Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Describe a film/movie you have never watched but would like to watch. v.1

Describe a film/movie you have never watched but would like to watch. v. 1
Describe a film/movie you have never watched but would like to watch. You should say: what film/movie it is what it is about what makes it a worth-watching film/movie and explain why you would like to watch this film/movie.   Model Answer 1: Well, let’s see. . . I have a number of movie names in my watch list, but I don’t think that I would ever be able to watch all of them in my lifetime, primarily, because they literally come from all the countries of our world. In fact, I even told myself once as a young boy that I would watch at least 5 most popular movies from each country and each language. But, for now, let’s just talk about only one movie which I really like to watch in the near future. The name of this movie is called “Braveheart”. Well, I have never really watched this movie before, so I can’t really be spot on when talking about this movie. But, from what I have learnt about this movie so far from my friends and movie magazines, I can say that it is by far one of the most epic stories ever told. Anyway, this movie is about a Scottish hero, named William Wallace, who leads a revolt against the British rule and oppressions during the 14th century in order to free Scotland from the British rule. But, Ironically, Wallace's goal of independence for Scotland is thwarted by the region's own aristocrats, a well-treated bunch with investments in England. Betrayed by his high-born countrymen, Wallace assassinates a number of them before he's captured and handed over to the English for public torture and execution. Wallace is unyielding to the end, and his example shames the Scottish prince Robert the Bruce to lead a larger, more successful revolt later in Wallace's name. And, that pretty much sums up the story of the movie. Anyway, I would like to watch this movie, mainly because the film was the big winner at the 68th Annual Academy Awards, where it won six Oscars (including Best Picture, Best Director and Best Cinematography). By the way, very few Hollywood movies have achieved such feat. I want to watch this movie also because there is a few historical truth in this movie as far as the issue of the past relationship between the British people and Scottish people is concerned.   Sample Answer 2: I have a must-watch list of movies and I would like to watch them all over time. One such movie that I would like to see is 'Citizen Kane'. This movie was directed, co-written, produced and starring by Orson Welles who is considered to be one of the greatest producers of all time. I have heard and read reviews of this movie and a few times asked the CD/ DVD rent shops if they have this movie or not. Somehow I am yet to enjoy this movie. This is an American drama film that was released in 1941. This film is particularly critically acclaimed because of some innovations like cinematography, music and narrative structure. According to many reliable reviews and lists, it is considered to be the greatest film ever made in Hollywood. Though I have not watched it, I have read the storyline in rotten tomato and IMDB. The story examines the life and legacy of Foster Kane. In the story, the wealthy newspaper publisher Kane dies while holding a snow globe and utters 'Rosebud', while living alone in his vast estate. The globe fell down from his hand and smashes and his dead becomes sensational news around the world. A newspaper reporter tries to find out about his life and in particular to reveal the meaning behind his last word 'Rosebud'. He then starts interviewing Kane's friends and associates and Kane's story unfolds in a series of flashbacks. The journalist meets a person who served as Kane's guardian during his childhood. He then learns about Kane's childhood and later from Kane's business manager to learn more about him. Flashbacks reveal that Kane spent his childhood in poverty and then later he inherits a property that his mother got by chance. At the age of 25, he enters into the newspaper business and finally takes control of the newspaper. He finally joined a political party and a dispute ruined his political career. Kane spends his last years in a solitary estate and there was no relative or wife around. There he dies and his butler hears Kane says "Rosebud" as his last word in his life. After his death, his vast amounts of belongings are classified. During this time the reporter thinks that he is unable to solve the mystery of the 'Rosebud' and thinks that would remain unsolved forever. He concluded that Kane was the man who archived everything he wanted and lost them all. Maybe Rosebud is the thing he could not get or lost. At the end of the movie the mystery was solved for the audiences and it reveals that Rosebud was the name of the sledge from Kane's childhood which was actually an illusion to the only time of his life when he was truly happy. The sledge was considered to be a piece of junk and was burned in a basement by Xanadu's departing staff. This was a truly amazing film that I thoroughly enjoyed. The plot, the storyline, the acting and production and making of the film was exemplary and I would like to watch it as soon as I can.       Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would also enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as well: Describe your favourite movie. Describe a movie that impressed you. Describe a movie or cinema you have recently watched. Describe a movie you have watched in a movie theatre. Describe a worth watching movie.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
a film/movie you have never
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watched
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
would like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
. You should say: what film/movie it is what it is about what
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
makes
it a worth-watching film/movie and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
explain
why you would like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
this film/movie.
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
 
Model Answer 1:

Well
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
’s
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
Don't put a space before the full stop
.
I have a number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
names
in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
list,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
I don’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
think
that I would ever be able to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
all of them in my lifetime,
primarily
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
they
literally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
from all the countries of our world. In fact, I even
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
myself once as a young boy that I would
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
at least 5 most popular
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movies
from each country and each language.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
’s
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
talk about
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
one
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
which I
really
like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
in the near future.

The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
name
of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
is called
“
Possible spelling mistake found.
Braveheart
”.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Well
, I have never
really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watched
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
,
so
I can’t
really
be spot on when talking about this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
, from what I have
Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.
learnt
about this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
so
far from my friends and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
magazines, I can say that it is by far one of the most epic
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
stories
ever
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
.

Anyway
, this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
is about a Scottish hero, named William Wallace,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
leads a revolt against the British
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
and oppressions during the 14th century in order to free Scotland from the British
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
rule
.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
,
Ironically
, Wallace's goal of independence for Scotland
is thwarted
by the region's
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
aristocrats, a
well
-treated bunch with investments in England. Betrayed by his high-born countrymen, Wallace assassinates a number of them
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
before
he's captured and handed over to the English for public torture and execution. Wallace is unyielding to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
, and his example shames the Scottish prince Robert the Bruce to lead a larger, more successful revolt later in Wallace's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
name
. And, that pretty much sums up the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
story
of the movie.

Anyway
, I would like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
,
mainly
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
the film was the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
winner at the 68th Annual Academy Awards, where it won six Oscars (including Best Picture, Best Director and Best Cinematography). By the way,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
few Hollywood
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movies
have achieved such feat. I want to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
also
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
there is a few historical truth in this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
as far as the issue of the past relationship between the British
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
and Scottish
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
If 'people' is plural here, don't use the third-person singular verb.
is
concerned.
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
 
Sample Answer 2:

I have a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
must
-
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
list of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movies
and I would like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
them all over
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
. One such
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
that I would like to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
is 'Citizen Kane'. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
was directed
, co-written, produced and starring by Orson Welles
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
is considered
to be one of the greatest producers of all
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
. I have heard and read reviews of this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
and a few
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
times
asked the CD/ DVD rent shops if they have this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
or not. Somehow I am
yet
to enjoy this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
. This is an American drama film that
was released
in 1941. This film is
particularly
critically
acclaimed
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
innovations like cinematography, music and narrative structure. According to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
reliable reviews and lists, it
is considered
to be the greatest film ever made in Hollywood.

Though I have not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watched
it, I have read the storyline in rotten tomato and IMDB. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
story
examines the life and legacy of Foster Kane. In the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
story
, the wealthy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspaper
publisher Kane
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
dies
while holding a snow globe and utters 'Rosebud', while living alone in his vast estate. The globe fell down from his hand and smashes and his dead becomes sensational news around the world. A
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspaper
reporter tries to find out about his life and
in particular
to reveal the meaning behind his last word 'Rosebud'.

He then
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
starts
interviewing Kane's friends and associates and Kane's
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
story
unfolds in a series of flashbacks. The journalist meets a person
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
served as Kane's guardian during his childhood. He then learns about Kane's childhood and later from Kane's business manager to learn more about him. Flashbacks reveal that Kane spent his childhood in poverty and then later he inherits a property that his mother
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
got
by chance. At the age of 25, he enters into the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspaper
business and
finally
takes control of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
newspaper
. He
finally
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
joined
a political party and a dispute ruined his political career. Kane spends his last years in a solitary estate and there was no relative or wife around. There he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
dies
and his butler hears Kane says
Use a smart opening quote here: "“".
"
Rosebud
Use a smart closing quote here: "”".
"
as his last word in his life.

After his death, his vast amounts of belongings
are classified
. During this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
the reporter
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thinks
that he is unable to solve the mystery of the 'Rosebud' and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thinks
that would remain unsolved forever. He concluded that Kane was the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
man
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
who
archived everything he wanted and lost them all. Maybe Rosebud is the thing he could not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
or lost. At the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
the mystery
was solved
for the audiences and it reveals that Rosebud was the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
name
of the sledge from Kane's childhood which was
actually
an illusion to the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
time
of his life when he was
truly
happy. The sledge
was considered
to be a piece of junk and
was burned
in a basement by Xanadu's departing staff.

This was a
truly
amazing film that I
thoroughly
enjoyed. The plot, the storyline, the acting and production and making of the film was exemplary and I would like to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
watch
it as
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
soon
as I can.
Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
     
Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would
also
enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
well
:
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
your
Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.
favourite
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
that impressed you.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
or cinema you have recently
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watched
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
you have
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watched
in a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
Possible spelling mistake. 'theatre' is British English.
theatre
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
Describe
a worth watching
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
movie
.
9Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
67Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a film/movie you have never watched but would like to watch. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
10 paragraphs
985 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Similar posts


Recent posts