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Describe a present which you were given and that you broke accidentally. v.1

Describe a present which you were given and that you broke accidentally. v. 1

Describe a present which you were given and that you broke accidentally. You should say: what is it on what occasion it was presented to you how you broke it how you felt when you broke it.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :characterizeportray
Describe
 a present which you were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 and that you broke accidentally
. You should say: what is it on whatPossible typo: you repeated a whitespace 
occasion it was presented
 to you how you broke it how you felt when you broke it. 

0Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a present which you were given and that you broke accidentally. v. 1

Speaking

American English

1 paragraphs

37 words

6.5

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.5

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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