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Describe a person in the news you would like to meet. v.1

Describe a person in the news you would like to meet. v. 1
Describe a person in the news you would like to meet. You should say: who the person is why s/he is in the news why you would like to meet this person and explain what you would say to this person. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: I would like to meet Mr Jonathan as he appears in the news for his bestseller. He is a writer and his recent book “The Amazing Riders” has become the bestseller. So, the local news agencies have made reports on him and his reputation is soaring up. Interestingly, Mr Jonathan lives in my locality but I was unaware of his intellectual skills. His bestselling book is the talk of the town and the news agencies, newspapers and magazines are after him to make stories about his book and contribution to the contemporary literature. I would like to meet Mr Jonathan for some solid reasons. The topmost issue about meeting him is to know about his writing. He writes smoothly and when the readers read the stories, it appears that the events are before them. In fact, I, as a reader of his book, has become his great fan. His narrative style is also different than the other writers. He uses a different tone to describe the events through his writings. Besides, his plots are also interesting and will make you amazed. Before publishing the book, he was not that much familiar in the locality and people knew him as a simple man. But now he has become a celebrity by dint of the news. I have so many questions for him to ask. If I get the chance to meet him, I will ask him first about his story plots and outlines. Some of his plots are highly interesting and they attract the attention of the readers. Further, I will try to get information about his narrative style. I think he will also share with me that how much time he spends to make a story and where he gets his inspiration to write. These are the initial queries from my side for him. More Ideas to help you prepare your own answer: Cue Card Topic: Describe a person in the news you would like to meet. 1. Sarah is a popular person in the present-day context in Victoria, Australia. She has appeared on the news for her outstanding achievement about using solar power to run a motorbike. I would like to meet her for some reasons. I would like to meet her to know her personally. I also have something else to know like how she has developed the matter, which facts inspired her to deal with solar power and so on. 2. Wayne is a rising supermodel in Singapore and recently he has been covered by news and other media. He is on the news for his manly figure and attitude. He has also starred in a movie that will be released shortly. I would like to meet him for some particular reasons. I want to know about the way to keep a good health. In fact, he was a gym instructor before his debut in media. 3. Farah Yasmin is a popular Egyptian writer. She is on the news at present for her outstanding contribution to Egyptian literature. So, I would like to meet her. I have some questions for her too. I would like to know about her writing skills and how she develops the outstanding plots. She is also on the list of 10 influential writers in the city. This is another reason to come in touch with this great personality. 4. Zikri is a teenager of interest from the Malaysian media now. He has been covered in news for his special achievement in a completion held for teenage. Zikri took part in an international competition and achieved the first position in mixed martial art. So, I want to meet him and know about the mixed martial art strategies. In fact, I also have other things to know from him. I would like to know about his inspiration, regular practice duration and more. 5. Sophia is a popular humanitarian activist. She is covered in the news in the USA recently for her achievement of a reputed prize for her contribution in establishing peace in different parts of the globe. I would like to meet her to know about some specific matters. I would ask her about the matters that are causing troubles worldwide. I also would like to know from her that how she did everything. Moreover, I want to get some pictures with this national icon. 6. Christiana is a middle-aged lady, and she is on the news for her extraordinary recipes. She runs a restaurant here in Greece and took part in a reality show. She prepared a delicious and traditional Greek recipe that won the first prize. So, I want to meet her in person. I have few questions to ask her. I would like to know about some other recipes from her as well.
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a
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person
in the
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news
you would like to
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meet
. You should say: who the
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person
is why s/he is in the
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news
why you would like to
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meet
this
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person
and
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explain
what you would say to this
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person
. [You will
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have to
talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
Sample Answer:

I would like to
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meet
Mr Jonathan as he appears in the
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news
for his bestseller. He is a
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writer
and his recent
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book
“The Amazing Riders” has become the bestseller.
So
, the local
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news
agencies have made reports on him and his reputation is soaring up.
Interestingly
, Mr Jonathan
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
lives
in my locality
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but
I was unaware of his intellectual
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skills
. His bestselling
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book
is the talk of the town and the
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news
agencies, newspapers and magazines are after him to
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make
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stories
about his
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book
and contribution to the contemporary literature.

I would like to
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meet
Mr Jonathan for
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some
solid
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reasons
. The topmost issue about meeting him is to
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know
about his writing. He writes
smoothly
and when the readers read the
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stories
, it appears that the
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events
are
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before
them. In
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fact
, I, as a reader of his
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book
, has become his great fan. His narrative style is
also
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different
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than
the
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other
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writers
. He
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uses
a
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different
tone to
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describe
the
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events
through his writings.
Besides
, his
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plots
are
also
interesting and will
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make
you amazed.
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Before
publishing the
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book
, he was not that much familiar in the locality and
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people
knew him as a simple
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man
.
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But
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now
he has become a celebrity by dint of the news.

I have
so
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many
questions for him to
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ask
. If I
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get
the chance to
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meet
him, I will
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ask
him
first
about his
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story
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plots
and outlines.
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Some
of his
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plots
are
The extreme adjective for interesting is "fascinating", or "exciting".
highly interesting
and they attract the attention of the readers.
Further
, I will try to
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get
information about his narrative style. I
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think
he will
also
share with me that how much time he spends to
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make
a
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story
and where he
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gets
his inspiration to write. These are the initial queries from my side for him. More
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Ideas
to
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help
you prepare your
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own
answer: Cue Card Topic:
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Describe
a
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person
in the
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news
you would like to
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meet
. 1. Sarah is a popular
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person
in the present-day context in Victoria, Australia. She has appeared on the
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news
for her outstanding achievement about using solar power to run a motorbike. I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
her for
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
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reasons
. I would like to
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meet
her to
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know
her
personally
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
also
have something else to
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know
like how she has developed the matter, which facts inspired her to deal with solar power and
so
on.

2. Wayne is a rising supermodel in Singapore and recently he has
been covered
by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
media. He is on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
for his
manly
figure and attitude. He has
also
starred in a movie that will
be released
shortly. I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
him for
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some
particular
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reasons
. I
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want
to
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know
about the way to
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keep
a
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good
health. In
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fact
, he was a gym instructor
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before
his debut in media.

3. Farah Yasmin is a popular Egyptian
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
writer
. She is on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
at present for her outstanding contribution to Egyptian literature.
So
, I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
her. I have
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
questions for her too. I would like to
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know
about her writing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and how she develops the outstanding
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
plots
. She is
also
on the list of 10 influential
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writers
in the city. This is another
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reason
to
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come
in touch with this great personality.

4.
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Zikri
is a
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teenager
of interest from the Malaysian media
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now
. He has
been covered
in
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news
for his special achievement in a completion held for teenage.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Zikri
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took part
in an international competition and achieved the
first
position in mixed martial art.
So
, I
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want
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
him and
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know
about the mixed martial art strategies. In
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fact
, I
also
have
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other
things to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
from him. I would like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
about his inspiration, regular practice duration and more.

5. Sophia is a popular humanitarian activist. She
is covered
in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
news
in the USA recently for her achievement of a reputed prize for her contribution in establishing peace in
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
parts of the globe. I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
her to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
know
about
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
specific matters. I would
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ask
her about the matters that are causing troubles worldwide.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
also
would like to
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know
from her that how she did everything.
Moreover
, I
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want
to
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get
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some
pictures with this national icon.

6.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Christiana
is a middle-aged lady, and she is on the
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news
for her extraordinary recipes. She runs a restaurant here in Greece and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
took part
in a reality
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
. She prepared a delicious and traditional Greek recipe that won the
first
prize.
So
, I
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want
to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
her in
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person
. I have few questions to
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ask
her. I would like to
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know
about
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some
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other
recipes from her as
well
.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
71Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a person in the news you would like to meet. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
9 paragraphs
873 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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