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Describe your favourite place to eat out. v.1

Describe your favourite place to eat out. v. 1
Describe your favourite place to eat out. You should say: where it is & what kinds of food are served there what the décor is like and say what kind of people you think would enjoy dining there and explain why this is your favourite place to eat out.   Model Answer 1: I live in a rather big city which has plenty of good food places and restaurants to enjoy all kinds of food. In fact, there are so many of them that it would take literally years to try all of their food and dishes at least for once. Anyway, I have no intention to talk about trying to taste all those kinds of food, but rather I want to talk about visiting one of my favourite places to try some of my favourite food items and dishes. The name of this favourite place, where I like to eat out, is called “Noel’s eatery”. Physically located at one corner and also on one of the major roads of my hometown, this large restaurant serves all kinds of food which include famous Indian cuisines, Chinese foods, Italian dishes, as well as popular dishes from many western countries. Even though this restaurant is located at one corner of the city, the city dwellers from all over flock into this busy restaurant in order to enjoy their favourite food menu.   Anyway, I mostly visit this place to take my dinners, occasionally. This restaurant offers a sitting arrangement both in its lower space and upper space and attracts more or less all kinds of customers from all age groups and professional backgrounds, but it is more popular among the young people, probably because it is closed to a university and a junior college. By the way, the décor of the restaurant is exquisitely designed with modern architecture, complemented by all kinds of modern furniture and amenities to make anyone feel comfortable. Besides, the elegant looks and designs of the cutleries there can only match those of a star-rated restaurant. Well, this is my favourite place to eat out mainly because it has a rather impressive look. In fact, it allows me to enjoy the grand view of my beautiful city from the top floor during the night time. I like to visit this place also because it has all kinds of food for all seasons and time to stimulate my taste buds. Finally, it is my favourite place because the staffs here are very professional.   Sample Answer 2: The (. . . say a restaurant name. . . ) restaurant is my favourite place to eat out. I often go to this restaurant with my friends and family members both for the delicious foods they serve and for the quiet and healthy environment they offer. This restaurant serves many various types of foods and that's why one can easily pick the foods s/he likes. The main dishes they serve are Thai, Indian, Italian, Mexican, Chinese and local dishes. On special occasions like Christmas and New Year, they serve other special menus as well. This restaurant is a 4 storied building and has a nice parking underground and a garden in front of the ground floor. Just after someone enters the restaurant, the garden gives him a positive impression and a touch of nature. The architecture of the building looks good from the outside and the interior decoration of the building is eye-catching also. The light green colour of the wall, the opulent wooden furniture, the paintings on the wall, and the nice arrangement of the interior make it a nice looking place. The restaurant offers a range of dishes and the prices are reasonable. The middle class, upper class and lower-middle-class people can easily afford to eat here. People who love Indian, Chinese, Tai and Mexican foods and like to be in a nice place with a calm environment should come here and try their foods. Since the environment is quiet and the interior is well-designed, people from all ages would enjoy being here. The playground at the ground floor is specifically built for children's amusement and the kids would also enjoy being in this restaurant.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would also enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as well: Describe a restaurant you like to eat at. Describe a place where you often go with your friends. Describe a meal you enjoy taking. Describe a place in your city. Describe your favourite restaurant. Describe a party you remember.
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Describe
your
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favourite
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place
to
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eat
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kinds
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food
are served
there what the
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décor
is like and say what
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kind
of
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people
you
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think
would
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enjoy
dining there and
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explain
why this is your
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favourite
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place
to
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eat
out.
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Model Answer 1:

I
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live
in a
rather
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big
city which has
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plenty
of
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good
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food
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places
and
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restaurants
to
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enjoy
all
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kinds
of
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food
. In fact, there are
so
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many
of them that it would take
literally
years to try all of their
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food
and
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dishes
at least for once.
Anyway
, I have no intention to
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talk
about trying to taste all those
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kinds
of
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food
,
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but
rather
I want to
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talk
about visiting one of my
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favourite
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places
to try
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some
of my
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favourite
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food
items and dishes.

The name of this
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favourite
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place
, where I like to
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eat
out,
is called
“Noel’s eatery”.
Physically
located at one corner and
also
on one of the major roads of my hometown, this large
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restaurant
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serves
all
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kinds
of
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food
which include
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famous
Indian cuisines, Chinese
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foods
, Italian
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dishes
, as
well
as popular
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dishes
from
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many
western countries.

Even though
this
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restaurant
is located
at one corner of the city, the city dwellers from all over flock into this busy
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restaurant
in order to
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enjoy
their
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favourite
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food
menu.
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Anyway
, I
mostly
visit this
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place
to take my dinners,
occasionally
. This
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restaurant
offers a sitting arrangement both in its lower space and upper space and attracts more or less all
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kinds
of customers from all age groups and professional backgrounds,
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but
it is more popular among the young
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people
,
probably
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because
it
is closed
to a university and a junior college.

By the way, the
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décor
of the
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restaurant
is
exquisitely
designed with modern architecture, complemented by all
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kinds
of modern furniture and amenities to
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make
anyone
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feel
comfortable.
Besides
, the elegant looks and designs of the
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cutleries
there can
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only
match those of a star-rated restaurant.

Well
, this is my
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favourite
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place
to
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eat
out
mainly
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because
it has a
rather
impressive look. In fact, it
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allows
me to
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enjoy
the grand view of my
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beautiful
city from the top floor during the
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night time
. I like to visit this
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place
also
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because
it has all
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kinds
of
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food
for all seasons and time to stimulate my taste buds.
Finally
, it is my
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favourite
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place
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because
the staffs here are
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very
professional.
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Sample Answer 2:

The (.
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.
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.
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say
a
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restaurant
name.
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.
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.
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)
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restaurant
is my
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favourite
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place
to
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eat
out. I
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often
go to this
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restaurant
with my friends and family members both for the delicious
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foods
they
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serve
and for the quiet and healthy environment they offer.

This
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restaurant
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serves
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many
various types of
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foods
and that's why one can
easily
pick the
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foods
s/he likes. The main
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dishes
they
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serve
are Thai, Indian, Italian, Mexican, Chinese and local
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dishes
. On special occasions like Christmas and New Year, they
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serve
other special menus as
well
.

This
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restaurant
is a 4 storied building and has a nice parking underground and a garden in front of the
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ground floor
.
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Just
after someone enters the
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restaurant
, the garden gives him a
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positive
impression and a touch of nature. The architecture of the building looks
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
from the outside and the interior decoration of the building is eye-catching
also
. The light green
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colour
of the wall, the opulent wooden furniture, the paintings on the wall, and the nice arrangement of the interior
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make
it a nice looking place.

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The
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restaurant
offers a range of
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dishes
and the prices are reasonable.
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The
middle
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class
, upper
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class
and lower-middle-
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class
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people
can
easily
afford to
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eat
here.
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People
who
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love
Indian, Chinese, Tai and Mexican
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foods
and like to be in a nice
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place
with a calm environment should
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come
here and try their
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foods
. Since the environment is quiet and the interior is
well
-designed,
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people
from all ages would
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enjoy
being here. The playground at the
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ground floor
is
specifically
built for children's amusement and the kids would
also
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enjoy
being in this
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restaurant
.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to
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talk
about this Cue Card Topic would
also
enable you to
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talk
about the following Cue Card Topics as
well
:
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Describe
a
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restaurant
you like to
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eat
at.
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Describe
a
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place
where you
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often
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go with
your friends.
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Describe
a meal you
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enjoy
taking.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
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place
in your city.
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Describe
your
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favourite
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restaurant
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a party you remember.
16Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
103Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
34Mistakes
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IELTS speaking Describe your favourite place to eat out. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
10 paragraphs
763 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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