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Describe a couple you know who have a happy marriage. v.1

Describe a couple you know who have a happy marriage. v. 1
Describe a couple you know who have a happy marriage. You should say: who they are how you know them what they usually do together and explain why you think that they are a happily married couple. [You will have to talk about the topic for one to two minutes. You have one minute to think about what you're going to say. You can make some notes to help you if you wish. ] Sample Answer: My parents are the happily married couple and in my opinion, they have the strongest bond I have ever seen. They are the iconic figure to me. People also admire them for their togetherness. They love to spend time together and never have quarrelled severely in their life so far. They are the evergreen couple to everyone around us. This cue card topic is nice and I love to answer it in brief. I know them from my birth. They are my mom and dad. I love them too much. They have cared for me and did a lot of things for me so far. But it took me a long time to know about them. After getting matured enough, I realized that they are the happy couple. They have been married for over 30 years and they have three children. I am the youngest one and the others are also established in their respective sectors. All of us respect them for their mutual understanding. They spend most of the time together. My father works for the government and my mother is a homemaker. Earlier, my mother used to be a school teacher before marriage and she gave up the profession and started her homemaking. When my father returns home after office, he spends most of the remaining time with my mom. Sometimes, they go out for shopping, cinema, and other recreational activities together. They are the happily married couple for some few reasons. The most important thing is that they have a mutual understanding. Before taking any decisions, they plan together and implement the plan smoothly. Moreover, they are peace-loving people. And they have passed rainy days together but never got split in critical situations. Even sometimes, they wait for one another during regular meals. So, I think they are a perfectly happy couple in their life and I think marriage as a divine bonding as I have seen them live in harmony and joy together. More Ideas to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card topic: Topic: Describe a couple you know who have a happy marriage. 1. Mr and Mrs William have a very fortunate marriage. They live opposite door of mine at an apartment block here in Hamilton in New Zealand. They pass their times in different activities. They enjoy movies, go for shopping and much more tasks. They are happily married couples for some reasons. First of all, they have a deep sense of friendship and a great understanding between them. They always try to understand each other and act accordingly. 2. I know Mr and Mrs Rafique as a happily married couple. They run a departmental store in the apartment block I live in a residential area of Qatar. They usually sell things to customers and maintain other activities. They have been married for past eight years and have got two children. They do all the things together which has deepened their relationship. They understand each other and have been leading a happy life. 3. Mr Roberto and his wife Liliana are the best successfully married couples I have ever seen. I met them at a social party and then came in close contact with them for my business purposes. They have a small business in Edinburgh to import raw materials of manufacturing plastic materials. Both of them are deeply engaged in the business. They are a blissfully wedded couple because they share a strong bond. They love each other very much. 4. Mr and Mrs Adaline is the ideal married couple to me. They are my relatives and live in the same town in Dresden in Germany. They usually take part in various activities. They are a gracefully espoused and they have a very good communication. They express themselves clearly and thus no troubles can ambush them suddenly. They make decisions based on their necessities and help each other always. 5. Ulsan is a nice city where my maternal uncle and aunts live. They are a happy couple. In fact, they are considered as the idol in my family. They love to travel and have travelled to various countries together. They also have a commitment to them. This is the outstanding thing that everyone loves them. I believe the secret of their happiness is their commitment to each other.   Your preparation for the cue card topic - "Describe a couple you know who have a happy marriage. " would help you to talk about the following topics as well: 1. Describe someone you know who has a happy marriage. 2. Describe a family, not your own, you know about. 3. Describe a family who lives near your home. 4. Describe someone who has recently got married.
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a
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couple
you
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know
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who
have a
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happy
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marriage
. You should say:
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who
they are how you
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know
them what they
usually
do together and
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explain
why you
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think
that they are a
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happily
married
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couple
. [You will
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have to
talk about the
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topic
for one to two minutes. You have one minute to
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think
about what you're going to say. You can
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make
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some
notes to
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help
you if you wish.
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]
Sample Answer:

My parents are the
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happily
married
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couple
and in my opinion, they have the strongest bond I have ever
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seen
. They are the iconic figure to me.
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People
also
admire them for their togetherness. They
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love
to spend
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time
together and never have quarrelled
severely
in their life
so
far. They are the evergreen
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couple
to everyone around us. This cue card
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topic
is nice and I
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love
to answer it
in brief
.

I
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know
them from my birth. They are my mom and dad. I
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love
them too much. They have cared for me and did
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a lot of
things for me
so
far.
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But
it took me a long
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time
to
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know
about them. After getting matured
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enough
, I realized that they are the
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happy
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couple
. They have
been married
for over 30
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years and
they have three children. I am the youngest one and the others are
also
established in their respective sectors. All of us respect them for their mutual understanding.

They spend most of the
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time
together. My father works for the
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government
and my mother is a homemaker. Earlier, my mother
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used
to be a school teacher
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before
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marriage and
she gave up the profession and
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started
her homemaking. When my father returns home after office, he spends most of the remaining
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time
with my mom.
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Sometimes
, they go out for shopping, cinema, and
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other
recreational
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activities
together.

They are the
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happily
married
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couple
for
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some
few reasons. The most
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important
thing is that they have a mutual understanding.
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Before
taking any decisions, they plan together and implement the plan
smoothly
.
Moreover
, they are peace-loving
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people
. And they have passed rainy days together
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but
never
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got
split in critical situations. Even
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sometimes
, they wait for one another during regular meals.
So
, I
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think
they are a
perfectly
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happy
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couple
in their life and I
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think
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marriage
as a divine bonding as I have
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seen
them
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live
in harmony and joy together. More
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Ideas
to talk about this Cue Card/ Candidate Task Card
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topic
:
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Topic
:
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Describe
a
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couple
you
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know
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who
have a
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happy
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marriage
. 1. Mr and
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Mrs
William have a
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very
fortunate
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marriage
. They
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live
opposite door of mine at an apartment block here in Hamilton in New Zealand. They pass their
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times
in
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different
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activities
.
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They
enjoy movies, go for shopping and much more tasks.
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They
are
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happily
married
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couples
for
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some
reasons.
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First of all
, they have a deep sense of friendship and a great understanding between them. They always try to understand each
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other
and act
accordingly
.

2. I
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know
Mr and
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Mrs
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Rafique
as a
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happily
married
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couple
. They run a departmental store in the apartment block I
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live
in a residential area of Qatar. They
usually
sell things to customers and maintain
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other
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activities
.
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They
have
been married
for past eight years and have
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got
two children.
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They
do all the things together which has deepened their relationship.
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They
understand each
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other
and have been leading a
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happy
life.

3. Mr Roberto and his wife Liliana are the best
successfully
married
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couples
I have ever
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seen
. I met them at a social party and then came in close contact with them for my business purposes. They have a
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small
business in Edinburgh to import raw materials of manufacturing plastic materials. Both of them are
deeply
engaged in the business. They are a
blissfully
wedded
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couple
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because
they share a strong bond. They
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love
each
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other
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very
much.

4. Mr and
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Mrs
Adaline is the
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ideal married
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couple
to me. They are my relatives and
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live
in the same town in Dresden in Germany. They
usually
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take part
in various
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activities
.
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They
are a
gracefully
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espoused and
they have a
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very
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good
communication.
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They
express themselves
clearly
and
thus
no troubles can ambush them
suddenly
.
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They
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make
decisions based on their necessities and
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help
each
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other
The adverb 'always' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
always
.

5.
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Ulsan
is a nice city where my maternal uncle and aunts
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live
. They are a
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happy
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couple
. In fact, they
are considered
as the idol in my family. They
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love
to travel and have travelled to various countries together. They
also
have a commitment to them. This is the outstanding thing that everyone
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loves
them. I believe the secret of their happiness is their commitment to each
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other
.
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Your preparation for the cue card
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topic
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-
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"
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Describe
a
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couple
you
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know
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who
have a
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happy
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marriage
.
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"
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would
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help
you to talk about the following
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topics
as
well
:

1.
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Describe
someone you
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know
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who
has a
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happy
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marriage. 2
.
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Describe
a family, not your
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own
, you
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know
about.

3.
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Describe
a family
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who
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lives
near your home.

4.
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Describe
someone
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who
has recently
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got
married.
12Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
99Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
24Mistakes
Language shapes the way we think, and determines what we can think about.
Benjamin Lee Whorf

IELTS speaking Describe a couple you know who have a happy marriage. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
13 paragraphs
861 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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