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Describe an event that you organized which was very successful. v.1

Describe an event that you organized which was very successful. v. 1
Describe an event that you organized which was very successful. You should say: what the event was where it was who helped you and explain why you think it was successful. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: I had to organize the last class party at my college here in Australia and it was the most successful event so far I had arranged. The participants at the event highly praised it and everyone was happy about the whole event. The function was held marking the last class in the college. Preparations for the event began about one week before the day. The event took place in the college classroom. Earlier, it was planned that we should go out and celebrate the party but later one of our teachers suggested to arrange it in our class. Following his instructions, we changed the plan and accordingly prepared for the event. It was really an enjoyable event for all of us. Preparations for the event was really hefty and I had to undergo lots of trouble during the entire week to make this happen. I made a team of four other members including Samuel, Jack, Jones, and Robin. Honestly, without their direct help, it was really impossible for me to complete the event. Inviting the principal was another big issue. He was a very busy person and ensuring his presence at the class party was the most challenging task so far. I was really grateful to my teammates as they helped me to have a blast in the party. This was a successful party considering some reasons. The most important issue was that the class took a festive look. Every one of my class attended the party, and even the boy who did not attend classes with various excuses was also present in this day. We all made fun, took lunch together and shared our memories with the college. The principal gave a short lecture and wished us luck in future. Based on the grounds, I think it was a successful event. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe an event that you organized which was very successful. 1. Organizing an inter-university competition event is hard indeed. But I had to make it possible. I organized the inter-university event at the University of Florida. I took supports from my classmates and teachers. I had to set a roadmap for the event and implemented the necessary tasks. The event was successful. Almost all the competitions took place at the right time and the prizes were awarded to the winners. 2. During the last summer, I organized for a small trade show at the University of Macedonia. In fact, it was also a gathering for everyone related to the university. I took support from some of my intimate friends and the authority helped a lot. It was a grand success. Many of the university people visited the trade show. Students from foreign countries in Greece had exhibited their national products. 3. Working as Sales Executive is stressful but I know how to eliminate them. Recently, my company launched a new product targeting the local markets of Kuwait. Definitely, it was a hefty task. All the other members of my sales team were distressed by spending very long hours to make it happen. It was truly a very successful event. The product was launched on the market and we ensured our presence to our potential consumers. 4. My newly joined office asked me to organize a seminar on climate change. The seminar was held at the conference room in Park Hyatt in Chennai. I had to organize almost alone. But I got the logistics support from my office. The event was successful because a notable number of specialists attended the conference. Moreover, the mainstream media covered the event successfully. 5. Albino is my youngest cousin and recently has stepped into eight. So, I decided to organize a birthday party to surprise him. Everyone else knew about it except Albino. The party took place at my home in Barcelona in Spain. My other family members helped me greatly to arrange the event. I ordered an eight-pound cake marking the birthday and invited all the relatives we had. Everyone arrived in due time and it was a successful event in all terms. Albino was happy indeed with the event and the gifts he received.
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that you
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organized
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very
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successful
. You should say: what the
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was where it was who
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helped
you and
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explain
why you
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think
it was
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successful
. [You will
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talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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notes to
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Sample Answer:

I had to
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organize
the last
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class
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party
at my college here in Australia and it was the most
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successful
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event
so
far I had arranged. The participants at the
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event
highly
praised it and
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everyone
was happy about the whole
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event
. The function
was held
marking the last
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class
in the college. Preparations for the
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event
began about one week
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before
the day.

The
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event
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took
place in the college classroom. Earlier, it
was planned
that we should go out and celebrate the
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party
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but
later one of our teachers
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suggested to arrange
it in our
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class
. Following his instructions, we
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changed
the plan and
accordingly
prepared for the
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event
. It was
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really
an enjoyable
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event
for all of us.

Preparations for the
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event
was
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really
hefty and I had to undergo lots of trouble during the entire week to
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make
this happen. I made a team of four other members including Samuel, Jack, Jones, and Robin.
Honestly
, without their direct
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help
, it was
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really
impossible for me to complete the
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event
. Inviting the principal was another
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big
issue. He was a
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very
busy person and ensuring his presence at the
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class
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party
was the most challenging
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task
so
far. I was
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really
grateful to my teammates as they
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helped
me to have a blast in the party.

This was a
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successful
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party
considering
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some
reasons. The most
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important
issue was that the
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class
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took
a festive look. Every one of my
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class
attended the
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party
, and even the boy who did not attend
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classes
with various excuses was
also
present in this day. We all made fun,
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took
lunch together and shared our memories with the college. The principal gave a short lecture and wished us luck
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
. Based on the grounds, I
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think
it was a
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successful
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event
. More
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Ideas
to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate
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Task
Card topic: Topic:
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Describe
an
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event
that you
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organized
which was
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very
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successful
. 1. Organizing an inter-university competition
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event
is
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hard
indeed
.
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But
I had to
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make
it possible. I
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organized
the inter-university
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event
at the
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University
of Florida. I
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took
supports from my classmates and teachers.
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I
had to set a roadmap for the
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event
and implemented the necessary
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tasks
. The
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event
was
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successful
. Almost all the competitions
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took
place at the
right
time and the prizes
were awarded
to the winners.

2. During the last summer, I
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organized
for a
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small
trade
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show
at the
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University
of Macedonia. In fact, it was
also
a gathering for
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everyone
related to the
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university
. I
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took
support from
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some
of my intimate friends and the authority
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helped
a lot. It was a grand success.
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Many
of the
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university
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people
visited the trade
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show
. Students from foreign countries in Greece had exhibited their national products.

3. Working as Sales Executive is stressful
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but
I know how to eliminate them. Recently, my
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company
launched a new product targeting the local markets of Kuwait. Definitely, it was a hefty
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task
. All the other members of my sales team
were distressed
by spending
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very
long hours to
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make
it happen. It was
truly
a
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very
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successful
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event
. The product
was launched
on the
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
market and
we ensured our presence to our potential consumers.

4. My
newly
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joined
office asked me to
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organize
a seminar on climate
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change
. The seminar
was held
at the conference room in Park Hyatt in Chennai. I had to
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organize
almost alone.
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But
I
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got
the logistics support from my office. The
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event
was
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successful
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because
a notable number of specialists attended the conference.
Moreover
, the mainstream media covered the
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event
successfully
.

5. Albino is my youngest cousin and recently has stepped into eight.
So
, I decided to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
organize
a birthday
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party
to surprise him.
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Everyone
else knew about it except Albino. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
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took
place at my home in Barcelona in Spain. My other family members
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
me
greatly
to arrange the
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event
. I ordered an eight-pound cake marking the birthday and invited all the relatives we had.
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Everyone
arrived in due time and it was a
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successful
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event
in all terms. Albino was happy
indeed
with the
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event
and the gifts he received.
6Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
76Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
5Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe an event that you organized which was very successful. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
9 paragraphs
766 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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