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Describe a popular place for swimming you know in your country. v.1

Describe a popular place for swimming you know in your country. v. 1
Describe a popular place for swimming you know in your country. You should say: where it is what type of people go there when usually they go there and explain whether this is a good place to go to. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: The National Aquatic Centre is located on the Level 1 of Bukit Jalil National Sports Complex in Kuala Lumpur. This is a great place for swimming and a notable number of people come here for the purpose. This is also a favourite place for the professional swimmers as well. The swimming lines are wide and spacious. I think this is a special cue card for me and I will answer the questions in brief now. This is a place where almost all types of people can pay visit and swim. But some of the swimming lanes are reserved for special purposes. The local swimming academies have their own swimming lane here which the others cannot use. Besides, the swimming pool is also used by the professional swimmers around the city. They come here for practice. Some of the locals also use the pool during the nighttime and in the early morning hours. This is a swimming pool opened to the public. So, every day a good number of people gather here for swimming. The pool is crowded during the weekends. The weeknights are also crowded too. The long and wide lines provide the best possible service for the swimmers. But on the other days, the swimming pool is crowded with swimmers who want to learn swimming. The depth and lengths are attractive and thus it has gained a popularity among the locals. This is a good place to swim for many reasons. The most important thing is the clean water. The authority is much careful about the cleaning issue and follows a couple of steps. No chemicals are used in the water for the swimmers' safety. A couple of lanes have made it convenient for everyone to swim here. Considering the grounds, this is a great place for swimming. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe a popular place for swimming you know in your country. 1. The Goldiggins quarry is a popular place for swimming in Cornwall. The place is preferred by adventurous types of people. In fact, this is a not a swimming pool, rather this is a nice location for outdoor swimming. The place is suitable for many other purposes too. People mostly come here in the noon and evening hours. In fact, this is a great place for swimming and beautiful lake water is charming for swimmers. The open sky, jade blue water –everything attracts the swimmers. 2. Lake George is located in New York and a swimming heaven. This is an open space and everyone can go there for swimming. The place is also preferable for a sunbath. Hence, swimmers gather here from the early morning. They enjoy the sunrise and even the sunset scenes. This is a wonderful place for swimming and passing leisurely moments. The beach is covered by lifeguards – so the place is safe. 3. The Sweetwater Pool in Edith River in Australia is a great place for swimmers. The entire area is surrounded by a majestic natural view. It attracts mostly people who want to swim under the open sky. And the best time to swim here is in the early morning or in the late afternoon. Honestly, this is a wonderful place for wild swimmers. The swimming holes come with plenty of crystal clear water and the feeling is awesome. 4. The sunset point in Diu, Gujrat in India is a wonderful place for swimmers. There are a small lagoon and a beach there. Swimming is perfect when there is no tide. So, the swimmers are advised to know the tidal hours before visiting the beach. The entire area is surrounded by palm trees. Most of the time, people come here to enjoy the sunset views during the swimming. 5. The beach in Kuta in Indonesia is a perfect place for swimmers. The beach allows all types of swimmers to swim in the calm water. The suitable visiting hours to this beach is in the early morning and late evening. Besides, the swimmers are never ambushed with waves in this beach. The swimmers and visitors can also take part in other activities here. If you can talk about this cue card topic, you should be able to answer the following topics as well: 1. Describe a place where you go to in the evening. 2. Describe an activity you have recently started doing. 3. Describe a place in your hometown where people can go swimming. 4. Describe something you would start in the near future. 5. Describe a public place you know about in your city/town. 6. Describe something healthy you do regularly. 7. Describe an activity you would like to start but have not started yet. 8. Describe a form of exercise you like to do.
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Describe
a popular
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place
for swimming you
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know
in your country. You should say: where it is what
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type
of
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people
go there when
usually
they go there and
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explain
whether this is a
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good
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place
to go to. [You will
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have to
talk about the
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topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
Loose punctuation mark.
]
Sample Answer:

The National Aquatic
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Centre
is located
on the Level 1 of
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Bukit
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Jalil
National Sports Complex in Kuala Lumpur. This is a
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great
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place
for swimming and a notable number of
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people
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come
here for the purpose. This is
also
a
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favourite
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place
for the professional swimmers as
well
. The swimming lines are wide and spacious. I
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think
this is a special cue card for me and I will answer the questions
in brief
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now
.

This is a
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place
where almost all
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types
of
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people
can pay visit and
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swim
.
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But
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some of the
swimming lanes
are reserved
for special purposes. The local swimming academies have their
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own
swimming lane here which the others cannot
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use
.
Besides
, the swimming
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pool
is
also
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used
by the professional swimmers around the city. They
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come
here for practice.
If the text is a generality, 'of the' is not necessary. Did you mean "some"?
Some of the
locals
also
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use
the
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pool
during the nighttime and in the
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early
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morning
hours.

This is a swimming
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pool
opened to the public.
So
, every day a
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good
number of
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people
gather here for swimming. The
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pool
is crowded
during the weekends. The weeknights are
also
crowded too.
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The
long and wide lines provide the best possible service for the swimmers.
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But
on the
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other
days, the swimming
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pool
is crowded
with swimmers who want to learn swimming. The depth and lengths are attractive and
thus
it has gained a popularity among the locals.

This is a
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good
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place
to
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swim
for
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many
reasons. The most
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important
thing is the clean
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water
. The authority is much careful about the cleaning issue and follows a couple of steps. No chemicals are
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used
in the
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water
for the swimmers' safety. A couple of lanes have made it convenient for everyone to
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swim
here. Considering the grounds, this is a
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great
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place
for swimming. More
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Ideas
to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card
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topic
:
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Topic
:
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Describe
a popular
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place
for swimming you
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know
in your country. 1. The
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Goldiggins
quarry is a popular
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place
for swimming in Cornwall. The
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place
is preferred
by adventurous
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types
of
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people
. In fact, this is a not a swimming
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pool
,
rather
this is a nice location for outdoor swimming. The
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place
is suitable for
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many
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other
purposes too.
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People
mostly
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come
here in the noon and evening hours. In fact, this is a
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great
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place
for swimming and
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beautiful
lake
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water
is charming for swimmers. The open sky, jade blue
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water
–everything attracts the swimmers.

2. Lake George
is located
in New York and a swimming heaven. This is an open space and everyone can go there for swimming. The
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place
is
also
preferable for a sunbath.
Hence
, swimmers gather here from the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
early
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morning
. They enjoy the sunrise and even the sunset scenes. This is a wonderful
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
place
for swimming and passing
leisurely
moments. The
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beach
is covered
by lifeguards
Consider using an m-dash if you do not want to join two words.
–
so
the
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place
is safe.

3. The
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Sweetwater
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Pool
in Edith River in Australia is a
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great
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place
for swimmers.
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The
entire area
is surrounded
by a majestic natural view. It attracts
mostly
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people
who want to
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swim
under the open sky. And the best time to
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swim
here is in the
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early
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morning
or in the late afternoon.
Honestly
, this is a wonderful
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place
for wild swimmers. The swimming holes
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come
with
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plenty
of crystal
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clear
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water
and the feeling is awesome.

4. The sunset point in
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Diu
,
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Gujrat
in India is a wonderful
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place
for swimmers. There are a
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small
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lagoon
and a
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beach
there. Swimming is perfect when there is no tide.
So
, the swimmers
are advised
to
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know
the tidal hours
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before
visiting the
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beach
. The entire area
is surrounded
by palm trees. Most of the time,
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people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
here to enjoy the sunset views during the swimming.

5. The
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beach
in
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Kuta
in Indonesia is a perfect
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place
for swimmers. The
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beach
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allows
all
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types
of swimmers to
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swim
in the calm
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water
.
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The
suitable visiting hours to this
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beach
is in the
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early
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morning
and late evening.
Besides
, the swimmers are never ambushed with waves in this
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beach
. The swimmers and visitors can
also
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take part
in
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other
activities here. If you can talk about this cue card
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topic
, you should be able to answer the following
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topics
as
well
:

1.
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Describe
a
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place
where you go to in the evening.

2.
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Describe
an activity you have recently
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started
doing.

3.
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Describe
a
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place
in your hometown where
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people
can go swimming.

4.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
something you would
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start
in the near future.

5.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a public
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place
you
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know
about in your city/town.

6.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
something healthy you do
regularly
.

7.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
an activity you would like to
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start
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but
have not
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started
yet
.

8.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a form of exercise you like to do.
15Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
95Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
23Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a popular place for swimming you know in your country. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
17 paragraphs
873 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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