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Describe a crowded place you have visited in your country. v.1

Describe a crowded place you have visited in your country. v. 1
Describe a crowded place you have visited in your country. You should say: where it is when you went there with whom you went there and explain how you felt about being there. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: The Chinatown is located in Manhattan in New York. This is one of the most crowded places in the country and a good number of people visit there. This is mostly a neighbourhood in Manhattan and surrounded by some other residential and commercial areas. This is also the home of Chinese people living in New York. It appears as a nice candidate task card for me. I will talk about this place in a brief. I visited this place a couple of months ago. I went there to meet one of my Chinese mates and greet her on her birthday. She studies marketing with us at the university. It was difficult for me to seek out the location at the beginning. The entire area was crowded with lots of people and the majority of them were Chinese. They were speaking in their own language while some of them were speaking English as well. The shops and the sellers were interesting. I went there with Jim, Silvia, Blake, David, and Rocky. In fact, we were invited to the birthday party of our Chinese friend Chunhua. She invited us to attend the party and after her demands, we went there. It was a trouble to find out the location. All the places appeared similar to us and getting the right holding was extremely difficult for us. But finally, we reached Chunhua’s place. It was a nice evening. The feelings were mixed. In fact, it was the very first visit to any Chinese home. So, I could not think what to do or how to respond. Besides, travelling to the crowded place was another exciting event. I have not seen such a crowd before. People were everywhere and all of them were Chinese. At first, I was a bit anxious but gradually everything turned normal. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe the most polite person you have come across in your life. 1. I went to visit the centre of London a few days ago and found the entire area was crowded with hundreds of people. I went there in the morning hour. Everyone was busy to reach their offices and other respective works. I went there alone. Actually, it was a day off for me and I wanted to check the city’s scenario in the rush hour. Honestly, I felt sad. Everyone was rushing to their job places. They did not have a single minute to stop and talk with each other. 2. Millennium Park is one of the most crowded places in Chicago. I went there for a walk. And I went there in the evening. One of my college friends accompanied me on the walk. In fact, we together planned to walk in the park and discuss the upcoming exam. I felt enjoyable during the walk. Actually, this is a nice gathering place. People of all ages were there and were making fun. 3. Elizabeth Bay is a crowded place in Greater Sydney. I went there in the late afternoon. My girlfriend, Shelly, accompanied me there. Actually, I had a plan to enjoy the sunset scene. But I could not imagine that there would be so many people at that time. But I felt good. And the evening was enjoyable. I could not like the excessive noise and it seemed everyone else was enjoying the noise. However, it was a nice experience. 4. My recent visit to a temple in Jaffna in Sri Lanka was interesting. I went there to meet a friend. I went in the early morning and found lots of people were rushing to the temple to complete their religious activities. The large crowd reminded me of God. All of them were there to seek the blessing from God so that they could have a happy life. 5. The Petronas Tower is a crowded place. This is an iconic skyscraper in Malaysia and a landmark for the country too. I went there in the evening. One of my younger cousins accompanied me there. I was amazed at the view. People around the world come here every day. They get their pictures keeping the tower behind them. In fact, the entire area becomes lively for the crowd and it remains until midnight. 6. Tokyo Station is a crowded place in Japan. I went there to get some information to use in my report. I went their alone. In fact, it was an official assignment for me. So, I went in the early morning and tried to get the necessary information. It was an interesting experience for me. I saw people were moving to their destinations using the rides. They were amid rush. Life was buzzing there. I would not have gained such an interesting experience if I did not go there. Your preparation for this cue card topic would help you talk about the following cue card topics as well: 1. Describe a place you have recently been to. 2. Describe a place you visited and did not like. 3. Describe a place where a lot of people gather. 4. Describe a crowded place you know about. 5. Describe a place you have been to which was full of noise. 6. Describe a place you have recently visited and was disappointed about it. 7. Describe a part of the city which has changed greatly.
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Describe
a
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crowded
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place
you have
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visited
in your country. You should say: where it is when you
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went
there with whom you
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went
there and
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explain
how you
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felt
about being there. [You will
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have to
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talk
about the
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topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
Sample Answer:

The Chinatown
is located
in Manhattan in New York. This is one of the most
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crowded
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places
in the country and a
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good
number of
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people
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visit
there. This is
mostly
a
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neighbourhood
in Manhattan and surrounded by
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some
other residential and commercial
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areas
.
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This
is
also
the home of Chinese
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people
living in New York. It appears as a nice candidate task
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card
for me. I will
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talk
about this
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place
in a brief.

I
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visited
this
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place
a couple of months ago.
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I
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went
there to
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meet
one of my Chinese mates and greet her on her birthday. She studies marketing with us at the university. It was difficult for me to seek out the location at the beginning. The entire
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area
was
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crowded
with lots of
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people
and the majority of them were Chinese. They were speaking in their
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own
language while
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some
of them were speaking English as
well
. The shops and the sellers were interesting.

I
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went
there with Jim, Silvia, Blake, David, and Rocky. In
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fact
, we
were invited
to the birthday party of our Chinese friend
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Chunhua
. She invited us to attend the party and after her demands, we
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went
there. It was a trouble to find out the location. All the
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places
appeared similar to us and getting the
right
holding was
extremely
difficult for us.
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But
finally
, we reached
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Chunhua
’s
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place
. It was a nice evening.

The feelings
were mixed
. In
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fact
, it was the
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very
first
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visit
to any Chinese home.
So
, I could not
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think
what to do or how to respond.
Besides
, travelling to the
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crowded
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place
was another exciting
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event
. I have not
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seen
such a crowd
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before
.
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People
were everywhere and all of them were Chinese. At
first
, I was a bit anxious
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but
gradually
everything turned normal. More
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Ideas
to
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talk
about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task
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Card
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topic
:
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Topic
:
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Describe
the most polite person you have
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come
across in your life. 1. I
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went
to
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visit
the
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centre
of London a few days ago and found the entire
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area
was
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crowded
with hundreds of
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people
. I
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went
there in the morning hour. Everyone was busy to reach their offices and other respective works. I
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went
there alone.
Actually
, it was a day off for me and I wanted to
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check
the city’s scenario in the rush hour.
Honestly
, I
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felt
sad. Everyone was rushing to their job
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places
. They did not have a single minute to
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stop
and
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talk
with each other.

2. Millennium Park is one of the most
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crowded
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places
in Chicago. I
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went
there for a
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walk
. And I
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went
there in the evening. One of my college friends accompanied me on the
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walk
. In
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fact
, we together planned to
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walk
in the park and discuss the upcoming exam. I
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felt
enjoyable during the
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walk
.
Actually
, this is a nice gathering
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place
.
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People
of all ages were there and were making fun.

3. Elizabeth Bay is a
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crowded
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place
in Greater Sydney. I
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went
there in the late afternoon. My girlfriend, Shelly, accompanied me there.
Actually
, I had a plan to enjoy the sunset scene.
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But
I could not imagine that there would be
so
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many
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people
at that time.
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But
I
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felt
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good
. And the evening was enjoyable. I could not like the excessive noise and it seemed everyone else was enjoying the noise.
However
, it was a nice experience.

4. My recent
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visit
to a temple in
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Jaffna
in Sri Lanka was interesting. I
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went
there to
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meet
a friend. I
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went
in the early morning and found lots of
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people
were rushing to the temple to complete their religious activities. The large crowd reminded me of God. All of them were there to seek the blessing from God
so
that they could have a happy life.

5. The
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Petronas
Tower is a
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crowded
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place
. This is an iconic skyscraper in Malaysia and a landmark for the country too. I
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
went
there in the evening. One of my younger cousins accompanied me there. I
was amazed
at the view.
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People
around the world
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come
here every day. They
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get
their pictures keeping the tower behind them. In
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fact
, the entire
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area
becomes lively for the crowd and it remains until midnight.

6. Tokyo Station is a
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crowded
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place
in Japan. I
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went
there to
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get
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some
information to
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use
in my report. I
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went
their alone. In
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fact
, it was an official assignment for me.
So
, I
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went
in the early morning and tried to
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get
the necessary information. It was an interesting experience for me. I
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saw
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people
were moving to their destinations using the rides. They were amid rush. Life was buzzing there. I would not have gained such an interesting experience if I did not go there.

Your preparation for this cue
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card
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topic
would
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help
you
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talk
about the following cue
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card
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topics
as
well
:

1.
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Describe
a
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place
you have recently been to.

2.
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Describe
a
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place
you
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visited
and did not like.

3.
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Describe
a
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place
where
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a lot of
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people
gather.

4.
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Describe
a
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crowded
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place
you know
about.

5.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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place
you have been to which was full of noise.

6.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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place
you have recently
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visited
and
was disappointed
about it.

7.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a part of the city which has
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changed
greatly
.
7Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
105Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe a crowded place you have visited in your country. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
18 paragraphs
966 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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