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Describe a plant grown in your country. v.1

Describe a plant grown in your country. v. 1
Describe a plant grown in your country. You should say: what the plant is where it is grown why you like or dislike it and explain why this is an important plant.   Model Answer 1: My country has rather a fertile land, so, naturally different kinds of plants are easily grown on its soil. Needless to say, some of these plants are rather useful, and among them, I would like to talk about one plant, which is not only popular and useful in my country, but also in many other parts of the world, especially the Asia and the African continent. The name of this plant is more popularly known as “Mehndi” (or “Heena” tree in plain English) in my part of the world. Originally coming from the Egypt, Lawsonia inermis (the scientific name of Heena) is a flowering plant that can grow about 12 to 15 feet high. The plant grows best in heat up to 120-degree Fahrenheit temperature. In fact, this is the perfect temperature at which the plant can contain more dye. However, it may wilt in temperatures below 50-degree Fahrenheit. Further, it also grows better in dry soil than damp soil. As far as the leaves of this plant are concerned, they are in opposite decussate pairs and vary in sizes from approximately 2 to 4 cm. long. Its flowers are fragrant, produced in conical panicles that are 1040 cm long, 5 millimeter in diameter, and have four white petals each. The fruit is a dry capsule 68 mm diameter, containing numerous 12. 5 mm seeds. By the way, this plant is grown, literally anywhere from a backyard and empty field to roof top. Anyway, I like this plant because it has lots of usages but it doesn’t exactly much effort or time to grow. Besides, it doesn’t really take much space to grow. Anyway, this is an important plant, mainly because its paste is used to paint different body parts of women on occasions like wedding ceremony, music and dance party, during important rites of passage, and in other times of joyous celebrations. Besides, this plant can also be used for medicinal purposes to treat ailments like headaches, stomach pains, burns, open wounds, fever, and even the prevention of hair loss! Indeed, it is an important plant to grow.   Sample Answer 2: Paddy plant or rice plant is a very common plant which is grown in our country. The farmers of our country cultivate it and it is grown in most of the places in our country. If you go to the countryside in the autumn season, you will find this paddy plant is dancing with the wind. This plant grows well in the fertile land and needs a good supply of water and sunlight. Rice is our chip food and we get rice from this paddy plant. The paddy plant is a medium side plant which is thin and the leaves and body of this plant are green. Usually, the rice seed is green in early states and becomes yellow when it is ripe. Our economy heavily depends on our rice production. Our environment, soil, water and fields are in favour of producing a large quantity of rice each year. Since I live in a city now, I don't see these plants here but in my childhood whenever I went to visit our village, I found this plant in every field. Mile after mile farmers cultivate paddy plants and wish to get a good quantity of rice. These paddy plants are beautiful and create harmony with the wind if you hear closely. The dancing of this plant with the wind is something that would simply create a magical hallucination. I also like it because this plant provides us with rice which is our staple food. The taste and food value are quite good and it is our main crop. Every part of this plant has its usefulness. Our economy has a good dependency on the production of rice which we get from this plant. In our country, this is probably the most important plant we grow.   Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would also enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as well: Describe a common plant in your country. Describe a tall plant you have seen. Describe crop grown in your country. Describe a  flower-plant you have at your home.
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Describe
a
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plant
grown in your
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country
. You should say: what the
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plant
is where it
is grown
why you like or dislike it and
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explain
why this is an
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important
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plant
.
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Model Answer 1:

My
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country
has
rather
a fertile land,
so
,
naturally
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different
kinds of
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plants
are
easily
grown on its
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soil
.
Needless to say
,
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some
of these
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plants
are
rather
useful, and among them, I would like to talk about one
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plant
, which is not
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only
popular and useful in my
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country
,
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but
also
in
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many
other
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parts
of the world,
especially
the Asia and the African continent.

The name of this
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plant
is more
popularly
known as “
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Mehndi
” (or “
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Heena
” tree in plain English) in my
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part
of the world.
Originally
coming from the Egypt,
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Lawsonia
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inermis
(the scientific name of
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Heena
) is a flowering
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plant
that can
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grow
about 12 to
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15 feet
high. The
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plant
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grows
best in heat up to 120-degree Fahrenheit temperature. In fact, this is the perfect temperature at which the
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plant
can contain more dye.
However
, it may wilt in temperatures below 50-degree Fahrenheit.
Further
, it
also
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grows
better in dry
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soil
than damp
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soil
. As far as the
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leaves
of this
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plant
are concerned
, they are in opposite
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decussate
pairs and vary in sizes from approximately 2 to 4 cm. long.

Its flowers are fragrant, produced in conical panicles that are 1040 cm long, 5
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millimeter
in diameter, and have four white petals each. The fruit is a dry capsule 68 mm diameter, containing numerous 12. 5 mm seeds. By the way, this
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plant
is grown
,
literally
anywhere from a backyard and empty field to roof top.
Anyway
, I like this
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plant
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because
it has lots of usages
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but
it doesn’t exactly much effort or time to
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grow
.
Besides
, it doesn’t
really
take much space to grow.

Anyway
, this is an
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important
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plant
,
mainly
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because
its paste is
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used
to paint
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different
body
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parts
of women on occasions like wedding ceremony, music and dance party, during
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important
rites of passage, and in other times of joyous celebrations.
Besides
, this
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plant
can
also
be
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used
for medicinal purposes to treat ailments like headaches, stomach pains, burns, open wounds, fever, and even the prevention of hair loss!
Indeed
, it is an
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important
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plant
to
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grow
.
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Sample Answer 2:

Paddy
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plant
or
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rice
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plant
is a
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very
common
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plant
which
is grown
in our
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country
. The farmers of our
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country
cultivate it and it
is grown
in most of the places in our
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country
. If you go to the countryside in
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the autumn season
, you will find this paddy
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plant
is dancing with the wind. This
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plant
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grows
well
in the fertile land and needs a
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good
supply of water and sunlight.
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Rice
is our chip
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food and
we
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get
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rice
from this paddy plant.

The paddy
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plant
is a medium side
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plant
which is thin and the
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leaves
and body of this
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plant
are green.
Usually
, the
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rice
seed is green in early states and becomes yellow when it is ripe. Our economy
heavily
depends on our
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rice
production. Our environment,
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soil
, water and fields are in
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favour
of producing a large quantity of
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rice
each year.

Since I
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live
in a city
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now
, I don't
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see
these
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plants
here
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but
in my childhood whenever I went to visit our village, I found this
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plant
in every field. Mile after mile farmers cultivate paddy
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plants
and wish to
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get
a
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good
quantity of
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rice
. These paddy
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plants
are
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beautiful
and create harmony with the wind if you hear
closely
. The dancing of this
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plant
with the wind is something that would
simply
create a magical hallucination.

I
also
like it
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because
this
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plant
provides us with
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rice
which is our staple food. The taste and food value are quite
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good
and it is our main crop. Every
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part
of this
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plant
has its usefulness. Our economy has a
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good
dependency on the production of
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rice
which we
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get
from this
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plant
. In our
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country
, this is
probably
the most
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important
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plant
we
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grow
.
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Similar Cue Card Topics Your ability to talk about this Cue Card Topic would
also
enable you to talk about the following Cue Card Topics as
well
:
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
a common
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plant
in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
country
.
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
Describe
a tall
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plant
you have
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seen
.
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Describe
crop grown in your
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country
.
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Describe
a
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flower-plant you have at your home.
18Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
82Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
16Mistakes

IELTS speaking Describe a plant grown in your country. v. 1

Speaking
  American English
9 paragraphs
740 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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