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Describe a plant, vegetable or crop that you are familiar with. v.1

Describe a plant, vegetable or crop that you are familiar with. v. 1
Describe a plant, vegetable or crop that you are familiar with. You should say: what it is and where it grows why it is important what you like or dislike about it and explain why this is important for your country.   Model Answer 1: My country has predominantly been an agricultural country even though, in recent times, industrialization has made its way in many parts. So, it is fair to say that I am more than familiar with a few crops that are grown in my country, and paddy/rice is one of them. Talking about rice, this particular crop is pretty popular throughout the whole continent of Asia where the majority of its people eat rice as their main food. By the way, rice is regarded as the first cultivated crop of Asia. In fact, preserved rice grains were found in China around 3000 B. C.   Apart from Asian countries, rice is also grown to some extent in Africa, the Caribbean and Latin American countries, Australia and Europe. Rice cultivation is well-suited to countries and regions with low labour costs and high rainfall, as it is labour-intensive to cultivate and requires ample water. However, rice can be grown practically anywhere, even on a steep hill or mountain area with the use of water-controlling terrace systems. But, before anything, one needs proper seedling of suitable varieties of rice, which suit the environment, in order to cultivate rice. Once the seedlings are grown at a certain height, they are then planted on the soil after preparing it by ploughing and harrowing it properly. Anyway, I like everything about this particular crop because it has lots of usages. Needless to say, when rice is grown, their green look renders the landscape of my country so beautiful that one just would keep looking at it while the wind moves them gently. Besides, they look stunningly beautiful when the paddy sheaf become gold and ready for harvesting. Well, this crop is very important for my country because it meets the demand of the main food and carbohydrate for millions of the population of my country. Besides, still, the majority of the population of my country are dependent on this crop for their livelihood and economic needs. Finally, rice is an important crop in my country also because its straw is predominantly used as a feed for the livestock all over my country.   Sample Answer 2: Paddy is a common type of crop in our country that I am familiar with. Rice is the staple food in our country and our food demand is mainly supported by this crop. Paddy is grown in almost all part of our country. But the north part of the country is particularly the best place to produce the best quality of rice. The paddy plant is grown in a fertile land where plenty of water supplies is available. But it can't grow in water. The people of our country eat rice as our main food and because of this plant we get our food supply. This is the most important crop in our country and probably the most important one as well. If we can't grow plenty of paddy plant we won't have enough rice and as a consequence, we won't have enough food supply for our people. Every nation has its own main crop and their economy is much influenced by it and for our country, paddy has similar influences on our economy. I like this paddy plant as it looks beautiful in the green field. The golden paddy and the green plants look amazing when it dances with the rhythm of the wind. I also like it because it is the main food for us. We are heavily dependent on this plant for our daily food and economic growth. The importance of this plant and the crop it gives is really huge. If we did not have this plant in our country, we would have a real problem fulfilling our daily food needs. The crops we get from the plant are our main crop and supply us our daily needs of foods. For all these reasons I like this plant and the crop it provides.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would also enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as well: Describe a plant grown in your country. Describe a crop grown in your country. Describe a plant near your home. Describe a big plant you have seen. Describe the main crop in your country.
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Describe
a
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plant
, vegetable or
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crop
that you are familiar with. You should say: what it is and where it grows why it is
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important
what you like or dislike about it and
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explain
why this is
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important
for your
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country
.
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Model Answer 1:

My
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country
has
predominantly
been an agricultural
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country
even though
, in recent times, industrialization has made its way in
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many
parts.
So
, it is
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fair
to say that I am more than familiar with a few
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crops
that
are grown
in my
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country
, and paddy/rice is one of them.

Talking about
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rice
, this particular
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crop
is pretty popular throughout the whole continent of Asia where the majority of its
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people
eat
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rice
as their
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main
food.

By the way,
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rice
is regarded
as the
first
cultivated
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crop
of Asia. In fact, preserved
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rice
grains
were found
in China around 3000 B. C.
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Apart from Asian
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countries
,
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rice
is
also
grown to
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some
extent in Africa, the Caribbean and Latin American
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countries
, Australia and Europe.
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Rice
cultivation is
well
-suited to
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countries
and regions with low
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labour
costs and high rainfall, as it is
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labour-intensive
to cultivate and requires ample water.
However
,
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rice
can
be grown
practically
anywhere, even on a steep hill or mountain area with the
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use
of water-controlling terrace systems.

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But
,
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before
anything, one
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needs
proper seedling of suitable varieties of
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rice
, which suit the environment, in order to cultivate
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rice
. Once the seedlings
are grown
at a certain height, they are then planted on the soil after preparing it by
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ploughing
and harrowing it
properly
.

Anyway
, I like everything about this particular
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crop
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because
it has lots of usages.
Needless to say
, when
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rice
is grown
, their green
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look
renders the landscape of my
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country
so
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beautiful
that one
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just
would
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keep
looking at it while the wind
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moves
them
gently
.
Besides
, they
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look
stunningly
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beautiful
when the paddy sheaf become gold and ready for harvesting.

Well
, this
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crop
is
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very
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important
for my
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country
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because
it meets the demand of the
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main
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food
and carbohydrate for millions of the population of my
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country
.
Besides
,
still
, the majority of the population of my
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country
are dependent on this
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crop
for their livelihood and economic
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needs
.
Finally
,
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rice
is an
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important
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crop
in my
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country
also
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because
its straw is
predominantly
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used
as a feed for the livestock all over my
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country
.
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Sample Answer 2:

Paddy is a common type of
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crop
in our
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country
that I am familiar with.
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Rice
is the staple
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food
in our
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country
and our
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food
demand is
mainly
supported by this
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crop
. Paddy
is grown
in almost all part of our
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country
.
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But
the north part of the
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country
is
particularly
the best place to produce the best quality of
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rice
. The paddy
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plant
is grown
in a fertile land where
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plenty
of water supplies is available.
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But
it can't grow in water.

The
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people
of our
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country
eat
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rice
as our
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main
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food
and
because of this
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plant
we
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get
our
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food
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supply
. This is the most
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important
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crop
in our
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country
and
probably
the most
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important
one as
well
. If we can't grow
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plenty
of paddy
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plant
we won't have
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enough
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rice
and as a consequence, we won't have
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enough
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food
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supply
for our
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people
. Every nation has its
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own
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main
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crop
and their economy is much influenced by it and for our
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country
, paddy has similar influences on our economy. I like this paddy
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plant
as it
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looks
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beautiful
in the green field. The golden paddy and the green
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plants
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look
amazing when it dances with the rhythm of the wind. I
also
like it
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because
it is the
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main
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food
for us. We are
heavily
dependent on this
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plant
for our daily
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food
and economic growth.

The importance of this
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plant
and the
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crop
it gives is
really
huge. If we did not have this
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plant
in our
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country
, we would have a real problem fulfilling our daily
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food
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needs
. The
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crops
we
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get
from the
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plant
are our
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main
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crop
and
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supply
us our daily
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needs
of
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foods
. For all these reasons I like this
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plant
and the
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crop
it provides.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would
also
enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as
well
:
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
a
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plant
grown in your
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country
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
a
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crop
grown in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
a
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plant
near your home.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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big
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plant
you have
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seen
.
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Describe
the
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main
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
crop
in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
111Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
9Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a plant, vegetable or crop that you are familiar with. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
10 paragraphs
762 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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