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Describe a place in your town/city where people can go swimming. v.1

Describe a place in your town/city where people can go swimming. v. 1
Describe a place in your town/city where people can go swimming. You should say: where it is is it open for public what type of people go there and explain why people go there. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: Swimming is very good activity and provides a wide number of benefits to the swimmers. So, I often go for a swimming at Keller swimming pool near my hometown in Paris. The place is located in the outskirt of the city of Paris. This is a very good place indeed to swim at any time of the day. The swimming pool has a couple of pool ranges. This is a nice cue card topic for me and I am feeling lucky to have it. This is a place which is opened to public. There is a large area made for swimming purposes only. It was built in the 1960s and served the nation for a long time. It was renovated in 2008. The renovation was necessary for some purposes. The water used in this pool is filtered in several layers. The pool is also preferred by the team of swimmers as well. This is a nice swimming pool and comes with a wide number of facilities. So, it is a preferable place for all types of swimmers. But this is a heaven for the early risers. Most of the people who want to a have swimming early part of the morning come here to serve the purpose. The luxurious changing rooms are one of the attractions for them. Moreover, the water is filtered with ozone instead of chlorine and disinfected with some other process. So, this is safe for the kids as well. Some of the kids come here to swim either with their parents or with their team of swimmers. Swimming is really helpful to maintain a sound health. At present, people of Paris are more health-conscious than the past. So, a notable number of them gather here for swimming purpose and they enjoy swimming. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe a place in your town/city where people can go swimming. 1. The Hampstead Heath Swimming complex is located under London City Corporation. This is a nice place for swimming and this is open to all. The water is a bit cold here and so people come here in the afternoon hours. This is a perfect place for young people. The pond is moderately deep and swimming is thrilling. People basically come here to swim and have fun. Often they come in the evening and pass their leisure hours. 2. The Abbott Park Pool is located on the 95th Street near the Abbott Park in Chicago. This is a perfect place for swimming for all ages of people. The swimming pool is opened to the public. There are 10 lanes for swimming and the depth is around 8 feet. So, this is a great place for everyone. People come here for some reasons. The environment is nice and there are some specific facilities for the disabled people as well. 3. Fitzroy Swimming Pool is a wonderful place to swim in Victoria in Melbourne. This is a public swimming pool. Almost all types of people come here. They enjoy swimming in this pool for so many reasons. The water temperature is standard. Besides, the place is not so much crowded and people who come here enjoy the environment. Based on all the reasons this is an attractive place for swimming. 4. The number of private swimming pools is limited in Vietnam and the one located Six Sense Con Dao is a special one. This is a private swimming pool and mostly reserved for the hotel clients. The inner decoration of the swimming pool is awesome. People go there to enjoy the natural view and have swimming. The bar beside the pool also served the beverage needs of the people present there. 5. The Templer Park Rainforest Retreat has an excellent swimming pool. The resort is located in Selangor in Malaysia. This is a private swimming pool and only has access for those who hire the resort. This is a nice place indeed and comes with several options. The tenants can hold parties and enjoy themselves round the night. Most of the time they spend their time in the pool and enjoy the beautiful nature.
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Describe
a
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place
in your town/city where
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people
can go swimming. You should say: where it
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is is
it open for
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public
what type of
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people
go there and
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explain
why
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people
go there. [You will
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have to
talk about the
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topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
Sample Answer:

Swimming is
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very
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good
activity and provides a wide
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number
of benefits to the swimmers.
So
, I
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often
go for a swimming at Keller swimming
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pool
near my hometown in Paris. The
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place
is
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located
in the outskirt of the city of Paris. This is a
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very
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good
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place
indeed
to
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swim
at any
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time
of the day. The swimming
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pool
has a couple of
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pool
ranges. This is a nice cue card
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topic
for
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me and
I am feeling lucky to have it.

This is a
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place
which
is opened
to
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public
. There is a large area made for swimming
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purposes
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only
. It
was built
in the 1960s and served the nation for a long
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time
. It
was renovated
in 2008. The renovation was necessary for
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some
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purposes
. The
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water
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used
in this
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pool
is filtered
in several layers.
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The
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pool
is
also
preferred by the team of swimmers as
well
.

This is a nice swimming
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pool
and
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comes
with a wide
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number
of facilities.
So
, it is a preferable
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place
for all types of swimmers.
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But
this is a heaven for the early risers. Most of the
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people
who want to a have swimming early part of the morning
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come
here to serve the
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purpose
. The luxurious changing rooms are one of the attractions for them.
Moreover
, the
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water
is filtered
with ozone
instead
of chlorine and disinfected with
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some
other process.
So
, this is safe for the kids as
well
.
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Some of the
kids
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come
here to
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swim
either with their parents or with their team of swimmers.

Swimming is
really
helpful to maintain a sound health. At present,
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people
of Paris are more health-conscious than the past.
So
, a notable
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number
of them gather here for swimming
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purpose and
they
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enjoy
swimming. More
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Ideas
to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card
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topic
:
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Topic
:
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Describe
a
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place
in your town/city where
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people
can go swimming. 1. The
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Hampstead
Heath Swimming complex is
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located
under London City Corporation. This is a nice
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place
for swimming and this is open to all. The
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water
is a bit
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cold
here and
so
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people
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come
here in the afternoon hours. This is a perfect
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place
for young
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people
. The pond is
moderately
deep and swimming is thrilling.
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People
basically
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come
here to
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swim
and have fun.
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Often
they
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come
in the evening and pass their leisure hours.

2. The Abbott Park
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Pool
is
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located
on the 95th Street near the Abbott Park in Chicago. This is a perfect
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place
for swimming for all ages of
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people
. The swimming
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pool
is opened
to the
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public
. There are 10 lanes for swimming and the depth is around
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8 feet
.
So
, this is a great
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place
for everyone.
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People
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come
here for
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some
reasons. The environment is nice and there are
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some
specific facilities for the disabled
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people
as
well
.

3. Fitzroy Swimming
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Pool
is a wonderful
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place
to
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swim
in Victoria in Melbourne. This is a
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public
swimming
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pool
. Almost all types of
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people
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come
here. They
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enjoy
swimming in this
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pool
for
so
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many
reasons. The
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water
temperature is standard.
Besides
, the
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place
is not
so
much crowded and
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people
who
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come
here
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enjoy
the environment. Based on all the reasons this is an attractive
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place
for swimming.

4. The
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number
of private swimming
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pools
is limited
in Vietnam and the one
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located
Six Sense Con
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Dao
is a special one. This is a private swimming
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pool
and
mostly
reserved for the hotel clients. The inner decoration of the swimming
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pool
is awesome.
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People
go there to
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enjoy
the natural view and have swimming. The bar beside the
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pool
also
served the beverage needs of the
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people
present there.

5. The
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Templer
Park Rainforest Retreat has an excellent swimming
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pool
.
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The
resort is
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located
in Selangor in Malaysia. This is a private swimming
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pool
and
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only
has access for those who hire the resort. This is a nice
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place
indeed
and
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comes
with several options. The tenants can hold parties and
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enjoy
themselves round the night. Most of the
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time
they spend their
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time
in the
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pool
and
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enjoy
the
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beautiful
nature.
10Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
97Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a place in your town/city where people can go swimming. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
9 paragraphs
765 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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