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lakes
which are always crowded with swimmers.

If I
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get
a chance again, I will
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get
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back
there in the
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future
. In
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fact
, I am in
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love
with this
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natural
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place
. This blissful
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place
has won my attention and the memories here haunt me every day. I will never forget the guided tour through the untouched
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beauty
of the
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place
. More
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Ideas
to
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help
you prepare your
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own
answer: Cue Card Topic:
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Describe
an
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enjoyable
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place
you
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visited
in the
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countryside
. 1. I
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visited
a village near Essex in England last week. One of my college friends accompanied me on this
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visit
. In
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fact
, we had planned long ago to
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make
such a
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trip
in the
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countryside
. The
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place
was
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enjoyable
for
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many
reasons. The surrounding areas
were filled
with trees and picturesque views.
Obviously
, I would like to go
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back
there once again in the
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future
. This was a
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very
attractive
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place
and the gentle breeze removed all the tiredness from inside me. The deep blue sky is
still
in my mind.

2. I
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went
to a
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countryside
in Oregon in last July. It was a stunning
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place
indeed
. My younger sister accompanied me on the
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trip
.
Actually
, experiencing her pressure, I planned the sudden
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trip
. The
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place
was
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enjoyable
for
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many
reasons. The blue
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lake
and the
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greeneries
attracted me most.
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The
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place
was
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wide
and open.
So
, I liked it
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very
much. And I want to go
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back
there in the
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future
. I have a plan to spend a night there with my family and friends.

3. There is fewer
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countryside
in Malaysia
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but
recently I
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visited
a
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countryside
in the country. The
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place
came with an outstanding view. In
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fact
, it was an excellent location filled with large trees, villages and more. The foods there were
highly
delicious and prices were reasonable. Considering everything, it was an
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enjoyable
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place
.
So
, I want to
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get
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back
there again in the
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future
. I have a plan to take my girlfriend there.

4. The
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countryside
in Vietnam is adorable. They
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come
with eye catchy
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beauties
. I
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went
to such a
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place
in last month with one of my college buddies. The
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place
was
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enjoyable
for
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many
reasons. There were
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some
archaeological sites in the
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place and
they were charming
indeed
.
So
, I liked the
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place
too much.
Of course
, I would like to go
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back
there in the near
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future
. And that time, I will take
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some
other of my friends to
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visit
the spot.

5.
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Nuwara
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Eliya
in Sri Lanka is a great
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place
to
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visit
. I
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went
there with my father. It was a nice
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trip
. The
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place
was
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enjoyable
too. I gazed at the open
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wide
sky and enjoyed the
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natural
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beauty
of the location. The waterfalls and the tea plantations were amazing. This time I could not enjoy completely as I was with my father.
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But
I have a plan to
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come
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back
here whenever I will manage time
next
year.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
104Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe an enjoyable place you visited in the countryside. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
9 paragraphs
821 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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